专题07 书面表达12篇-冲刺2024年中考英语必考题型终极预测（深圳专用）

这是一份专题07 书面表达12篇-冲刺2024年中考英语必考题型终极预测（深圳专用），共22页。试卷主要包含了深圳是一座“爱阅之城”等内容，欢迎下载使用。

要点：
1. 名称：武术社；京剧社；……（至少补充1个）
2. 内容： ①练习中国武术；②学唱京剧；③……
3. 推荐理由： ①丰富课余生活；②……；③……
要求：
1. 80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3. 可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；
4. 标点正确，书面整洁。
参考词汇：武术社Wushu Club 京剧社Peking Opera Club 丰富enrich
Dear Jhn,
I am excited t have yu with us next mnth and I knw yu are very interested in the clubs in ur schl._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Lk frward t meeting yu sn!
Yurs,
Li Hua
2．（2023·广东深圳·统考二模）2月19日，深圳马拉松比赛在深圳市民中心广场鸣枪开跑，来自世界各地的参赛选手踏上赛道奋力奔跑。最终，中国选手何杰夺得冠军，这也是深马举办八届以来首次有中国选手夺得全程马拉松男子组冠军。假如你是你们学校英语校报的记者，请报道本次赛事并发表自己的感想。内容包括：
要求：
1.字数在80词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.必须包含以上全部要点，可以适当发挥；
3.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
4.表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范。
提示词: image形象; persistence坚持不懈; Shenzhen Civic Centre Square深圳市民中心
In recent years, mre and mre cities have been keen n hlding marathns.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．（2023·广东深圳·统考二模）假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Tny即将在暑假来深圳研学旅行。请你根据以下提示给他写一封邮件，帮助他适应在深圳的生活。
内容提示：
（1）欢迎他来深研学旅行；
（2）你的建议：学习一些中国习俗，如使用筷子等；购物时可以使用移动支付；……
（3）你对他的祝福。
要求：
（1）80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数内；
（2）文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
（3）可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；
（4）标点正确，书面整洁。
参考词汇：研学旅行 study trip 移动支付 mbile payment
Dear Tny,
I am s glad that ___________________________________________________________________________
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Yurs,
Li Hua
4．（2023·广东深圳·校考二模）近期，深圳市电视台对中学生闲暇活动的安排进行了采访及调查，假如你是学生代表李华，请用英语写一篇短文介绍你和同学们的闲暇活动开展情况。
要点提示：
1. 内容：体育，如跑步；艺术，如唱歌绘画；劳动，如做家务、参加志愿者活动；其它，如阅读……
2. 好处：休息放松，学习新知识，学会新技能，结交新朋友等。
3. 个人观点：……
要求：
1. 词数80词左右（首句已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 要点提示均须涉及，可适当增加内容；
3. 不用真实姓名、校名、地名。
参考词语：vlunteer, relax, knwledge, skill
Free-time Activities
Free-time activities are gd fr us teenagers ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5．（2023·广东深圳·南山实验教育集团南海中学校考二模）传统的长途旅行常常让人疲惫不堪，越来越多的人选择在自家周边方便轻松地度过周末。假如你是深圳市南山区的一名九年级学生李华，请在班上给同学们介绍一些南山区的好去处以及可开展的活动，并呼吁大家多出门走走。
要点：1. 大沙河公园（Dashahe Park）：野餐、放风筝，……
2. 华侨城湿地公园（OCT Wetland Park）：观鸟、骑自行车，……
3. 其他地点：……，……（自行补充至少2项活动）
要求：1. 词数80—100词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 要点齐全，可适当发挥；
3. 条理清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范整洁；
4. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
Nwadays mre and mre peple chse t d “staycatin”. Let me intrduce sme f the attractins in Nanshan District t yu. _______________________________________________________________________________
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6．（2023·广东深圳·统考二模）2023年春节期间，深圳宝安区举办了首届“民族美食嘉年华”活动，将民族美食融入新春文化。假如你是李华，你在春节期间参加了这次美食嘉年华。请根据以下提示，给你的外教Mr. Smith写一封邮件，介绍此次活动。
要点：
1. 时间地点：2023年1月15日，宝安万达广场
2. 内容：
①品尝不同民族的美食；②欣赏少数民族舞蹈表演；③……（请自行补充两点内容）
3. 你的感受：……（请自行补充两点感受）
要求：
1. 80-100词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3. 可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；
4. 标点正确，书面整洁。
参考词汇：
美食嘉年华Fd Carnival
少数民族ethnic minrity
万达广场Wanda Plaza
Dear Mr. Smith,
During the Spring Festival, we held a Fd Carnival in Shenzhen.
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Yurs,
Li Hua
7．（2023·广东深圳·统考二模）深圳是一座“爱阅之城”。假如你是李华，你的外教Sam 发来一封邮件，说他对光明区随处可见的24小时书香亭 (self-service library) 很感兴趣，请你给他写一封回信，向他介绍书香亭并邀请他参加书香亭推广活动。
1. 介绍书香亭：
1) 光明区有71台书香亭，每台可放置约200本书；
2) 可以从书香亭拿到 网上预借的图书；
3) ……
2. 你对书香亭的看法；
3. 活动安排：
1) 时间：本周六下午3点；
2) 地点：光明区图书馆。
要求：
1. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数内；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3. 可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；
4. 标点正确，书面整洁。
提示词： 预借reserve; 推广prmtin
Dear Sam,
I am s happy t receive yur email.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I am lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
8．（2023·广东深圳·统考二模）为了发展学生兴趣爱好、丰富职业体验，你校成功举办了题为 “Experiencing Future Jb” 的职业体验游园活动。学校英文报就此活动展开征文比赛。请你根据以下内容投稿。
1. 场景描写：① 多种职业 ②……
2. 体验描述：① 你的选择 ②……
3. 体验感悟：
注意：
1. 词数80词左右（开头已经给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 要点齐全，可适当发挥；
3. 条理清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范；
4. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
参考词汇：career职业；game tester游戏测试师；astrnaut宇航员；fitness instructr健身教练
Last week, the activity “Experiencing Future Jb” was held in ur schl.

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9．（2023·广东深圳·校考一模）深圳是座现代化的花园城市，致力于率先实现碳中和。为了实现这个目标，我们每个人都应该为此尽一份力。假如你是李华，请你写一篇英语短文向学校英文报投稿，写一封倡议信，介绍你的想法和做法并号召大家都积极行动起来，为保护环境而贡献自己的力量。
要点：
1）保护环境的意义。
2）我们能够做些什么：比如①做环保型消费者；②节约水电……
3）号召大家参加此活动。
要求：
1）词数80左右（开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数）；
2）要点齐全，可适当发挥；
3）条理清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范；
4）文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
Dear fllw students,
We have nly ne Earth, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Li Hua
10．（2023·广东深圳·校联考二模）目前我国生态环境保护任务依然艰巨，生态环境部表示：2023年将积极推进美丽中国建设实践，扎实推动绿色低碳高质量发展，深入打好污染防治攻坚战，扎实推进蓝天保卫战、碧水保卫战、净土保卫战，加强固体废物和新污染物治理，深入推进“无废城市”高质量建设，切实维护生态环境安全，加快健全现代环境治理体系。假设你校的英语校报正在征集有关“环保周”的文章，请你根据以下提示写一篇关于环保的英语短文。
要求：
1. 内容完整，条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，语法正确；
2. 词数不少于80词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名和校名；
4. 标点正确，卷面整洁。
参考词汇：rubbish 垃圾 envirnmental prtectin 环保
As is knwn t all, the envirnment arund us is getting wrse and wrse.
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11．（2023·广东深圳·统考一模）为丰富校园生活，学校的英语俱乐部决定举办以“最美深圳”(Amazing Shenzhen) 为主题的英文绘本大赛。请你根据以下提示，写一则活动通知。
要点：
1. 参赛对象：全校学生
2. 提交时间：下周五上午12:00前
3. 绘本内容：选择深圳这座城市的任一方面，如发展历程、景点、文化、志愿服务等。
4. 参赛要求：①绘本必须原创；②……（至少补充一点）
参考词汇：内容cntent；原创的riginal
要求：
1. 词数80左右（开头已经给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 要点齐全，可适当发挥；
3. 条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范；
4. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
Ntice
In rder t enrich students’ campus life, the schl English club decides t hld an English picture bk cmpetitin with the theme “Amazing Shenzhen”. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
English Club
12．（2023·广东深圳·统考一模）《湿地公约》第十四届缔约方大会在我国成功召开。深圳作为重要的湿地城市，也积极响应公约（Wetlands Cnventin）号召。假如你是学生李华，是学校环保俱乐部一员，你们俱乐部举行了“湿地保护节”（Wetland Prtectin Festival）。请根据以下提示给你的外国朋友Mike写一封邮件，介绍此次活动。
要点：1.目的：见证深圳湿地建设的成就；提升环保意识
2.内容：①前往深圳红树林生态公园观赏红树林和鸟类；②深圳湿地摄影展；③……
3.你的感受：①……②……
要求：1.80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3.可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；
4.标点正确，书面整节。
参考词汇：witness 见证；awareness 意识；mangrve frest红树林；Shenzhen Mangrve Eclgical Park深圳红树林生态公园；
Dear Mike,
As an imprtant wetland city, Shenzhen is making effrts t answer the call f the Wetlands Cnventin.
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Yurs,
Li Hua
参考答案：
1．例文
Dear Jhn,
I am excited t have yu with us next mnth and I knw yu are very interested in the clubs in ur schl.
There are many clubs in ur schl. Fr example, yu can jin Wushu Club t practice Chinese martial arts. Yu can als jin the Beijing Opera Club t learn hw t sing Beijing Opera crrectly. Of curse, yu can als jin the Paper Cutting club t learn Chinese Paper Cutting. I wuld like t recmmend the Paper Cutting club t yu. Paper Cutting is ne f the traditinal cultural frms in China. Yu can cut ut varius flwers, birds, fish, and beasts frm a simple piece f paper.
If yu cme, yu will definitely like it. By participating in these clubs, nt nly can we enrich ur leisure life, but als we can learn sme skills.
Lk frward t meeting yu sn!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，向对方介绍你学校里的社团；
第二步，推荐对方加入一个社团并介绍推荐理由；
第三步，最后表达对方加入后可以收获的东西。
[亮点词汇]
①fr example比如
②wuld like t d想要做
③participate in参加
[高分句型]
If yu cme, yu will definitely like it.（if引导的条件状语从句）
2．例文：
In recent years, mre and mre cities have been keen n hlding marathns. With the help f the China’s Refrm and Opening-up, Shenzhen is becming appular city. Nw I wuld like t have a brief intrductin f Shenzhen Internatinal Marathn n February 19th. Marathn is ppular amng Shenzhen, even acrss the area f Asia. Many peple take part in it.
The purpse f this activity is t shw the gd city shape f Shenzhen. What’s mre, it can help peple develp the habit f lving sprts and keeping fit. The rute started and ended at the same place—Shenzhen Civic Centre Square. It was inspiring that HeJie, a cntestant frm China, wn the first prize. And it was the first time that Chinese cntestant wn the champin f the man’s marathns.
I really think that we shuld learn frm HeJie f his spirit f persistence, and we shud never give up. Furthermre, as far as I am cncerned, everyne shuld d sprts and keep healthy. Marathn is nt nly an activity t run, but als a chance fr peple t appreciate the beauty f Shenzhen and shw their lve t this mdern city. I hpe yu can cme and lve ur city.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍深圳马拉松活动；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“活动目的、活动详情、感受”几个方面重点介绍此次马拉松活动的细节；
第三步，书写结语。表达希望大家多运动，保持身体健康。
[亮点词汇]
① be keen n 喜欢
② is ppular amng 受欢迎
③ give up 放弃
[高分句型]
① It is inspiring that HeJie, a cntestant frm China, wn the first prize. （it is inspiring that...某事是很激励人心的）
② Marathn is nt nly an activity t run, but als a chance fr peple t appreciate the beauty f Shenzhen and shw their lve t this mdern city.（nt als...不仅……而且……）
3．(One pssible versin)
Dear Tny,
I am s glad that yu are ging t have a study trip in Shenzhen this summer hliday. T help yu live a happy and safe life here, I have sme advice fr yu.
First, yu can learn sme Chinese custms, such as hw t use chpsticks, hw t greet peple and s n. Secnd, when yu shp, yu can pay with mbile payment. Besides, the traffic rules are different frm thse in the UK. The drivers drive n the right side f the rad, s when yu crss the rad, yu shuld lk left.
I hpe that yu can have a gd time in Shenzhen. Lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并结合要点进行适当的发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，欢迎他来深圳进行研学旅行；
第二步，具体介绍给他的一些建议；
第三步，表达对他的祝福。
[亮点词汇]
① and s n 等等
② be different frm 与……不同
③ have a gd time 玩得开心
④ lk frward t 期盼
[高分句型]
① T help yu live a happy and safe life here, I have sme advice fr yu.（不定式作目的状语）
② First, yu can learn sme Chinese custms, such as hw t use chpsticks, hw t greet peple and s n.（疑问词+不定式）
4．例文
Free-time Activities
Free-time activities are gd fr us teenagers. Different peple have different free-time activities, and I’d like t share ur activities with yu.
Firstly, bth my friends and I pay much attentin t physical health, s we ften d sprts tgether, such as running, playing basketball and s n. These activities can als help t relax urselves. Secndly, we are fnd f singing and drawing, which help us make mre friends. Thirdly, labur is the surce f happiness. I usually help my mther d sme husewrk and jin in sme vlunteer activities in rder t help peple in need. At the same time, I can learn sme new skills. Finally, reading is ne f my hbbies, and I can always learn sme knwledge by reading.
In a wrd, free-time activities can nt nly enrich ur life, but als help us learn smething new.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，所需要点已经给出；
②时态：一般现在时为主；
③提示：写作要点提示已经给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，并适当补充发挥，注意语句的通顺，使用正确的词汇和句型，使得行文连贯有逻辑。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，以“想和你分享我们的活动”引出下文；
第二步，按照要点提示，从体育，艺术，劳动等方面阐述自己的闲暇活动，并注意补充内容，可使用Firstly，Secndly，Thirdly等词语使得文章连贯，并注意说明这些活动的好处；
第三步，结尾表达自己的看法，表示自己对闲暇活动的赞同。
[亮点词汇]
①share sth with sb和某人分享某物
②pay much attentin t很注意
③be fnd f喜爱
④enrich ur life丰富我们的生活
[高分句型]
①We are fnd f singing and drawing, which help us make mre friends.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
5．例文
Nwadays mre and mre peple chse t d “staycatin”. Let me intrduce sme f the attractins in Nanshan District t yu.
First, yu can g t the Dashahe Park. It is beautiful fr its natural scenery. Yu can have picnics with yur family r friends there. When the weather is fine, yu can fly kites and play games with yur children. There are lts f ther activities that yu are interested in.
Secnd, OCT Wetland Park is als a gd place t relax. There are all kinds f birds. Yu can g bird-watching with yur classmates. When yu g cycling alng the river, yu can see fascinating cluds in the sky and enjy the sunset. It is great.
Yu can visit sme places f interest and take beautiful phts in Nanshan District. It will help yu relax yurselves as well as have fun.
【详解】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为材料作文；
②时态：本文为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生不要遗漏“信息提示”中大沙河公园中野餐、放风筝；华侨城湿地公园中观鸟、骑自行车等要点介绍，并自行补充至少2项活动，注意保证选词准确，条理清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范整洁。
［写作步骤］
第一步，表明写作意图。以“介绍深圳市南山区的景点来度过轻松的周末，”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。大沙河公园中野餐、放风筝；华侨城湿地公园中观鸟、骑自行车等要点介绍，和其他一些活动；
第三步，书写结语。南山区还有更多其他景点可供放松和玩乐。
［亮点词汇］
①staycatin居家度假
②attractin有吸引力的（事物）
③scenery风景
④fascinating极有吸引力的；迷人的
［高分句型］
①There are lts f ther activities that yu are interested in.(that 引导定语从句)
②It will help yu relax yurselves as well as have fun.(as well as和……一样；除……以外还）
6．例文：
Dear Mr. Smith,
During the Spring Festival, we held a Fd Carnival in Shenzhen. It was wnderful and I wuld like t tell yu sme details abut it.
The Fd Carnival was held at Wanda Plaza in Baan, n January 15, 2023. Peple celebrated the Spring Festival by enjying delicius fd. Firstly, we tasted different ethnic fd frm all ver the cuntry, such as Tibetan fd and drinks and Mia fd. Then, we enjyed a dance shw frm Ethnic minrities. The dancers wre beautiful clthes. The perfrmance was s fantastic that it attracts many audiences. Als, there was a DIY activity which we culd jin in and make handicrafts by urselves. What’s mre, there were many lanterns and peple culd try t slve the puzzles n the lanterns.
The carnival was really interesting and unfrgettable. We can experience clrful Chinese culture in a different way. I hpe yu can attend the Fd Carnival next year.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件，属于电子邮件写作；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：信件开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接书信开头，引出话题；
第二步，根据要点提示介绍活动的时间、地点，以及活动的具体内容，需要自行补充至少两个活动内容，可列举具体的事例；
第三步，抒发此活动带来的感受并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①frm all ver the cuntry来自全国各地
②slve the puzzles n the lanterns猜灯谜
[高分句型]
①The perfrmance was s fantastic that it attracts many audiences.（s…that引导结果状语从句）
②Als, there was a DIY activity which we culd jin in and make handicrafts by urselves.（which引导限制性定语从句）
7．例文：
Dear Sam,
I am s happy t receive yur email. Knwing that yu are interested in the self-service libraries in Guangming District, I am writing t tell yu smething abut it. There are 71 self-service libraries in Guangming and each f them can hld abut 200 bks. One f the greatest things abut these libraries is that yu can brrw bks yu have reserved nline directly frm them. What’s mre, with the self-service libraries, yu can brrw and return bks anytime, anywhere.
Persnally, the self-service libraries are fantastic. They nt nly prvide cnvenient access t a wide range f bks, but als they create a culture f reading in ur cmmunity.
A prmtin activity abut the self-service libraries will be held at 3 p.m. n Saturday in Guangming Library. If yu are interested in it, let me knw and we can meet up at the library entrance.
I am lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点以及开头，注意要点齐全，语句通顺，表述完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，开门见山，交代写作目的，介绍光明区图书馆；
第二步，具体介绍书香亭以及对书香亭的看法；
第三步，介绍书亭推广活动的具体情况。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②what’s mre其次
③nt als...不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①One f the greatest things abut these libraries is that yu can brrw bks yu have reserved nline directly frm them.（表语从句）
②If yu are interested in it, let me knw and we can meet up at the library entrance.（if引导的条件状语从句）
8．例文：
Last week, the activity “Experiencing Future Jb” was held in ur schl. There were many jbs fr us t chse in the activity, such as teachers, dctrs, astrnauts, fitness instructrs and s n. We culd chse the jb we liked. I chse t be a teacher as my jb. Because I wanted t be a teacher like my mther. I taught ur students a lt f knwledge. I als talked with them abut their dreams and future lives. When I was with many students, I felt realized teaching is a great prfessin.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意要点齐全，不要遗漏，语句通顺，表述完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，直接引出职业体验游园活动；
第二步，具体介绍活动场景和内容；
第三步，介绍自己的体验感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①a lt f大量的
②talk with交流
[高分句型]
①There were many jbs fr us t chse in the activity, such as teachers, dctrs, astrnauts, fitness instructrs and s n.（there be句型）
②When I was with many students, I felt realized teaching is a great prfessin.（when引导的时间状语从句）
9．例文：
Dear fllw students,
We have nly ne Earth. Earth is ur nly hme. As we all knw, ur earth faces many challenges, such as glbal warming, envirnmental pllutin, natural disasters and s n. These things are making ur earth wrse and wrse. Prtecting the envirnment is prtecting urselves. S we must d smething t prtect it.
First, be envirnmentally friendly cnsumers. We shuld try t g t wrk by bike r n ft instead f by cars. Secndly, save water and electricity in ur daily. In additin, we can wrk as vlunteers t tell peple the imprtance f prtecting the envirnment.
Let’s take active actin t cntribute ur effrts t prtecting the envirnment. I am sure ur city will becme better and better.
Li hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：这是一篇材料作文，为应用文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：3个写作要点已经给出，需要具体化；这是一篇倡议信，所以“能够做些什么”部分可以用祈使句和情态动词来表达。
[写作步骤]
第一步，描写保护环境的意义；
第二步，描写为了保护环境我们能够做的事情；
第三步，号召大家积极行动起来保护环境。
[亮点词汇]
①be envirnmentally friendly cnsumers 成为环保型消费者
②in additin 另外
③tell peple the imprtance f prtecting the envirnment 告诉人们保护环境的重要性
④cntribute ur effrts t 为……做出贡献
[高分句型]
I am sure ur city will becme better and better. （宾语从句）
10．例文
As is knwn t all, the envirnment arund us is getting wrse and wrse. Nw the river has becme dirty, the sky has turned gray, and sme areas d nt have clean drinking water. S let’s d smething t prtect the envirnment.
Dn’t litter the river. At the same time, we als need t save water. It is necessary fr us t g t schl by bus r n ft, because it can cut dwn n the waste air. We had better plant mre trees. Recycling is gd fr ur planet because it changes litter int smething that we can use again.
Envirnmental prtectin is clsely related t ur daily life. S it is everyne’s respnsibility t prtect ur envirnment. Let’s build a beautiful China tgether.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据题干中的要求介绍如何保护环境，可适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，并介绍生态环境现状；
第二步，详细介绍环保措施；
第三步，发出呼吁。
[亮点词汇]
①at the same time同时
②had better最好
③be related t和……有关
[高分句型]
①It is necessary fr us t g t schl by bus r n ft, because it can cut dwn n the waste air.(because引导的原因状语从句)
②Recycling is gd fr ur planet because it changes litter int smething that we can use again.(that引导的定语从句)
11．One pssible versin:
Ntice
In rder t enrich students’ campus life, the schl English club decides t hld an English picture bk cmpetitin with the theme “Amazing Shenzhen”. The fllwing is smething yu shuld pay attentin t.
All the students can take part in the cmpetitin. Yur wrks shuld be handed in befre 12:00 am next Friday. Yu can finish yur English picture bks frm any aspect f Shenzhen, such as its develpment histry, scenic spts, culture, vlunteer services and s n. Remember that yur wrks must be riginal and the cntents shuld be psitive.
We hpe all f yu can take part in the cmpetitin.
English Club
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇通知，介绍英文绘本大赛。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”。
③提示：题目要求根据提示写一则通知，内容为举办以“最美深圳”(Amazing Shenzhen) 为主题的英文绘本大赛。写作时注意适当增加细节，补充要点，同时不要遗漏所给要点。
[写作步聚]
第一步，先简单介绍活动内容。（开头已给出）
第二步，根据所给要点，依次介绍活动的具体内容以及要求。
第三步，最后号召大家积极参加。
[亮点词汇]
①pay attentin t注意
②take part in参加
③hand in上交
[高分句型]
①Yur wrks shuld be handed in befre 12:00 am next Friday.（含情态动词的被动语态）
②Remember that yur wrks must be riginal and the cntents shuld be psitive.（肯定祈使句）
12．例文
Dear Mike,
As an imprtant wetland city, Shenzhen is making effrts t answer the call f the Wetlands Cnventin.
The purpse f this activity is t witness the achievements f Shenzhen wetland cnstructin and enhance envirnmental awareness. We went t Shenzhen Mangrve Eclgical Park t watch mangrve frests and birds. We als visited the Shenzhen Wetland Phtgraphy Exhibitin. We have als singed the Cnventin n the Prtectin f Wetlands. We are cmmitted t maintaining wetlands. Thrugh this activity, we learn that we live n the same planet and we need t prtect wetlands.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍活动目的；
第二步，介绍活动内容；
第三步，介绍自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①make effrts t d努力做某事
②the purpse f……的目的
③need t d sth需要做某事
[高分句型]
①The purpse f this activity is t witness the achievements f Shenzhen wetland cnstructin and enhance envirnmental awareness.（动词不定式作表语）
②we learn that we live n the same planet and we need t prtect wetlands.（that引导的宾语从句）
活动目的
1.展现深圳良好的城市风貌
2.培养深圳人民热爱运动、健康生活的习惯
活动详情
时间，地点，参赛人员，比赛结果
你的感受
1.应该学习何杰坚持不懈的精神
2.补充两点感想
生态环境现状
河水变脏、天空变成灰色、一些地区没有干净的饮用水
环保措施
1.不往河里乱扔垃圾；
2.节约用水
3.……（补充1—2点措施）
呼吁
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