专题23 中考复习 书面表达课件PPT
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Writing skills
书面表达六步法
一、审题 1. 确定体裁和格式 2. 确定主体时态 3. 确定中心人称 4. 确定得分点
下周五将有考察团对我市进行考察(d sme investigating)。下面是考察的有关事项,请你向考察团的朋友写一份书面的通知。 1. 乘车前往糖厂(the sugar factry),半小时到达; 2. 集中时间:上午8:000; 3. 集中地点:市政府门前(the city’s gvernment); 4. 在糖厂与工人们一起吃午饭; 5. 午饭后在厂会议室集中,下午2:00 离开。
2011年柳州中考作文题
假设上个星期六你们去公园植树,在回家的路上你救了一只
受伤的小鸟。请根据下表提供的中文提示,用英语写一篇70个词
左右的短文,介绍事情的经过。开头已给出。
Last Saturday ,ur class went t plant trees in the park. ________________________________________________________________
1. be friendly t.
She is friendly t everyne in the factry.
My dream came true.
2. be bad fr
Eating t much is bad fr ur health.
二、遣词造句步骤 1. 抓主干,定时态;2. 套句型,连成句;
She bught sme presents fr her mther
4. take sb. t hspital
We tk him t hspital. He was taken t hspital.
5. fly kites
They will fly kites in the park next week.
1. Phillips 12岁了. Phillips is twelve years ld. 2.他来自The USA. He cmes frm the USA. He is an American. 3.他喜欢游泳. He likes ging swimming. 4.他也喜欢画画. He als likes drawing. 5.他还喜欢照顾动物,等等。 He likes taking care f the animals, and s n. 6.周末的时候他帮助打扫动物园。 He ften helps t clean the z at the weekend. 7.他为动物制作标志牌。 He usually makes sme signal bard fr the animals at the weekends.
Phillips and Animal Signs Many teenagers lve animals . Phillips is ne f them.Ethan Phillips is twelve years ld. He is a student . He studies in a middle schl .He cmes frm the USA. He is an American. He likes ging swimming. He als likes drawing. He likes taking care f the animals, and s n. He ften helps t clean the z at the weekend. He usually makes sme signal bard fr the animals at the weekends.
三、成文 创设好的开端,适当使用一些关联词,把材料按一定的逻辑顺序串联起来,使之连贯,首尾要注意呼应,使文章结构完整.
Everyne shuld learn frm Phillips, we shuld take care f the animals, the animals are ur friends. Let’s d it tday.
四.修改注意事项
1. 时态是否正确;2. 主谓是否一致;3. 要点是否全面;4. 人称是否正确;5. 语序问题;6. 是否符合语言习惯; 7. 固定短语。
1.He’s hbby is play ften by bike t schl.
his playing
his playing
His hbby is playing basketball.
Thugh were were tired, we had a gd time.
He ften ges t schl by bike. He ften takes a bike t schl
4.My hmetwn in summer has many beautiful flwers.
There are many beautiful flw ers in my hmetwn in summer.
2.Thugh we were tired , but we had a gd time.
5. I very like making friends with yu. I like making friends with yu very much. 6. I watching TV nw. I am watching TV nw. 7. There will have a big party in the park tmrrw. 8. They were had a picnic in the park yesterday.
There will be a big party in the park tmrrw.
They had a picnic in the park yesterday.
9.He withut breakfast ges t wrk.
He ges t wrk withut breakfast.
五、誊写
书写工整、卷面整洁会为高分奠定基础。六、检查
誊写以后要检查一遍,看有无单词拼写、标点符号、字母大小写等错误。
2010中考作文 假设你是李华。中考后 ,你们班将到阳光农场郊游。请你通过e-mail将有关事项通知全班同学,要点如下:
参考词汇:get clse t the nature(亲近大自然) strawberries(草莓)词数60-80(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数),文中不能出现真人真名所给的要点必须用上,紧扣主题适当发挥Hell, everyne!Wuld yu like t have fun after the exam? We’ll …… Welcme t jin us! Yurs, Li Hua
Hell, everyne ! Wuld yu like t have fun after the exam? We’ll have an exciting trip t the Sunshine Farm n June 28th.On that day ,we will meet n the schl playgrund at 8:00 in the mrning .The schl bus will take us there. We can get relaxed and get clse t the nature .On the farm ,we will have a picnic .We can als pick vegetables and fruits such as tmates and strawberries .But we mustn’t swim in the lake .And we can’t g ff n ur wn. I’m sure we will enjy urselves n the Sunshine Farm. Welcme t jin us! Yurs Li Hua
根据提示和要求完成下面短文。 假如你(Li Lei)在去年夏令营认识的一个朋友Jim从英国给你寄来一件礼物——一件红色的衬衫,并附有一封信。在信中他向你问好,他想知道你近来在忙些什么。请你给他写一封回信(60--80个词)表示感谢。回信要包括以下内容:1.向Jim问好并对他表示感谢。2.礼物是你最喜欢的颜色,尺寸很合适,你非常喜欢。3.告诉Jim你近来很好,上周刚过完生日,生日聚会 很热闹。询问Jim的近况,并表示希望他能来中国。
关于提高英语写作的一些建议:1.记好单词,背好词组及句型2.巩固语法知识,掌握各类词的应用。3.早晚读多读佳作范文,积累好词好句。4.坚持每天口头造句,每周练习至少一篇。5.注意练字,提高书写。 Remember, nthing is impssible if yu put yur heart int it!
要灵活变通,避免硬译式表达
1.汉语式英语 ①我们发现学好英语是很困难的。 汉语式英语:We find that learn English well is diffi-cult. 地道表达:We find it difficult t learn English well. ②呆在家里不能亲身了解外界。 汉语式英语:Staying at hme lnely can nt knw the utside f the wrld . 地道表达:They will lse the chance f getting t knw the utside wrld when staying at hme.
2.直译类 1.《21世纪报》图文并茂,广为人知,深受青睐。 直译类:2lst Century has interesting articles and clrful pictures .It is widely knwn and deeply lved by peple 转换表达:The 21st Century has interesting articles with clrful pictures .It is a Well-knwn newspaper. which is very ppular with students and English learners . ②校园环境幽静,绿树成阴。 转换表达:A. It is quiet in ur schl and there are a lt f trees in and arund it. B. Our schl is quiet with a lt f trees in and arund it .
2011年中考作文 假设你是李华,正在参加英语夏令营。请你用英语写一篇发言稿,谈谈你在夏令营的活动及收获。开头已给出。 写作要点: 1. 擅长运动,参加篮球队及比赛,学会与队友合作…… 2. 喜欢英语,参加英语角,结交新朋友; 3. 用英语交流,提高英语水平。参考词汇:与队友合作 wrk with the teammates; 英语角 the English crner写作要求:1. 词数60-80个 2. 文中不能出现真实的校名和人名 3. 所给的要点必须用上,紧扣主题适当发挥 Hell, everyne! I’m Li Hua . I have learnt a lt n the English summer camp.
I think I have dne a gd jb. Thank yu.
3.简单罗列类: ①业余爱好:游泳、溜冰、集邮、流行音乐。 罗列表达:Hbbits:swimming , skating,cllecting stamps,pp music 机械表达:My hbbies are swimming , skating, cllecting stamps,pp music. 灵活变通表达:In my spare time I enjy listing t pp mu-sic and cllecting stamps. My favrite sprts are swimming in summer and skating in winter
②内容:白天,上课、做作业;晚上,做作业。 罗列重复式表达:In the daytime. We tk lessns and had t d ur hmewrk. In the evening .we had t d ur hmewrk. 灵活变通表达:We have t g t schl even at week-ends and d much hmewrk bth in the day time and in the evening.
It is fine last Sunday. I and my classmate by bike went t visit an ld peple’s hme . We gt t there is at 10:00. We used urs pcket mney buy sme fruit and flwers t the ld peple. They were lk very happy when they seeing us. We sme helped they cleaned the rms. Sme helped them wash clthes. Sme singing and dancing fr them. Everyne were having a gd time. When we left in the afternn, they thanks t us and say we are gd children. Thught we very tired, but we fell very happy.
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