专题18 意见和建议-2024年中考英语写作分类指导（真题+模拟）

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B 针对某一现象，分析原因，提出你的建
必背高分表达
陈述个人意见、看法的句型:
(1)I'm afraid...恐怕······
例句①I'm afraid we can't finish it n time.恐怕我们不能按时完成.
②I'm afraid I have t leave nw.我恐怕现在得走了.
③I'm afraid yu are wrng.恐怕你错了.
④There's little time left. I'm afraid we have t make a decisin as sn as pssible.时间所剩无几,恐怕我们得尽快作出决定了.
(2)I think (that)...我认为······
①I think the vlunteers wh saved peple in truble shuld be regarded as heres as well.我认为那些拯救受困人员的志愿者也应该被视为英雄.
②I think(that)Tm is hnest.我认为汤姆很诚实.
③I think he will cme t see us sn.我认为他不久就会来看我们.
④I think that is a gd idea.我认为那是一个不错的主意.
⑤I dn't think my parents will agree.我认为我的父母不会同意.
⑥I dn't think he will jin us.我认为他不会加入我们.
⑦-Are yu sure yu can d well in tday's test, Lucy?露西,你确信你今天考试能考得不错吗?
-I think s. I've gt everything ready.我认为如此,我已经做好准备了.
(3)I think/find/feel it+形容词＋ t d sth我认为／发现／感觉做某事······
这一结构中,it为形式宾语,真正的宾语是后面的动词不定式.
例句①I think it implite t cut in line.我认为插队是不礼貌的.
②I think it easy t make friends with Mr. White.我认为和怀特先生交朋友很容易.
③I think it great t jin in their party tnight.我认为今晚参加他们的聚会是非常棒的.
④I find it easy t learn English well.我发现学好英语是很容易的.
⑤I find it hard t teach my yunger brther t paint.我发现教我弟弟画画不容易.
⑥I feel it necessary t help the ld.我感到帮助老人是必要的.
⑦I feel it pssible t finish my hmewrk befre nine 'clck.我觉得九点前完成作业是可能的.
(4)I wnder...我想知道······
例句①I wnder if/whether he will cme.我想知道他是否会来.
②I wnder if/whether the huse is big enugh.我想知道这房子是不是足够大.
③I wnder wh tld him the seeret.我想知道谁把秘密告诉了他.
④I wnder hw James is getting n.我想知道詹姆斯的近况.
⑤I wnder where he spent his childhd.我想知道他的童年是在哪里度过的.
⑥I wnder which he chse at last.我想知道他最后选了哪个.
(5)I hpe...我希望······
例句①I hpe yu have a gd trip.我希望你旅途愉快.
②I hpe t live beside the river.我希望能住在河边.
③I hpe ne day ur dreams will cme true.我希望有一天我们的梦想能够成真.
④I hpe yu will like it.我希望你会喜欢它.
(6)I feel like (ding) 我想(做)某事······
例句①I feel like a cup f cffee.我想要一杯咖啡.
②When yu feel like giving up, think f yur gal.当你想要放弃的时候,想想你的目标.
③I feel like ging t bed. I am tired.我想要去睡了.我累了.
④I dn't feel like ging t the cinema tnight with yu.我今天晚上不太想和你一起去看电影.
高分美句：
1. I think yu may use electrnic prducts fr a lng time, which is bad fr yur eyesight.(which引导的定语从句)
我想你可能用电子产品时间长了，这对你的视力有害。
2. Stay away frm high-fat fd and eat mre fruit and vegetables instead.（祈使句）
远离高脂肪的食物，相反，多吃水果和蔬菜。
3. Althugh it was hard, I made great prgress in my grades.(althugh引导的让步状语从句)
尽管很难，但是我的成绩取得了很大进步。
4. I thank my ninth grade life, which helps me grw up.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
我感谢我九年级的生活，它帮助我成长。
5. Hwever, sme students think WeChat will affect their study if they spend t much time using it.（if引导条件状语从句）
然而，一些学生认为如果他们花太多时间使用微信，会影响他们的学习。
6. In my pinin, we shuld use WeChat prperly by nt using it mre than tw hurs a day, and make sure that we dn’t use it when we are studying.（that引导宾语从句）
在我看来，我们应该适度使用微信，每天不要超过两个小时，并确保学习的时候不适用。
7. First, mre public service advertisements shuld be put up t let peple knw the imprtance f water.（动词不定式t d作目的状语）
首先，应该张贴更多的公益广告，使人们意识到水的重要性。
8. Nt nly can it help us increase ur knwledge, it als allws us t step ut f ur cmfrt zne and challenge urselves.（Nt nly引导的倒装句）
它不仅可以帮助我们增长知识，还使我们走出舒适圈并挑战自我。
必背满分范文
（2023·辽宁鞍山·统考中考真题）
眼睛是心灵的窗户。假如你是李平，你的朋友Mike最近为近视感到困扰。请你根据下面表格的提示信息给他写一封电子邮件，说明他近视的原因并提出建议。
要求：（1）不能出现真实的校名、人名等相关信息。
（2）根据中文和英文提示，可以适当发挥。
（3）内容完整、意思连贯、符合逻辑、书写整齐。
（4）词数：80~100词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：视力 eyesight；近视 mypia；电子产品 electrnic device
Dear Mike,
Hw is it ging with yu?
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Yurs,
Li Ping
【答案】例文：
Dear Mike,
Hw is it ging with yu? I’m srry t learn that yur eyesight is getting weaker. I think yu may use electrnic prducts fr a lng time, which is bad fr yur eyesight. And reading bks fr t lng may cause mypia.
But dn’t wrry. I’d like t share with yu sme ways f prtecting eyesight. At first, yu shuld cntrl the time yu spend n electrnic prducts. Yu can d mre utdr activities. What’s mre, yu shuld develp sme gd habits. Yu shuld eat mre vegetables and fruit. They are gd fr yur health. Besides, ding eye exercises plays an imprtant rle in relaxing yur tired eyes. Lastly, yu shuld have yur eyes examined every term t make sure yur eyes stay healthy.
I hpe yu’ll find my ways helpful.
Yurs,
Li Ping
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示信息给对方一些建议，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，介绍对方近视的原因；
第二步，针对朋友的问题给出相应的建议；
第三步，表达自己的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①wuld like t d sth.想要做某事
②be gd fr对……有好处
③play an imprtant rle in在……中起重要作用
[高分句型]
①I think yu may use electrnic prducts fr a lng time, which is bad fr yur eyesight.(which引导的定语从句)
②ding eye exercises plays an imprtant rle in relaxing yur tired eyes.(动名词作主语)
（2023·辽宁盘锦·统考中考真题）
根据要求完成作文，并写在答题卡的相应位置。
假如你是李华，你的朋友Peter来中国旅游，回国前他想给家人买一件代表中国文化的礼物。他通过邮件询问你的意见，请你用英文回复。
提示：
(1)建议买什么；
(2)介绍这个礼物；
(3)给出推荐理由。
要求：
(1)内容包含以上信息，80词左右（开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
(2)语言准确，行文连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；
(3)文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
Dear Peter,
Glad t hear frm yu. It’s easy t chse a gift which stands fr Chinese culture.
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I hpe my advice is helpful. Best wishes!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Peter,
Glad t hear frm yu. It’s easy t chse a gift which stands fr Chinese culture. I’d lve t give yu my suggestin abut Chinese gifts.
Frm my pint f view, paper-cut is a gd chice t be special Chinese gifts fr yur family. Paper-cuts are usually used t decrate the huse. They are put n windws, drs and walls t celebrate the Spring Festival. Paper-cuts are a traditinal Chinese culture, frm which yu can have a better understanding f China. Peple like them very much because they are seen as symbls fr gd luck and a happy new year.
I hpe my advice is helpful. Best wishes!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据题干中的提示信息介绍一件代表中国文化的礼物，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍推荐的礼物是什么；
第二步，介绍这个礼物；
第三步，说明推荐理由。
[亮点词汇]
①frm my pint f view依我看来
②be used t d被用来做某事
③be seen as被看成
[高分句型]
①Paper-cuts are a traditinal Chinese culture, frm which yu can have a better understanding f China.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
②Peple like them very much because they are seen as symbls fr gd luck and a happy new year.（because引导的原因状语从句）
（2023·辽宁沈阳·统考中考真题）
为了传承和弘扬中华民族的优良家风，学校英文社团开展主题为“孝亲敬长”的英语征文比赛。假定你是李华，请你写一篇征文参加比赛。内容包括：
1.尊重的对象和原因；
2.具体做法；
3.发出号召。
【注意】
1.词数 80-100，开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2.短文须包括所给内容信息，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.作文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名。
Shw respect fr elders
Shwing respect fr elders is ne f the family traditins that Chinese peple have kept fr thusands f years.
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【答案】例文：
Shw respect fr elders
Shwing respect fr elders is ne f the family traditins that Chinese peple have kept fr thusands f years.
We are suppsed t shw respect fr ur parents because they are the mst trusted elders and help us slve prblems when we are in truble.
Here are sme things we can d t shw ur respect. First, we can ffer t help with husewrk such as leaning the dishes r sweeping the flr s that they can have a rest after a day’s wrk. Secnd, dn’t make them angry and try t take their advice when we disagree with each ther. Third, share yur happiness and srrw with them as they were nce like yu and have mre experience than yu expect.
Small actins can make a great difference. Let’s shw respect fr ur parents frm nw n!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，介绍敬老是很重要的优良传统；
第二步，介绍应该尊敬父母的原因以及如何表现自己的尊敬；
第三步，发出号召。
[亮点词汇]
①be suppsed t应该
②such as例如
③each ther彼此
[高分句型]
①First, we can ffer t help with husewrk such as leaning the dishes r sweeping the flr s that they can have a rest after a day’s wrk.（s that引导目的状语从句）
②Third, share yur happiness and srrw with them as they were nce like yu and have mre experience than yu expect.（as引导原因状语从句）
（2023·四川内江·统考中考真题）
你校英语俱乐部将以“五育并举，全面发展”为主题举办中学生英语演讲比赛，请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇演讲稿。
1. 德：诚信友善，乐于助人；
2. 智：勤奋努力，乐学善学；
3. 体：热爱运动，积极锻炼；
4. 美：学习绘画，爱好音乐；
5. 劳：清洁校园，分担家务。
注意：
1. 所写内容应包括以上要点，并结合自身情况，选择一至两点重点阐述，合理拓展；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3. 词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Hell, everyne! My tpic tday is n hw students behave well in ur daily life. First f all, we shuld be hnest and friendly.
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That’s all. Thank yu!
【答案】例文
Hell, everyne! My tpic tday is n hw students behave well in ur daily life. First f all, we shuld be hnest and friendly. Helping thers als makes us feel gd and have a sense f achievement. Secndly, we shuld wrk hard. We shuld enjy and be gd at learning. Thirdly, we shuld lve sprts and be active in exercising. Furthly, we shuld learn drawing and enjy music. Finally, we shuld clean up ur schl and help with husewrk.
We can nly becme qualified middle schl students if we develp all-rund ability in areas such as mrals, intelligence, physical fitness, wrk and aesthetics.
That’s all. Thank yu!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求以“五育并举，全面发展”为主题，结合提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出学生如何在日常生活中表现良好的主题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从德智体美劳五个方面重点介绍；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①in ur daily life在我们的日常生活中
②have a sense f achievement有成就感
③be active in积极参与
④such as例如
[高分句型]
We can nly becme qualified middle schl students if we develp all-rund ability in areas such as mrals, intelligence, physical fitness, wrk and aesthetics.（if引导的条件状语从句）
（2023·甘肃兰州·统考中考真题）
现如今外出旅游备受欢迎，但在旅游中我们也时常会看到一些不文明行为。某英文报旅游专栏正以“Traveling in Gd Manners”为题，向广大学生征稿，倡导大家文明旅游。假设你是李华，请结合表格内的信息，用英文写一篇短文去投稿。
内容包括：
1. 简述表格中的不文明行为（任选其中两个）；
2. 提出个人观点及建议；
3. 倡导文明旅游。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现真实的人名、地名等信息；
4. 文章标题和开头已给出，请抄写在答题卡的相应位置（不计入总词数）。
提示词：turist attractins（景区）
Traveling in Gd Manners
Nwadays traveling is getting mre and mre ppular.
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【答案】例文：
Traveling in Gd Manners
Nwadays traveling is getting mre and mre ppular. Hwever, sme peple dn’t behave themselves in turist attractins when traveling. Fr example, sme f the travelers thrw rubbish everywhere. It’s nt nly implite but als harmful t the envirnment arund us. We shuld put rubbish int dustbins. Sme f the travelers like picking flwers in a park. It shuld als be stpped because flwers are beautiful and we shuld prtect them. We can put up signs beside the flwers t remind travelers nt t pick them.
Let’s take actin right nw and travel in gd manners.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并注意适当添加细节，突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，选择表格中的两个不文明的行为进行介绍；
第二步，介绍自己对不文明行为的看法并给出改正建议；
第三步，号召大家文明旅行。
[亮点词汇]
①behave themselves文明举止
②put rubbish int dustbins把垃圾扔进垃圾桶
[高分句型]
①It’s nt nly implite but als harmful t the envirnment arund us.（nt als...不仅……而且……）
②We can put up signs beside the flwers t remind travelers nt t pick them.（不定式作宾补）
（2023·四川乐山·统考中考真题）
2022年1月生效的《家庭教育促进法》规定：未成年人的父母或其他监护人应该重视家庭教育，关心孩子身心健康。对于此规定，作为学生的你有话想说。请你给校英语专栏写一篇短文，对父母提出建议并表明观点。内容包括：
1. 多花时间陪我们，如教做家务、一起玩耍等；
2. 帮助我们养成好的习惯；
3. 常与我们沟通谈心；
4. 信任我们并保护我们的隐私。
注意：
1. 词数80词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校等信息。
参考词汇：physical and mental health身心健康；privacy n.隐私
Accrding t the law “Family Educatin Prmtin”, parents r ther guardians f minrs shuld be respnsible fr family educatin. It asks parents t pay attentin t children’s physical and mental health. Here are my suggestins fr parents.
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【答案】参考范文
Accrding t the Law “Family Educatin Prmtin”, parents r ther guardians f minrs shuld be respnsible fr family educatin. It asks parents t pay attentin t children’s physical and mental health. Here are my suggestins fr parents.
First f all, I think parents shuld spend mre time with us. Fr example, parents can teach us t d husewrk and play with us in spare time. Secnd, parents shuld help us t get int gd habits, such as eating healthy fd, ding sprts and s n. What’s mre, parents had better cmmunicate with us mre ften. That’s because sme misunderstandings are caused by lack f cmmunicatin. Finally, I hpe parents can trust us and prtect ur privacy. We children need mre persnal space.
In my pinin, we can wrk tgether t understand and respect each ther s that we can make prgress.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，属于材料作文写作；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接短文开头，引出话题；
第二步，根据提示的要点逐个进行阐述，对父母提出建议，可列举具体的事例；
第三步，表明自己的观点并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①get int gd habits养成良好的习惯
②had better d sth最好做某事
③cmmunicate with sb和某人交流
④lack f……的缺乏
[高分句型]
①First f all, I think parents shuld spend mre time with us.（省略引导词that引导的宾语从句）
②That’s because sme misunderstandings are caused by lack f cmmunicatin.（because引导的表语从句）
③In my pinin, we can wrk tgether t understand and respect each ther s that we can make prgress.（s that引导的结果状语从句）
（2023·山东泰安·统考中考真题）
强国有我！作为祖国未来的建设者和接班人，青少年学生要努力成长为堪当大任的栋梁之材。请根据下面提示，以“Hw t be gd students in the new era”为题写一篇英语短文，谈谈如何做一名新时代（era）的好学生。
要求：语句通顺，意思连贯，可适当发挥；词数80—100；文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名、地名等与考生本人相关的信息。
Hw t be gd students in the new era
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【答案】例文
Hw t be gd students in the new era.
The 21st century is a time full f challenges and chances. It is imprtant fr us t knw hw t be gd students in this new era. Tday I’m glad t share my ideas abut hw t be gd students.
First, we shuld lve ur cuntry as well as ur family. We must keep ur prmise and be thankful t peple wh helped us. We shuld be friendly with ur classmates. Secnd, we shuld study hard and be creative. We shuld help each ther and learn frm each ther. Third, we shuld take mre physical exercise t keep ur bdy and mind healthy. We shuld als d husewrk frequently and learn t be independent.
As lng as we wrk hard, we will be excellent middle schl students.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，从品德方面介绍如何成为好学生；
第二步，从学业方面介绍如何成为好学生；
第三步，从生活方面介绍如何成为好学生。
[亮点词汇]
①as well as以及
②help each ther互相帮助
③learn t d学习做
[高分句型]
①We must keep ur prmise and be thankful t peple wh helped us.（wh引导的定语从句）
②As lng as we wrk hard, we will be excellent middle schl students.（as lng as引导的条件状语从句）
（2023·山东滨州·统考中考真题）
假如你是李华，近日你的英国笔友Amy发来邮件，向你诉说她最近的困扰；自己体型微胖，想通过节食减肥，以更美的面貌进入新的学校学习。请你根据邮件内容用英语给她回封邮件，谈一谈你对这问题的见解。
参考词汇: diet(v.节食), appearance (n.外貌), inner beauty (内在美)
Dear Li Hua,
I have been a bit larger than ther girls since I was little. Fr a lng time, this really trubled me. I feel mre wrried because I will start my senir high schl life sn! I am afraid that the students in the new schl will laugh at me because I am “big”. I decide t lk mre beautiful, s I want t lse weight by dieting. What d yu think f my plan? Can yu give me sme advice?
Lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Amy
要求：1.要点齐全，并适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名与校名；
3.卷面整洁，书写美观，可适当加2—3分；
4.80词左右。开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Amy,
I have received and read yur letter, in which yu said yu wanted t lse weight by dieting.
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Yurs, Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Amy,
I have received and read yur letter, in which yu said yu wanted t lse weight by dieting. As yu mentined in the letter, I have sme advice fr yu.
Firstly, there is n need t care abut what thers think f yu. The mst imprtant thing is t be cnfident and psitive, as it will help yu have curage t face and vercme yur truble. Inner beauty is mre imprtant than appearance. Secndly, keep a healthy diet. Stay away frm high-fat fd and eat mre fruit and vegetables instead. A balanced diet is very imprtant fr lsing weight. Thirdly, ding prper exercise is necessary. Yu’d better get up early in the mrning and d sme sprts regularly.
The mre yu exercise, the healthier yu’ll be. I hpe my advice will be helpful t yu.
Yurs, Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据邮件内容提出建议，并适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，提出要给Amy的建议；
第二步，具体阐述给Amy同学的三个建议；
第三步，总结全文，表达期望。
[亮点词汇]
①there is n need t d sth没必要做某事
②stay away frm…与……保持距离
③have curage t d sth有勇气做某事
[高分句型]
①I hpe my advice will be helpful t yu.（宾语从句）
②Stay away frm high-fat fd and eat mre fruit and vegetables instead.（祈使句）
（2023·浙江杭州·统考中考真题）
假定你是李平，请你对英国朋友Jack的邮件进行回复。词数80左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Hi Jack,
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Li Ping
【答案】例文
Hi Jack,
I am s glad t receive yur email. I can’t wait t see yu, t.
It will be very ht in Hangzhu next week, s yu shuld bring sme T-shirts and shrts as well as sme sunscreen. There is a big swimming pl near my huse. We can swim in it fr free. In additin, there is a tennis center three kilmeters frm my hme, s we can als g t play tennis. I like English lcal prducts very much. If it is cnvenient fr yu, please bring me sme.
I am lking frward t meeting yu.
Li Ping
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先表示自己很开心收到对方的邮件；
第二步，具体阐述他需要带的东西以及介绍家附近的游泳池或网球中心；
第三步，最后介绍自己想要对方带什么。
[亮点词汇]
①can’t wait t d迫不及待做
②as well as和，以及
③lk frward t期待
[高分句型]
①It will be very ht in Hangzhu next week, s yu shuld bring sme T-shirts and shrts as well as sme sunscreen. （s引导并列句）
②If it is cnvenient fr yu, please bring me sme.（if引导的条件状语从句）
（2023·四川广安·统考中考真题）
漫漫人生，有得有失。幸运的是，我们拥有许多美好。活在当下，请珍惜身边的一切美好。假如你是李华，你们学校将于下周举行以“珍惜”为主题的演讲比赛，请根据以下图示完成一篇英语演讲稿。
要求：
1. 字迹工整，书写规范，包含全部图示要点，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的学校、班级名称；
3. 80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
4. 请将书面表达内容写在答题卡上的相应位置。
参考词汇：
value (v. 珍惜) respect (v. 尊敬)
relatives (n. 家人) safety (n. 安全)
Value Imprtant Things Arund Us
Gd mrning, everyne! I am Li Hua. Life is clurful. There are many imprtant things we shuld value in ur daily life. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks fr yur listening.
【答案】例文
Value Imprtant Things Arund Us
Gd mrning, everyne! I am Li Hua. Life is clurful. There are many imprtant things we shuld value in ur daily life.
First, we shuld value ur lives. We shuld stay away frm dangerus things like fire. We shuld pay attentin t ur safety. Secnd, we shuld value ur health. We shuld d much exercise t make us healthy. We shuld als get enugh sleep s that we can d everything well. Thirdly, we shuld value ur relative and friends. We shuld shw lve and respect fr the elderly. We had better spend mre time cmmunicating with them. Fr friends, we shuld trust each ther and help them in need. We shuld get n well with them. Finally, we shuld value the time and make gd plans fr ur study. Dn’t waste time n useless things.
Thanks fr yur listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出本文主题；
第二步，分别从珍惜生命，珍惜健康，珍惜亲朋好友，珍惜时间等方面介绍。
[亮点词汇]
①stay away frm远离
②pay attentin t注意
③spend time ding sth花时间做某事
④get n well with sb与某人和睦相处
[高分句型]
①There are many imprtant things we shuld value in ur daily life.（there be句型）
②We shuld d much exercise t make us healthy. （动词不定式作目的状语）
③We shuld als get enugh sleep s that we can d everything well.（s that引导目的状语从句）
考前模拟预测
1．Write at least 60 wrds n the tpic “Take it easy ” accrding t the given situatin (根据以下情境，以“放轻松”为题写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格)
你的好朋友 Sandy 正在准备一场关于传统文化的演讲比赛，尽管她每天练习至少半小时，但仍然无法记住整份演讲稿。此外，Sandy 因为太紧张，晚上无法入睡。请你写一封信给 Sandy，鼓励她，让她放轻松。信中至少给她二个建议，并给出合适理由，同时注意信件格式。
（注意：短文中不得出现任何校名、人名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）
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【答案】例文
Take it easy
Dear Sandy,
I knw that yu are preparing fr a cntest abut traditinal culture and yu can’t remember the whle cntent f the speech thugh yu have practiced it at least half an hur every day. And I als knw that yu can’t fall asleep because f the nervusness. S, I have tw advice fr yu. First, divide the cntent int several parts and recite every part carefully. Secnd, d nt frce yurself t recite anything if yu feel very nervus. Find a prper time t d it. Hpe yu can d it.
Yurs,
Amy
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，根据提示内容适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍好朋友最近的状态；
第二步，给出建议。
[亮点词汇]
①prepare fr为做准备
②at least至少
③fall asleep入睡
④把分成
[高分句型]
①I knw that yu are preparing fr a cntest abut traditinal culture and yu can’t remember the whle cntent f the speech thugh yu practiced it at least half an hur every day. (that引导的宾语从句)
②Secnd, d nt frce yurself t recite anything if yu feel very nervus.(if引导的条件状语从句)
2．Write at least 60 wrds accrding t the given situatin. (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
玫瑰花园学校校报“知心信箱”专栏收到了一封来自李明同学的求助信。信中提及上周末他未经哥哥同意使用他的电脑，导致电脑出故障，耽误了哥哥的工作。李明没有告知实情，也不知道该怎么办。
假设你是该报专栏编辑张华，请写封回信给李明，指出他行为上的不当之处，并提出可行的解决办法。
注意：
1. 文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
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【答案】例文
Dear Li Ming,
I’m glad t hear frm yu. In yur letter, yu tld me yu used yur brther’s cmputer withut his permissin. The cmputer brke dwn and as a result, yur brther’s wrk was delayed. Yu didn’t tell him the truth and yu didn’t knw what t d. Nw let me give yu sme advice.
First f all, it was wrng f yu t use the cmputer withut yur brther’s permissin.
Next, yu shuld tell yur brther the truth. Dn’t be afraid f yur brther. I am sure that yur brther really lves yu and wn’t be angry with yu. He will frgive yu fr what yu did.
Then, yu shuld prmise yur bther that yu will never use his cmputer unless yu are allwed t.
Finally, get n well with yur brther.
I hpe my advice will be helpful t yu. With best wishes.
Yurs,
Zhang Hua
【详解】[总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封回信；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括两个方面的内容：指出问题和提供建议，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第二人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
［写作步骤］
第一步，介绍来信提到的内容，从而引出话题：提供建议；
第二步，针对问题，具体介绍你的建议；
第三步，总结并祝愿。
［亮点词汇］
① as a result 结果是
② tell sb. the truth 告诉某人真相
③ be angry with sb. 生某人的气
［高分句型］
① First f all, it was wrng f yu t use the cmputer withut yur brther’s permissin. (it作形式主语)
② I am sure that yur brther really lves yu and wn’t be angry with yu. (宾语从句)
3．Write a letter t Rebecca in at least 60 wrds accrding t the fllwing situatin. (根据以下情境给Rebecca写一封不少于60个词的信，标点符号不占格。)
生活中，总有一些人在我们遇到困难、困惑的时候给我们提供帮助或者建议。Rebecca也遇到了成长的烦恼，她父母希望她把更多的时间和精力放在学习上，让她放弃弹钢琴的兴趣爱好。 她不知道该怎么办？假设你是她的朋友David，请你针对她的烦恼，给她写一封不少于60词的信，帮助她。
注意：1. 写作中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
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【答案】例文：
Dear Rebecca,
I heard that yu’re ging thrugh a tugh time with yur parents wanting yu t fcus mre n yur studies and give up yur passin fr playing the pian. I understand hw difficult this must be, but I want yu t knw that I’m here fr yu and I have sme advice that might help.
Firstly, have a cnversatin with yur parents abut hw imprtant music is t yu and hw it helps yu relax. Remember t express yurself in a plite way.
Secndly, try t find a cmprmise that invlves bth studying and playing the pian. Fr example, yu culd make a time-table fr practicing pian and stick t a strict study schedule during the rest f the day.
Remember, it’s always gd t have a hbby that yu enjy, and it can actually make yu mre energetic in yur studies. S dn’t give up n yur passin, and keep wrking hard t achieve yur gals.
Best regards,
David
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表述已明白对方的问题；
第二步，给出对应的建议；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
① g thrugh 经历
② fcus mre n 更专注
③ stick t坚持
[高分句型]
① I understand hw difficult this must be.（宾语从句）
② Secndly, try t find a cmprmise that invlves bth studying and playing the pian.（定语从句）
4．Write at least 60 wrds accrding t the situatin given. (请根据所给情境，写一篇不少于 60个词的短文。标点符号不占格。)
最近你学校的英语老师 Jhnsn 准备开设初三英语拓展课程。该课程有以下三个板块组成：“实境英语听说”、“英语报刊阅读”和“英语国家文化与风俗”。现在他正在征求同学们对英语拓展课程的意见。
假如你是初三学生李华，请你阅读以下课程方案后给Jhnsn 老师写一份邮件。邮件须包含以下内容：你是否愿意参加该课程，简述你的理由；针对课程方案中的学习主题、活动安排或课时数量提出1—2 条改进建议，并说明理由。
注意：
1. 信中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分；
2. 照抄阅读语篇内容不得分。
Jhnsn 老师的英语拓展课程
Dear Jhnsn,
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Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Jhnsn,
I’m glad that yu will have this extended curse. Of curse, I want t attend it. I’m sure this curse will aruse my interest in culture and custms f English-speaking cuntries and imprve my listening, speaking and reading skills.
As fr Real-life English Listening and Speaking, wuld yu please play sme English mvies and let us dub the mvies? I think we can imprve ur spken English by dubbing English mvies. In my pinin, it’s nt a gd idea t dictate sme sentences in class. At hme, ur parents can dictate sme sentences fr us. Can we spend mre time practicing ur spken English? Why nt give us tpics and then let us make sme cnversatins and shw in frnt f the class? By the way, five lessns fr this part aren’t enugh. Six will be fine.
As fr Newspaper and Magazine Reading in English, I think ne lessn is enugh. Because we can read English newspapers and magazines at hme. Why nt read them in class?
As fr Culture and Custms f English-speaking Cuntries, there is nly ne lessn. What a pity! We’d better have tw lessns. Culd yu please tell us sme table manners in English-speaking cuntries? I will be in an exchange prgram next term. I really want t behave well in my hst family.
I’m sure yur extended curse will be helpful in imprving my English. I’m lking frward t it.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括两个方面的内容，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
［写作步骤］
第一步，表明你的态度：愿意参加该拓展课程，并陈述理由；
第二步，分别就拓展课堂的三个主题板块提出自己的改进意见以及理由；
第三步，总结与期待。
［亮点词汇］
① aruse ne’s interest 引起某人的兴趣
② dub English mvies 给英语电影配音
③ by the way 顺便说一下
［高分句型］
① I think we can imprve ur spken English by dubbing English mvies. (宾语从句)
② In my pinin, it’s nt a gd idea t dictate sme sentences in class. (it作形式主语)
5．假设你是李华，是沭阳某中学九年级的学生。你们班正在选举新的班长，你想推荐方玲。请根据以下所给要点，给班主任兼英语老师孙老师写一封推荐信。
1. 包含所有给出的提示内容，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2. 省略号部分需作适当发挥；
3. 词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. Sun,
I’m writing t recmmend Fang Ling as ur new mnitr. She has many strng qualities fr this psitin. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
S I think Fang Ling is the mst suitable persn t be ur mnitr. I hpe yu can agree with me.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Mr Sun,
I’m writing t recmmend Fang Ling as ur new mnitr. She has many strng qualities fr this psitin.
She lves reading. She thinks bks help her learn mre abut Chinese culture. They als pen up a whle new wrld fr her. She is hard-wrking. She never minds spending much time n different activities fr ur class and ften intrduces Chinese culture t freign friends.
She has a gift fr music. Als, she has a gd vice. She can make music while playing. Dancing is als her talent.
She is gd at painting. She knws hw t use clrs t change mds. She made every effrt t keep n trying and wn the Best Art Award.
She is als helpful. She ften wrks as vlunteers. Once she cllected mney fr charity. At weekends, she ften ges t the elderly huse t visit the ld peple.
S I think Fang Ling is the mst suitable persn t be ur mnitr. I hpe yu can agree with me.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为推荐信；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先表达自己的写信目的——推荐方玲作为新班长；
第二步，具体介绍推荐她当班长的原因，例如她喜欢阅读、她吃苦耐劳、能够善歌善舞、擅长绘画、乐于助人，并且列举一些例子来证明她的这些品质；
第三步，书写结束语，表达自己认为方玲是适合班长的人选，期待老师能选她当班长。
[亮点词汇]
① hard-wrking 勤奋的
② mind ding sth. 介意做某事
③ intrduce sth. t sb. 给某人介绍……
④ have a gift fr 对……有天赋
⑤ be gd at 擅长
⑥ make every effrt t d sth. 努力做某事
⑦ agree with sb. 同意某人的观点
[高分句型]
① She knws hw t use clrs t change mds. （特殊疑问词+动词不定式）
② S I think Fang Ling is the mst suitable persn t be ur mnitr. I hpe yu can agree with me. （省略that的宾语从句）
6．初三的生活是具有挑战性的，我们可能面临各种困难。如：沟通问题，学业压力、健康问题等。假如你是李华，值此毕业之际，你校英语社团公众号计划做一期主题为“学长学姐有话说”的推送。请你根据下列要点用英语给八年级的学弟学妹们写一则寄语。不少于40词。
要点：1. 看法；
2. 建议；
3. 寄语。
要求：要点齐全；表达通顺； 简洁得体。
Dear 8th-graders,
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Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear 8th-graders,
Hw time flies! Nw I am graduating frm ur schl. In Grade 9, I have learnt a lt. Althugh it was hard, I made great prgress in my grades. I thank my ninth grade life, which helps me grw up. At the mment, I wuld like t share my experience f schl life with yu.
It is nt enugh t just study hard. There are sme gd ways t imprve ur study. Different subjects need different ways. But ne thing in cmmn is taking ntes carefully in class, and review them after class. Anther thing is asking questins during r after class. Besides, dn’t be afraid f making mistakes, try t learn frm mistakes. Yu shuld als exercise mre and keep healthy because it is the mst imprtant thing fr yu.
Wish yu all the best.
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据题干中的提示内容给八年级的学弟学妹们写一则寄语。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，介绍自己对九年级生活的看法；
第三步，向八年级的学弟学妹们介绍学习的一些建议；
第四步，表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
①make prgress取得进步
②grw up成长
③in cmmn共同的
④be afraid f ding sth.害怕做某事
[高分句型]
①Althugh it was hard, I made great prgress in my grades.(althugh引导的让步状语从句)
②I thank my ninth grade life, which helps me grw up.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
7．今年五一期间，大量人们乘坐动车出行，很多站点出现一票难求的情况。人们在享受动车带来的便利时，也应该注意一些乘车细节，只有人人自觉遵规守纪，才能营造良好的乘车环境。请你根据以下思维导图，给旅客朋友们写一些动车搭乘建议。字数80词左右。
行李架: luggage rack 过道: crridr
Nwadays, mre and mre peple chse t travel by high-speed train. While they’re enjying the cnvenience, they shuld als pay attentin t sme rules f train taking.
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【答案】例文：
Nwadays, mre and mre peple chse t travel by high-speed train. While they’re enjying the cnvenience, they shuld als pay attentin t sme rules f train taking. As sn as peple bard the train, they shuld put away their luggage. Dn’t leave the luggage n the crridr because it will cause truble t thers wh are mving arund. When peple rest n their seats, they shuld keep quiet. Try nt t disturb anyne nearby with the high sund frm the mbile phnes r ther equipments. Always talk plitely with thers in a lw vice. If peple need t use the tray tables in frnt them, they shuld put them dwn lightly withut bringing any side effect t the passengers sitting befre them. One mre thing peple shuld keep in mind is never littering everywhere n the train. Even thugh there’re cleaners cleaning up litter, it’s everyne’s duty t keep the train tidy.
If all peple can fllw that advice strictly, they’re certain t have an enjyable travel.
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏思维导图中动车搭乘建议的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，借用“简单介绍动车搭乘建议”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从“放行李、小心用桌板、保持安静、不要乱扔垃圾等”几个方面重点介绍动车搭乘建议的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语：如果所有人都能严格遵守这一建议，他们一定会有一次愉快的旅行。
[亮点词汇]
①pay attentin t关注
②as sn as一……就……
③cause truble制造麻烦
[高分句型]
①When peple rest n their seats, they shuld keep quiet.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②If all peple can fllw that advice strictly, they’re certain t have an enjyable travel.（if引导的条件状语从句）
8．假定你是李华，下周你的英国朋友Alan要来北京游玩，并发来如下邮件。请给Alan回复一封邮件。
Hi Alan,
I’m s happy t get yur email saying that yu’re cming t visit us next week.
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I’m lking frward t meeting yu!
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Hi Alan,
I’m s happy t get yur email saying that yu’re cming t visit us next week. Since yu are ging n a lng flight, I suggest yu make a list f things yu take. It is a bit ht in summer here. S yu can take T-shirts and sunglasses with yu. I think it’s a gd idea t g t sme places f interest tgether, such as the Palace Museum and the Great Wall. Yu will learn a lt abut Chinese culture and histry. As fr the suvenir, I like cllecting pstcards and bks frm different places. D yu have any pstcards f Twer Bridge? That wuld suit me fine. Thanks!
I’m lking frward t meeting yu!
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为邮件作文；
②时态：采用“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息，可适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍旅行需要带的东西；
第二步，介绍中国的历史和著名景点；
第三步，介绍喜欢的纪念品。
[亮点词汇]
①a bit有点儿
②as fr至于
③places f interest风景名胜
④such as比如
[高分句型]
①Since yu are ging n a lng flight, I suggest yu make a list f things yu take.（since引导原因状语从句）
②I think it’s a gd idea t g t sme places f interest tgether, such as the Palace Museum and the Great Wall.（宾语从句）
9．校园安全关系到每一位师生的生命安全，因此维护校园安全是非常重要的。请根据如图提示，结合自己的生活实际，以“Hw t Keep Schl Safety?”为题写一篇英语短文。

要求：
（1）要点齐全，适当发挥；
（2）词数：80词左右；
（3）书写工整规范；
（4）标题和首句已给出，不计入总词数；
（5）文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Hw t Keep Schl Safety?
Schl safety is clsely related t us. When it cmes t schl safety, we must take it seriusly.
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【答案】例文
Hw t Keep Schl Safety?
Schl safety is clsely related t us. When it cmes t schl safety, we must take it seriusly. But hw can we keep safe? Here are sme suggestins.
First, we shuld get n well with ur classmates at schl. Dn’t run after each ther. If we really have truble in cmmunicating with them, we can ask ur teachers fr help. Secnd, we shuld be careful when we make friends, especially n line. We shuldn’t meet net-friends alne. Third, we’d better buy and eat fd carefully. We shuld eat healthy fd such as vegetables and fruit. Dn’t eat junk fd. Eating fd that ges bad will d harm t ur health. Furth, we must bey the traffic rules when we g ut. Dn’t crss the street when the traffic lights are red. Besides, summer is cming and we must remember it’s dangerus t swim in the river.
In a wrd, safety must cme first!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据题干中的提示内容介绍如何维护校园安全，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，根据题干中的提示详细介绍如何维护校园安全；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①get n well with和某人和谐相处
②such as例如
③in a wrd总的来说
[高分句型]
①If we really have truble in cmmunicating with them, we can ask ur teachers fr help.(if引导的条件状语从句)
②Secnd, we shuld be careful when we make friends, especially n line.(when引导的时间状语从句)
10．新时代的学习没有完成时，只有进行时。积累知识，增长见识是一辈子的事情，我们既要读万卷书，更要行万里路。如何才能“留”住旅途中的所见、所闻、所感呢？请你结合下面的内容提示，从旅行的意义、旅行的经历和旅行见闻的记录方法等方面用英文写一篇短文发表观点。
内容提示：
What d yu think f travelling?
What is yur mst memrable travel experience?
What did yu d t recrd the experience?
Tell smething mre abut this tpic.
注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息：词数60﹣80；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Always n the Rad
Learning is a lifelng jurney because every day brings smething new. As the ld saying ges, “Read as many as ten thusand bks and travel as far as ten thusand miles.”
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hpe yu can achieve a better self and life.
【答案】例文
Always n the Rad
Learning is a lifelng jurney because every day brings smething new. As the ld saying ges, “Read as many as ten thusand bks and travel as far as ten thusand miles.”
Travel is an imprtant activity. Nt nly can it help us increase ur knwledge, it als allws us t step ut f ur cmfrt zne and challenge urselves. I’ve climbed snwy muntains, surfed waves, tried paragliding and s n. I felt the pwer f nature. I think it is imprtant fr all f us t make an effrt t travel and explre the wrld arund us. There are s many gd memries during the trips. I have taken many phts and kept diaries t share with my families and friends. It always brings us great jy. S, cme n! Pack yur bags and hit the rad.
Hpe yu can achieve a better self and life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你觉得旅行怎么样。
第二步，介绍你最难忘的旅行经历是什么。
第三步，介绍你做了什么来记录这次经历。
[亮点词汇]
①as far as就……而言
②step ut f走出
③taken many phts拍了很多照片
④s many很多
[高分句型]
①Nt nly can it help us increase ur knwledge, it als allws us t step ut f ur cmfrt zne and challenge urselves.（Nt nly引导的倒装句）
②I think it is imprtant fr all f us t make an effrt t travel and explre the wrld arund us.（I think+宾语从句）
③There are s many gd memries during the trips.（there be句型）
提出建议类文章
内容
经典句式
第一段
针对某一主题提出建议
Here are sme suggestins n hw t learn English.
Hw can we keep healthy?
What shuld we d t keep fit?[来源:学_科_网]
The fllwing are my suggestins( n ……)
第二段
阐述具体的建议
Yu shuld/ ught t ……
Yu had better d/nt d……
Why nt…… /Why dn’t yu ……
It is gd/ wise t ……
Yu mustn't ……/Dn’t ……
第三段
号召按建议采取行动
Let’s take actins frm nw n t ……
If yu fllwing the suggestins abve, yu will……
Only in this way, can we ……
If yu d s/ keep n ding that, yu will ……
Thus, I suggest sb (shuld )d sth .
针对现象，分析原因， 提出建议类文章
内容
经典句式
第一段
描述现象
Nwadays, the cmputer is playing an imprtant rle in ur daily life.
With the develpment f technlgy, mre and mre students are using smart phnes.
As we all knw, mst middle schl students spend little time ding sprts.
It is knwn t all that many students have t take varius classes in their spare time.
第二段
分析原因
First f all, Secndly, Thirdly, What’s mre, Besides, Finally
Fr ne thing, Fr anther thing, Besides
On the ne hand, On the ther hand
第三段
提出建议
Yu shuld/ ught t ……
Yu had better d/nt d……
Why nt……/Why dn’t yu ……
It is gd/ wise t ……
Yu mustn't ……/Dn’t ……
近视原因
长时间使用电子产品；
读书时间过长。
建议
控制使用电子产品时间；
养成好习惯（如饮食、做眼保健操）
……
希望
……
Implite behavirs
Opinins
Advice
thrw rubbish everywhere
implite ...
put ... int dustbins ...
pick flwers in a park
...
put up signs ...
speak ludly in public places
...
make rules ...
TO LiPing@mail.cm
SUBJECT C U sn!
Hi Li Ping
Next week I’ll be with yu in Hangzhu. I can’t wait! It’s ging t be s cl! We can d lts f exciting things tgether! I need t pack fr my trip. What shuld I bring with me? Is there a swimming pl r tennis center nearby?
I’d like t get yu a gift frm where I live. What wuld yu like me t get yu?
I’m s excited abut the trip! See yu sn.
Jack
学习主题
Learning Theme
活动安排
Activity Schedule
课时数量
Number f Lessns
实境英语听说
Real-life English Listening and Speaking
听写句子，口头交际
5
英语报刊阅读
Newspaper and Magazine Reading in English
阅读报刊，完成练习
3
英语国家文化与风俗
Culture and Custms f English-speaking Cuntries
观看视频，书面介绍
1
推荐理由
喜欢阅读
书籍帮助她了解许多中国文化，为她开启一个新世界。
吃苦耐劳
从不介意花很多时间组织各项班级活动，将中国文化介绍给外国友人。
能歌善舞
有音乐天赋，歌声优美，能边演奏边创作音乐，擅长跳舞。
擅长绘画
善于用颜色调节情绪，由于不懈的努力，曾在绘画竞赛中获奖。
乐于助人
当过志愿者，曾帮慈善机构募集资金；（另举一例…）。
Hi,
Next week I’ll be with yu in Beijing. I can’t wait! We culd d lts f exciting things tgether. And nw I need t pack fr my trip. What shuld I bring with me?
Since I am interested in histry and culture f China, I want t knw where we will g.
I’d like t get yu sme suvenirs（纪念品）frm where I live. What wuld yu like me t get yu?
I’m s excited abut the trip! See yu sn.
Alan