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根据前文续写：（本文改编自《Education of Love》系列之《The quarrel》 It was not out of envy, because he got the prize and I did not, that quarrelled with Coretti this morning. No, it was not out of envy. Still I was in the wrong. The teacher had placed him beside me, and I was writing in my copy-book when he jogged my elbow and made me blot and soil the monthly story, Blood of Romagna. I got angry, and said a rude word to him. He replied, with a smile, “I did not do it on purpose.”I should have believed him, because I know him; but it displeased me that he should smile, and I thought: “ Oh! Now that he has had a prize, he has grown arrogant and over-proud!” and a little while afterwards, to revenge myself, I gave him jog which made him spoil his page.Then, Coretti’s face flushed with anger, “You did that on purpose,” he said to me, and raised his hand. The teacher saw it; he drew it back. But he added: “I shall wait for you outside!” I felt ill at ease; my wrath had simmered away; I regretted. No; Coretti could not have done it intentionally. He is good, I thought. I recalled how I had seen him in his own home; how he had worked and helped his sick mother; and then how heartily he had been welcomed in my house; and how he had pleased my father. What would I not have given; not to have said that word to him; not to have insulted him! And I thought of the advice that my father had given to me: “Have you done wrong?--“Yes.”-- “Then beg his pardon.” But this I did not dare to do; I was ashamed to humiliate myself. I looked at him out of the corner of my eye, and I saw his coat ripped on the shoulder -perhaps because he had carried too much wood,--and I felt that I loved him. I said to myself, “Courage!” But the words, “pardon me,” stuck in my throat.He looked at me askance from time to time, but seemed more grieved than angry. And I looked crossly at him, to show him that I was not afraid. He repeated, “We shall meet outside! ”And I said, “We shall meet outside!” But I was thinking of what my father had once said to me, “If you are in the wrong, defend yourself, but do not fight.”And I said to myself, “I will defend myself, but I will not fight.” But I was discontented, and I no longer listened to the master. Paragraph 1：At last the moment of dismissal arrived. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2: He kissed me, and said: “We’ll have no more quarrels, will we?” .__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________One possible version:At last the moment of dismissal arrived. When I was alone outside in the street I perceived that Correti was following me. I stopped and waited for him, ruler in hand. He came up; I raised my ruler, afraid.“No, Enrico,” he said, with his kindly smile, waving the ruler aside with his hand, “let us be friends again, as before.”I stood still in amazement, and then I felt what seemed to be a push on my shoulders, and I found myself in his arms. He kissed me, and said: “We’ll have no more quarrels, will we?” “Never again! Never again!” I replied. And we parted content. But when I went home, and told my father all about it, thinking to give him pleasure, his face clouded over, and he said: “You should have been the first to offer your hand, since you were in the wrong.” Then he added, “You should not raise your ruler at a friend who is better than you are --at the son of a soldier! ”and snatching the ruler from my hand, he broke in two, and hurled it against the wall.文章主题：人与社会—“嫉妒同学获奖，故意找茬”本文大意：Coretti 得奖了，作者“我”心里妒忌，但又不能表现出来，就故意找茬，弄坏了Coretti的本子。 Coretti很生气，扬言要在校外等我，我想起了Coretti 的平时的好，认为自己做的有点过火了，但嘴上却不认输。甚至带了把尺子放学后去见Coretti. 原以为Coretti真的在校外会跟我打架，但事实上他却一如既往对我好，跟我握手言和。 明知自己有错在先，我却没有跨出“道歉”那一步。适合学生多少词汇量： 3000左右学生收获： 本文有大量关于“生气”、“故意找茬”及描写孩子”内心纠结”的词汇和句式，可以丰富人与人之间续写题材的写作内容。本文中核心、生疏词汇及拓展:1. jog(v.) to hit sth lightly and by accident 轻击， 轻碰翻译：有人不小心轻轻碰了一下她的胳膊肘儿，把咖啡弄洒了。_______________________________________________________________________________2. blot (v.) mark or stain (something) 弄脏，涂污翻译： 她的书写乱七八糟，墨渍斑斑。_______________________________________________________________________________3. simmer (v.) to be filled with a strong feeling, especially anger, which you have difficulty conrolling 充满（难以控制的感情，尤指愤怒）翻译：他心里郁结着怒火。_______________________________________________________________________________4. insult. ( v. ) to say or do sth that offends sb. 辱骂；冒犯翻译：我一生中从未如此侮辱过！_______________________________________________________________________________5. humiliate ( v. ) to make sb feel ashamed or stupid and lose the respect of other people 羞辱； 使丧失尊严 翻译：我不想当着她同事们的面令她难堪。_______________________________________________________________________________6. look (at sb./sth) askance: to look at or react to sb./sth with suspicion or doubt, or in a critical way. (怀疑或不满地）斜眼看，瞟翻译：储蓄罐看着他们尽情地玩耍，很是不屑一顾。_______________________________________________________________________________原文自我检测：Coretti的动作篇：1. 科雷蒂的胳膊碰了我一下，结果我字没写好，墨水洒在了每月故事上。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2. 他说着，还抬起了手。见老师正看着，他就把手缩了回去。_______________________________________________________________________________3. 科雷蒂不时斜着眼看我，我觉得他好像很痛苦，而不是气愤。_______________________________________________________________________________“我”的动作篇：1. 我也使劲碰了他一下，把他的本子也弄脏了。_______________________________________________________________________________2. 我拿眼角看着他，发现他毛衣的肩膀出都开线了。_______________________________________________________________________________内心纠结篇：1. 科雷蒂不可能是成心的，他是个多么好的人。_______________________________________________________________________________2. 我想起在他家看到他的样子，看到他如何干活，如何照顾生病的妈妈。_______________________________________________________________________________3. 我真不应该对他说那样的话，真不该侮辱他。_______________________________________________________________________________4. 可这次我不敢承认错误，我怕丢脸。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5. 可“请你原谅” 这几个字却卡在喉咙里说不出口。_______________________________________________________________________________范文自我检测：Paragraph 1：1. 我独自一人走到大街上时，看到科雷蒂跟在我后面。_______________________________________________________________________________2. 我停下来等他，手里拿着一把尺子,心里有点害怕。_______________________________________________________________________________3. 他走到我跟前，我举起了尺子。_______________________________________________________________________________4. “不”，他还是微笑着，用手挡住我的尺子。_______________________________________________________________________________5. 我一时呆住了，然后感觉好像有一只手使劲推了我肩膀一下。_______________________________________________________________________________6. 我不由自主地就在他的怀里了。_______________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2：1. 我们开心地分手了。_______________________________________________________________________________2. 我本想让爸爸高兴一下，可是爸爸沉下脸对我说，“应该是你主动和好，因为你错了。”_______________________________________________________________________________3. 你就不应该举起尺子对着一个比你好的同学。_______________________________________________________________________________他从我手里夺过尺子，折成两截，扔到墙角去了_______________________________________________________________________________参考答案：核心、生疏词汇拓展仿写：Someone jogged her elbow, making her spill her coffee.Her writing was messy and blotted.Anger simmered inside him.I have never been so insulted in my life.I didn’t want to humiliate her in front of her colleagues.The piggy bank looked down at them playing and watched with an askance look.原文自我检测：Coretti的动作篇：1. Coretti jogged my elbow and made me blot and soil the monthly story.2. He said something to me, and raised his hand. The teacher saw it; he drew it back.3. Coretti looked at me askance from time to time, but seemed more grieved than angry.“我”的动作篇：1. I gave him jog which made him spoil his page.2. I looked at him out of the corner of my eye, and I saw his coat ripped on the shoulder内心纠结篇： Coretti could not have done it intentionally. He is good, I thought.I recalled how I had seen him in his own home; how he had worked and helped his sick mother.What would I not have given; not to have said that word to him; not to have insulted him!But this I did not dare to beg his pardon; I was ashamed to humiliate myself.But the words, “pardon me,” stuck in my throat.范文自我检测Paragraph 1：When I was alone outside in the street I perceived that Correti was following me.I stopped and waited for him, ruler in hand.He came up; I raised my ruler, afraid.“No, Enrico,” he said, with his kindly smile, waving the ruler aside with his hand.I stood still in amazement, and then I felt what seemed to be a push on my shoulders.I found myself in his arms.Paragraph 2：we parted content. I told my father all about it, thinking to give him pleasure, his face clouded over, and he said: “You should have been the first to offer your hand, since you were in the wrong.”You should not raise your ruler at a friend who is better than you are.Snatching the ruler from my hand, he broke in two, and hurled it against the wall.更多的关于“人与人交往过程中”动作描写：She sighed and threw her hands in the air in frustration before marching back to the staircase. 她叹了口气，无奈地摊开双手，又走回楼梯口。 One day he was perfectly content, playing at home, having three best friends for life, sliding down banisters, trying to stand on his tiptoes to see right across Berlin. 曾经，他对一切都非常满意，在家玩耍，有三个一生中最好的朋友，在楼梯扶手上玩滑梯，垫着脚看柏林。He placed his hands in the pockets of his short trousers and attempted to whistle a song he knew while not looking at his sister at all.他把手插在裤兜里，嘴里吹着口哨，眼睛根本不看他的姐姐。Bruno swallowed nervously and, after a few moments' silence, glanced back at Father, who was staring at him stony-faced. Bruno licked his lips and looked away.布鲁诺紧张地咽了咽口水，沉默了一会儿，抬头看着父亲，父亲正铁青着脸看着他。布鲁诺舔了舔嘴唇，看了看别处。5.Maria's eyes opened wide and she took a step towards him, her hands covering her mouth for a moment in horror. 玛丽娅睁大了眼睛，向他迈了一步，因为害怕而用手在嘴上捂了好一会儿。6.All in all, he began to feel very awkward, so he turned his back on her and made his way to the door.总而言之，他觉得很难堪，于是背对着玛丽娅，朝门口走去。关于“内心纠结”描写：She was twisting her hands together nervously as if there was something she didn’t want to have or something she didn’t want to have to believe. So he tapped carefully on the door.Twice, and quietly.Maria opened her mouth to say something and then closed it again just as quickly.知识迁移：尝试用上文中的语言迁移续写2019年5月诸暨适应性考试读后续写的第二段 One possible version:Back home, I told my mother what I had promised the detective. She opened her mouth to say something and then closed it again just as quickly, sighing, her face clouded over. I swallowed nervously but gathered my courage, promising that it would never ever happen again. "All will be OK!" said my mother. I felt what seemed to be a push on my shoulders and I found myself in her arms. Then she told me that she would go to the A&P to tell the detective I had admitted and that I should play outside. Hours later, when I was back home, I noticed a bag with my name on it. I opened it in amazement and packed inside was the World Book Encyclopedia, volume I.
根据前文续写：（本文改编自《Education of Love》系列之《The quarrel》 It was not out of envy, because he got the prize and I did not, that quarrelled with Coretti this morning. No, it was not out of envy. Still I was in the wrong. The teacher had placed him beside me, and I was writing in my copy-book when he jogged my elbow and made me blot and soil the monthly story, Blood of Romagna. I got angry, and said a rude word to him. He replied, with a smile, “I did not do it on purpose.”I should have believed him, because I know him; but it displeased me that he should smile, and I thought: “ Oh! Now that he has had a prize, he has grown arrogant and over-proud!” and a little while afterwards, to revenge myself, I gave him jog which made him spoil his page.Then, Coretti’s face flushed with anger, “You did that on purpose,” he said to me, and raised his hand. The teacher saw it; he drew it back. But he added: “I shall wait for you outside!” I felt ill at ease; my wrath had simmered away; I regretted. No; Coretti could not have done it intentionally. He is good, I thought. I recalled how I had seen him in his own home; how he had worked and helped his sick mother; and then how heartily he had been welcomed in my house; and how he had pleased my father. What would I not have given; not to have said that word to him; not to have insulted him! And I thought of the advice that my father had given to me: “Have you done wrong?--“Yes.”-- “Then beg his pardon.” But this I did not dare to do; I was ashamed to humiliate myself. I looked at him out of the corner of my eye, and I saw his coat ripped on the shoulder -perhaps because he had carried too much wood,--and I felt that I loved him. I said to myself, “Courage!” But the words, “pardon me,” stuck in my throat.He looked at me askance from time to time, but seemed more grieved than angry. And I looked crossly at him, to show him that I was not afraid. He repeated, “We shall meet outside! ”And I said, “We shall meet outside!” But I was thinking of what my father had once said to me, “If you are in the wrong, defend yourself, but do not fight.”And I said to myself, “I will defend myself, but I will not fight.” But I was discontented, and I no longer listened to the master. Paragraph 1：At last the moment of dismissal arrived. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2: He kissed me, and said: “We’ll have no more quarrels, will we?” .__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________One possible version:At last the moment of dismissal arrived. When I was alone outside in the street I perceived that Correti was following me. I stopped and waited for him, ruler in hand. He came up; I raised my ruler, afraid.“No, Enrico,” he said, with his kindly smile, waving the ruler aside with his hand, “let us be friends again, as before.”I stood still in amazement, and then I felt what seemed to be a push on my shoulders, and I found myself in his arms. He kissed me, and said: “We’ll have no more quarrels, will we?” “Never again! Never again!” I replied. And we parted content. But when I went home, and told my father all about it, thinking to give him pleasure, his face clouded over, and he said: “You should have been the first to offer your hand, since you were in the wrong.” Then he added, “You should not raise your ruler at a friend who is better than you are --at the son of a soldier! ”and snatching the ruler from my hand, he broke in two, and hurled it against the wall.文章主题：人与社会—“嫉妒同学获奖，故意找茬”本文大意：Coretti 得奖了，作者“我”心里妒忌，但又不能表现出来，就故意找茬，弄坏了Coretti的本子。 Coretti很生气，扬言要在校外等我，我想起了Coretti 的平时的好，认为自己做的有点过火了，但嘴上却不认输。甚至带了把尺子放学后去见Coretti. 原以为Coretti真的在校外会跟我打架，但事实上他却一如既往对我好，跟我握手言和。 明知自己有错在先，我却没有跨出“道歉”那一步。适合学生多少词汇量： 3000左右学生收获： 本文有大量关于“生气”、“故意找茬”及描写孩子”内心纠结”的词汇和句式，可以丰富人与人之间续写题材的写作内容。本文中核心、生疏词汇及拓展:1. jog(v.) to hit sth lightly and by accident 轻击， 轻碰翻译：有人不小心轻轻碰了一下她的胳膊肘儿，把咖啡弄洒了。_______________________________________________________________________________2. blot (v.) mark or stain (something) 弄脏，涂污翻译： 她的书写乱七八糟，墨渍斑斑。_______________________________________________________________________________3. simmer (v.) to be filled with a strong feeling, especially anger, which you have difficulty conrolling 充满（难以控制的感情，尤指愤怒）翻译：他心里郁结着怒火。_______________________________________________________________________________4. insult. ( v. ) to say or do sth that offends sb. 辱骂；冒犯翻译：我一生中从未如此侮辱过！_______________________________________________________________________________5. humiliate ( v. ) to make sb feel ashamed or stupid and lose the respect of other people 羞辱； 使丧失尊严 翻译：我不想当着她同事们的面令她难堪。_______________________________________________________________________________6. look (at sb./sth) askance: to look at or react to sb./sth with suspicion or doubt, or in a critical way. (怀疑或不满地）斜眼看，瞟翻译：储蓄罐看着他们尽情地玩耍，很是不屑一顾。_______________________________________________________________________________原文自我检测：Coretti的动作篇：1. 科雷蒂的胳膊碰了我一下，结果我字没写好，墨水洒在了每月故事上。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2. 他说着，还抬起了手。见老师正看着，他就把手缩了回去。_______________________________________________________________________________3. 科雷蒂不时斜着眼看我，我觉得他好像很痛苦，而不是气愤。_______________________________________________________________________________“我”的动作篇：1. 我也使劲碰了他一下，把他的本子也弄脏了。_______________________________________________________________________________2. 我拿眼角看着他，发现他毛衣的肩膀出都开线了。_______________________________________________________________________________内心纠结篇：1. 科雷蒂不可能是成心的，他是个多么好的人。_______________________________________________________________________________2. 我想起在他家看到他的样子，看到他如何干活，如何照顾生病的妈妈。_______________________________________________________________________________3. 我真不应该对他说那样的话，真不该侮辱他。_______________________________________________________________________________4. 可这次我不敢承认错误，我怕丢脸。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5. 可“请你原谅” 这几个字却卡在喉咙里说不出口。_______________________________________________________________________________范文自我检测：Paragraph 1：1. 我独自一人走到大街上时，看到科雷蒂跟在我后面。_______________________________________________________________________________2. 我停下来等他，手里拿着一把尺子,心里有点害怕。_______________________________________________________________________________3. 他走到我跟前，我举起了尺子。_______________________________________________________________________________4. “不”，他还是微笑着，用手挡住我的尺子。_______________________________________________________________________________5. 我一时呆住了，然后感觉好像有一只手使劲推了我肩膀一下。_______________________________________________________________________________6. 我不由自主地就在他的怀里了。_______________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2：1. 我们开心地分手了。_______________________________________________________________________________2. 我本想让爸爸高兴一下，可是爸爸沉下脸对我说，“应该是你主动和好，因为你错了。”_______________________________________________________________________________3. 你就不应该举起尺子对着一个比你好的同学。_______________________________________________________________________________他从我手里夺过尺子，折成两截，扔到墙角去了_______________________________________________________________________________参考答案：核心、生疏词汇拓展仿写：Someone jogged her elbow, making her spill her coffee.Her writing was messy and blotted.Anger simmered inside him.I have never been so insulted in my life.I didn’t want to humiliate her in front of her colleagues.The piggy bank looked down at them playing and watched with an askance look.原文自我检测：Coretti的动作篇：1. Coretti jogged my elbow and made me blot and soil the monthly story.2. He said something to me, and raised his hand. The teacher saw it; he drew it back.3. Coretti looked at me askance from time to time, but seemed more grieved than angry.“我”的动作篇：1. I gave him jog which made him spoil his page.2. I looked at him out of the corner of my eye, and I saw his coat ripped on the shoulder内心纠结篇： Coretti could not have done it intentionally. He is good, I thought.I recalled how I had seen him in his own home; how he had worked and helped his sick mother.What would I not have given; not to have said that word to him; not to have insulted him!But this I did not dare to beg his pardon; I was ashamed to humiliate myself.But the words, “pardon me,” stuck in my throat.范文自我检测Paragraph 1：When I was alone outside in the street I perceived that Correti was following me.I stopped and waited for him, ruler in hand.He came up; I raised my ruler, afraid.“No, Enrico,” he said, with his kindly smile, waving the ruler aside with his hand.I stood still in amazement, and then I felt what seemed to be a push on my shoulders.I found myself in his arms.Paragraph 2：we parted content. I told my father all about it, thinking to give him pleasure, his face clouded over, and he said: “You should have been the first to offer your hand, since you were in the wrong.”You should not raise your ruler at a friend who is better than you are.Snatching the ruler from my hand, he broke in two, and hurled it against the wall.更多的关于“人与人交往过程中”动作描写：She sighed and threw her hands in the air in frustration before marching back to the staircase. 她叹了口气，无奈地摊开双手，又走回楼梯口。 One day he was perfectly content, playing at home, having three best friends for life, sliding down banisters, trying to stand on his tiptoes to see right across Berlin. 曾经，他对一切都非常满意，在家玩耍，有三个一生中最好的朋友，在楼梯扶手上玩滑梯，垫着脚看柏林。He placed his hands in the pockets of his short trousers and attempted to whistle a song he knew while not looking at his sister at all.他把手插在裤兜里，嘴里吹着口哨，眼睛根本不看他的姐姐。Bruno swallowed nervously and, after a few moments' silence, glanced back at Father, who was staring at him stony-faced. Bruno licked his lips and looked away.布鲁诺紧张地咽了咽口水，沉默了一会儿，抬头看着父亲，父亲正铁青着脸看着他。布鲁诺舔了舔嘴唇，看了看别处。5.Maria's eyes opened wide and she took a step towards him, her hands covering her mouth for a moment in horror. 玛丽娅睁大了眼睛，向他迈了一步，因为害怕而用手在嘴上捂了好一会儿。6.All in all, he began to feel very awkward, so he turned his back on her and made his way to the door.总而言之，他觉得很难堪，于是背对着玛丽娅，朝门口走去。关于“内心纠结”描写：She was twisting her hands together nervously as if there was something she didn’t want to have or something she didn’t want to have to believe. So he tapped carefully on the door.Twice, and quietly.Maria opened her mouth to say something and then closed it again just as quickly.知识迁移：尝试用上文中的语言迁移续写2019年5月诸暨适应性考试读后续写的第二段 One possible version:Back home, I told my mother what I had promised the detective. She opened her mouth to say something and then closed it again just as quickly, sighing, her face clouded over. I swallowed nervously but gathered my courage, promising that it would never ever happen again. "All will be OK!" said my mother. I felt what seemed to be a push on my shoulders and I found myself in her arms. Then she told me that she would go to the A&P to tell the detective I had admitted and that I should play outside. Hours later, when I was back home, I noticed a bag with my name on it. I opened it in amazement and packed inside was the World Book Encyclopedia, volume I.
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