7续写真题2021浙江卷1月南瓜卡头课件PPT

这是一份7续写真题2021浙江卷1月南瓜卡头课件PPT，共23页。PPT课件主要包含了列大纲两段12句法，写句式 招招升级等内容，欢迎下载使用。

读原文 划要素 填表格
读P1P2首句 定情节发展
列大纲 两段12句法
Pumpkin (南瓜) carving at Hallween is a family traditin. We visit a lcal farm every Octber. In the pumpkin field, I cmpete with my three brthers and sister t seek ut the biggest pumpkin. My dad has a rule that we have t carry ur pumpkins back hme, and as the eldest child I have an advantage-I carried an 85-punder back last year. This year, it was hard t tell whether my prize r the ne chsen by my 14-year-ld brther, Jasn, was the winner. Unfrtunately we frgt t weigh them befre taking ut their insides, but I was determined t prve my pint. All f us were hard at wrk at the kitchen table, with my mm filming the annual event. I’m unsure nw why I thught frcing my head inside the pumpkin wuld settle the matter, but it seemed t make perfect sense at the time.
2021年浙江卷真题原文
With the pumpkin resting n the table, hle uppermst, I bent ver and pressed my head against the pening. At first I gt jammed just abve my eyes and then, as I went n with my task, unwilling t quit, my nse briefly prevented entry. Finally I managed t put my whle head int it, like a crk (软木塞) frced int a bttle. I was able t straighten up with the huge pumpkin resting n my shulders. My excitement was shrt-lived. The pumpkin was heavy. “I’m ging t set it dwn, nw,” I said, and with Jasn helping t supprt its weight, I bent back ver the table t give it smewhere t rest. It was nly when I tried t remve my head that I realized getting ut was ging t be less straightfrward than getting in. When I pulled hard, my nse gt in the way. I gt int a panic as I pressed firmly against the table and mved my head arund trying t find the right angle, but it was n use. “I can’t get it ut!” I shuted, my vice sunding unnaturally lud in the enclsed space.
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It was five r six minutes thugh it felt much lnger. _______________________________________________________The vide was psted the Mnday befre Hallween. _______________________________________________________
It was five r six minutes thugh it felt much lnger.The vide was psted the Mnday befre Hallween.
读P1P2首句 定情节发展
Hw was my head released?
I ; Jasn; Mm
①Hw did I feel?
②What did I d?
③T help me, what did Jasn d?
⑤What did Mm d?
④T help me, what did thers d?
读P1P2首句 定情节发展
The vide was a hit and everyne was surprised.
① Hw did I feel?
④Hw did I change accrding t the vide?
The vide was psted the Mnday befre Hallween.
I; Mm ; Jasn
②Hw did Jasn feel?
②Hw did mm feel?
列大纲：两段12句法
思考：12句话中，有哪几句是固定内容？
列大纲：两段12句法
列大纲：两段12句法
Trapped in it, I tried ut .
The vide was a hit.
I fund mm sht it.
I was frightened.
Jasn prpsed call the fire department.
My head was released.
I felt embarrassed at first.
Then I felt relieved
The vide is a reminder.
Thanks t mm.
I asked dad fr help.
We were surprised.
Step 4. 写句式 招招升级
e.g.:1）Trapped in the pumpkin, I gasped fr air, my thrat dry and face burning up. 2） I wrestled with the prblem, attempting t squeeze my head ut f it, but in vain.
招式1： 非谓语动词常用句式： ① ...,ding ② Ding..., ③ Having dne..., ...
写句式 招招升级
e.g.:3） S frightened was I that I pulled, and banged the pumpkin frantically.
招式2：“s ... that ...” 因果关系逻辑强，动作情绪全包含， 想更高级也容易，s提前变成倒装
写句式 招招升级
e.g.:4）My head was finally released and it was then that I realized my mm had been filming the whle incident.
招式3： 强调句 “It was ... that/wh ...”
写句式 招招升级
e.g.:5）Realizing the gravity f the situatin, Jasn prpsed calling the fire department, while thers giggled , which made my bld bil.
招式3： 定语从句 “先行词n. + 关系代词/关系副词 + 定语从句 ”
水到渠成 范文赏析
lt was five r six minutes thugh it felt much lnger. Trapped in the pumpkin, I gasped fr air, my thrat dry and face burning up. It was a trment fr me. I wrestled with the prblem, attempting t squeeze my head ut f it, but in vain. S frightened was I that I pulled, and banged the pumpkin frantically. Realizing the gravity f the situatin, Jasn prpsed calling the fire department, while thers giggled , which made my bld bil. I cried and screamed , driving my dad t dash t me. He helped me push my head farther int the pumpkin and reached his hand in t lsen my pnytail. My head was finally released and it was then that I realized my mm had been filming the whle incident.
范文赏析
The vide was psted nline the Mnday befre Hallween. When I lgged in my Facebk I fund myself dumbfunded by the abundant likes I received frm thse wh had seen the vide. Brwsing their messages , I felt a wave f warmth. Jasn was delighted that he became famus vernight. Mther culd never have imagined that her vide culd receive s many page views and thus she grew even crazier abut shting vides. The nasty dilemma was melted in the psitive respnses , the heartfelt cmfrt as well as the cuntless similar stries shared by thse strangers. Thanks t Mm , the vide turned ut t be a reminder, a captured memrable mment ,a recllectin f festive happiness, clred by hearty human interactins.
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