10续写真题2020浙江卷1月抚养小狗课件PPT

这是一份10续写真题2020浙江卷1月抚养小狗课件PPT，共25页。PPT课件主要包含了列大纲两段12句法，写句式 招招升级等内容，欢迎下载使用。

读原文 划要素 填表格
读P1P2首句 定情节发展
列大纲 两段12句法
“I’m ging t miss yu s much, Pppy,” said the tall, thin teenager. He bent dwn t hug his ld friend gdbye. He std up, hugged his parents, and smiled, trying nt t let his emtins（情绪） get the better f him.His parents were nt quite able t keep theirs under cntrl. They had driven their sn several hurs ut f twn t the university where he wuld sn be living and studying. It was time t say gdbye fr nw at least. The family hugged and smiled thrugh misty eyes and then laughed.The by lifted the last bag nt his shulder, and flashed a bright smile. “I guess this is it,” he said. “I’ll see yu back hme in a mnth, kay?” His parents ndded, and they watched as he walked ut f sight int the crwds f hundreds f students and parents. The by’s mther turned t the dg, “Okay, Pppy, time t g back hme.”
2020年新I卷真题原文
The huse seemed quiet as a tmb withut the by living there. All that week, Pppy didn’t seem interested in her dinner, her favrite ty, r even in her daily walk. Her wners were sad t, but they knew their sn wuld be back t visit. Pppy didn’t.They ffered the dg sme f her favrite peanut butter treats. They even let her sit n the sfa, but the ld girl just wasn’t her usual cheerful self. Her wners started t get wrried. “What shuld we d t cheer Pppy up?” asked Dad. “We’ve tried everything.”“I have an idea, but it might be a little crazy,” smiled Mm. “Withut anybdy left in the huse but us, this place culd use a bit f fun. Let’s get a little dg fr Pppy.It didn’t take lng befre they walked thrugh the frnt dr carrying a big bx. Pppy welcmed them hme as usual but when she saw the bx, she stpped. She put her nse n it. Her tail began wagging（摆动）ever s slwly, then faster as she caught the smell.
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sn(leaving fr university)
Dad pened the bx and a sweet little dg appeared._______________________________________________________A few weeks later, the by arrived hme frm university._______________________________________________________
Dad pened the bx and a sweet little dg appeared.A few weeks later, the by arrived hme frm university.
读P1P2首句 定情节发展
The tw dg’s reactin.
Pppy ; the little dg
①Arriving hme, hw did the little dg react?
②Hw did parents intrduce it t Pppy?
③Seeing the little dg, hw did Pppy react?
A few weeks later, the by arrived hme frm university.
读P1P2首句 定情节发展
Hw did he react when he saw Pppy and the little dg?
the by; parents; Pppy
②Seeing Pppy, what did the by d? Hw did he feel?
③Seeing the little dg, what did the by d?
④Hw did he feel?
①What did Pppy d when the by returned?
列大纲：两段12句法
思考：12句话中，有哪几句是固定内容？
列大纲：两段12句法
列大纲：两段12句法
He hugged Pppy tightly.
It hid in the crner.
Pppy was happy.
Pppy was happy again.
It tried t climb ut.
Parents helped it ut.
Parents intrduced it t Pppy.
Pppy was nervus at first.
The by nticed the little dg.
He asked wh it was.
Parents explained it.
He knew everything.
水到渠成 范文赏析
Step 4. 写句式 招招升级
e.g.:1）Pppy threw herself at him and licked his hands and face excitedly, her eyes sparkling with delight and her tail wagging furiusly.
招式1： 独立主格 常用句式： 主+谓+宾 ,逻辑主语 + ding
e.g.:2）It tk the by fr a lng time t ntice that there was a cute puppy beside Pppy,grwling and sniffing at his feet.3) Knwing what had happened t Pppy when he was at the university, the by was s mved that he tk the ld girl in his arms.
招式2： 非谓语动词常用句式： ① ...,ding ② Ding..., ③ Having dne..., ...
写句式 招招升级
e.g.:4）Immediately, he bent dwn,strked its head and asked,"What an adrable puppy! Whse is it?"
招式3： 动作链（V1, V2 and V3) 将笼统的大动作拆解成具体的小动作，画面感十足
e.g.:5）Upn seeing this, his parents culd nt help laughing.
招式4：”一就” 常见句型: Upn/On ding, sb. xxx
e.g.:6）Cheerful and yet a little nervus, Pppy kept running and barking at the new family member.
招式5： 形容词作状语，表示情绪感受 常用句式： ① Adj. + adj., ... ② ..., adj. + adj.
写句式 招招升级
e.g.:7）But Much t the relief f his parents, they were like peas and carrts sn afterwards, and it seemed as if Pppy had frgtten her ld friend.
招式6：as if / as thugh as if + had dne 虚拟语气 表示与过去事实相反的事情
Dad pened the bx and a sweet little dg appeared. It was hiding in ne crner f the bx, with a curius lk in its eyes. Wagging its tail, it tried t climb ut f the bx, but it fell dwn n its back, unable t stand up. Upn seeing this, his parents culd nt help laughing. Gently, Mm picked it up frm the bx and put it n the flr. "Pppy, isn′t it a sweet dg? It's fr yu!" Mm said in a sft vice."It's yur cmpanin." Cheerful and yet a little nervus, Pppy kept running and barking at the new family member. But Much t the relief f his parents, they were like peas and carrts sn afterwards, and it seemed as if Rpp had frgtten her ld friend.
范文赏析
A few weeks later, the by arrived hme frm university. Pppy threw herself at him and licked his hands and face excitedly, her eyes sparkling with delight and her tail wagging furiusly. It tk the by fr a lng time t ntice that there was a cute puppy beside Pppy,grwling and sniffing at his feet.Immediately, he bent dwn,strked its head and asked,"What an adrable puppy! Whse is it?" His parents smiled and replied,"We gt it fr Puppy because.." Knwing what had happened t Pppy when he was at the university, the by was s mved that he tk the ld girl in his arms.Tears burred his visin as he murmured,"Pppy,I miss yu, t." And quietly, Pppy raised her head and enjyed the warmth in his arms.
范文赏析