18续写真题2024年全国I卷II卷--好心的出租车司机课件PPT

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读原文 划要素 填表格
读P1P2首句 定情节发展
列大纲 两段12句法
I met Gunter n a cld, wet and unfrgettable evening in September. l had planned t fly t Vienna and take a bus t Prague fr a cnference. Due t a big strm, my flight had been delayed by an hur and a half, l tuched dwn in Vienna just 30 minutes befre the departure f the last bus t Prague. The mment l gt ff the plane, l ran like crazy thrugh the airprt building and jumped int the first taxi n the rank withut a secnd thught. That was when l met Gunter. l tld him where l was ging, but he said he hadn't heard f the bus statin. l thught my prnunciatin was the prblem, s l explained again mre slwly but he still lked cnfused. When l was abut t give up, Gunter fished ut his little phne and rang up a friend. After a heated discussin that lasted fr what seemed like a century, Gunter put his phne dwn and started the car.
2024年全国I+II卷真题原文
Finally, with just tw minutes t spare, we rlled int the bus statin. Thankfully, there was a lng queue still waiting t bard the bus, Gunter parked the taxi behind the bus, turned arund, and lked at me with a big smile n his face. “We made it.” he said. Just then l realized that I had zer cash in my wallet. l flashed him an aplgetic smile as I pulled ut my Prtuguese bankcard. He tried it several times, but the card machine just did nt play alng. A feeling f helplessness washed ver me as l saw the bus queue thinning ut. At this mment, Gunter pinted twards the waiting hall f the bus statin. There at the entrance, was a cash machine. l jumped ut f the car, made a mad run fr the machine, and ppped my card in, nly t read the message: “Out f rder. Srry.
读原文 划要素 填表格
Paragraph 1: I ran back t Gunter and tld him the bad news._______________________________________________________Paragraph 2: Fur days later, when I was back in Vienna, l called Gunter as prmised._______________________________________________________
I ran back t Gunter and tld him the bad news.   Fur days later, when I was back in Vienna, l called Gunter as prmised.
读P1P2首句 定情节发展
①Hw did I feel?
③What did Gunter d?
②What did I d?
④What prmise did I make?
I paid him back and expressed my gratitude t him.
Fur days later, when I was back in Vienna, l called Gunter as prmised.
①What did I say?
③Hw did Gunter react?
列大纲：两段12句法
思考：12句话中，有哪几句是固定内容？
列大纲：两段12句法
列大纲：两段12句法
Kindness makes a big difference.
What was the bad news?
Gunter knew I wuld call.
I left withut paying.
Gunter said OK.
I felt mved.
I wrte his number dwn.
I prmised t pay him back.
We appinted t meet.
I ffered an extra $10 tip.
Gunter refused the tip.
写句式 招招升级
e.g.:1）“Srry, I can’t take cash ut.” I said embarrassedly, with my face burning. 2）Hearing my wrds, Gunter replied with the familiar smile n his face.
招式1： 非谓语动词常用句式： ① Ding..., ② with + n + ding/dne/t d ③ ..., ding...
写句式 招招升级
e.g.:3） S surprised and mved was I that I culdn’t say a wrd ut.
招式2：倒装句 ”如此以至于” 句型中，为了表示强调，可以将s的部分提至句首，后面接半倒装的句型。
e.g.:4）Gunter pinted tward it and said t me, “It is yur turn.” 5）Realizing it was time t leave, I tk ut my ntebk, asked Gunter’s number and wrte it dwn hurriedly.
招式3： 动作链（V1, V2 and V3) 将笼统的大动作拆解成具体的小动作，画面感十足
e.g.:6） Suddenly, a warm current washed ver me.
招式4：无灵主语 ① a fld f + （情绪类）n. seized/welled up/came ver sb.② 无灵主语（表示时间、地点的名词）+有灵动词（see/witness）
Step 4. 写句式 招招升级
e.g.:7）It was at that time that I realized that a small kindness actin culd make such a big difference!
招式5： 主旨升华常用句式： “知道那时我才意识到” It was at that time that I realized that...
水到渠成 范文赏析
范文赏析
I ran back t Gunter and tld him the bad news. “Srry, I can’t take cash ut.” I said embarrassedly, with my face burning. Hearing my wrds, Gunter replied with the familiar smile n his face, “That’s OK, just g ahead, yu can pay me at yur cnvenience.” S surprised and mved was I that I culdn’t say a wrd ut. As the bus queue became shrter, Gunter pinted tward it and said t me, “It is yur turn.” Realizing it was time t leave, I tk ut my ntebk, asked Gunter’s number and wrte it dwn hurriedly. At the same time, I prmised firmly that I wuld call him and paid him back as sn as pssible.
范文赏析
Fur days later, when I was back in Vienna, l called Gunter as prmised. The mment Gunter picked up the phne, I culdn't wait t intrduce myself. Gunter seemed t knw I was ging t call, and he said sftly, "I knw." We made an appintment t meet at the departure place. As we met the fllwing day, I hugged him tightly like we were lng-time-n-see ld friends, and I expressed my great gratitude t him. I paid him back and ffered an extra $10 tip, hwever, he refused the tip, nly t accept the taxi fare, saying “It is nt a big deal.” Suddenly, a warm current washed ver me. It was at that time that I realized that a small kindness actin culd make such a big difference!