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Pumpkin(南瓜) carving at Hallween is a family traditin. We visit a lcal farm every Octber. In the pumpkin field, I cmpete with my three brthers and sister t seek ut the biggest pumpkin. My dad has a rule that we have t carry ur pumpkins back hme, and as the eldest child I have an advantage---I carried an 85-punder back last year.This year, it was hard t tell whether my prize r the ne chsen by my 14-year-ld brther, Jasn, was the winner. Unfrtunately we frgt t weigh them befre taking ut their insides, but I was determined t prve my pint. All f us were hard at wrk at the kitchen table, with my mm filming the annual event. I'm unsure nw why I thught frcing my head inside the pumpkin wuld settle the matter, but it seemed t make perfect sense at the time.
With the pumpkin resting n the table, hle uppermst, I bent ver and pressed my head against the pening. At first I gt jammed just abve my eyes and then, as I went n with my task, unwilling t quit, my nse briefly prevented entry, Finally, I managed t put my whle head int it, like a crk(软木塞) frced int a bttle. I was able t straighten up with the huge pumpkin resting n my shulders.My excitement was shrt-lived. The pumpkin was heavy, “I'm ging t set it dwn, nw,” I said, and with Jasn helping t supprt its weight, I bent back ver the table t give it smewhere t rest. It was nly when I tried t remve my head that I realized getting ut was ging t be less straightfrward than getting in. When I pulled hard, my nse gt in the way. I gt int a panic as I pressed firmly against the table and mved my head arund trying t find the right angle, but it was n use. “I can't get it ut!” I shuted, my vice sunding unnaturally lud in the enclsed space.
Para 1. It was five r six minutes thugh it felt much lnger.Para 2. The vide was psted nline the Mnday befre Hallween.
（language appreciatin）
Cmplicatin actin
Reading (labv)
HallweenOctber
hme at the kitchen
I ---the eldest childmy brthers (Jasn) and sister mm dad
Read fr Orientatin
Abut Hallween
Many peple arund the wrld celebrate Hallween, which ccurs annually n Octber 31. It is the day befre All Saints’ Day and is als smetimes called All Hallws’ Eve and Hallwmas Eve.Hallween evlved frm the ancient Celtic hliday f Samhain. Over the centuries, Hallween transitined frm a pagan ritual t a day f parties, cstumes, jack--lanterns and trick-r-treating fr kids and adults.
Symbls f Hallween
Witches flying n brmsticks with black cats, ghsts, gblins（小精灵）and skeletns have all evlved as symbls f Hallween. They are ppular trick-r-treat cstumes and decratins fr greeting cards and windws.
Pumpkins are als a symbl f Hallween. The pumpkin is an range-clred squash, and range has becme the ther traditinal Hallween clr. Carving pumpkins int jack- 'lanterns is a Hallween custm als dating back t Ireland.
at first/finally
manage t frce my head int the pumpkin
when I tried t remve my head
can't get ut
frgt t weighbe determined t prve
every Octber
carry pumpkins back hme
Read fr Cmplicatin actin
Hw did I manage t frce my head int the pumpkin?
Language Appreciatin
bent ver & pressed my head against the pening
gt jammed abve my eyes
my nse briefly prevented entry
put my head int it & straighten up
my excitement was shrt-lived
when I tried t remve my head, my nse gt in the way.
Pumpkin(南瓜) carving at Hallween is a family traditin. We visit a lcal farm every Octber. In the pumpkin field, I cmpete with my three brthers and sister t seek ut the biggest pumpkin. My dad has a rule that we have t carry ur pumpkins back hme, and as the eldest child I have an advantage---I carried an 85-punder back last year.This year, it was hard t tell whether my prize r the ne chsen by my 14-year-ld brther, Jasn, was the winner. Unfrtunately we frgt t weigh them befre taking ut their insides, but I was determined t prve my pint. All f us were hard at wrk at the kitchen table, with my mm filming the annual event. I'm unsure nw why I thught frcing my head inside the pumpkin wuld settle the matter, but it seemed t make perfect sense at the time.With the pumpkin resting n the table, hle uppermst, I bent ver and pressed my head against the pening. At first I gt jammed just abve my eyes and then, as I went n with my task, unwilling t quit, my nse briefly prevented entry, Finally, I managed t put my whle head int it, like a crk(软木塞) frced int a bttle. I was able t straighten up with the huge pumpkin resting n my shulders.My excitement was shrt-lived. The pumpkin was heavy, “I'm ging t set it dwn, nw,” I said, and with Jasn helping t supprt its weight, I bent back ver the table t give it smewhere t rest. It was nly when I tried t remve my head that I realized getting ut was ging t be less straightfrward than getting in. When I pulled hard, my nse gt in the way. I gt int a panic as I pressed firmly against the table and mved my head arund trying t find the right angle, but it was n use. “I can't get it ut!” I shuted, my vice sunding unnaturally lud in the enclsed space.
a jyful & harmnius family
It was five r six minutes thugh it felt much lnger.
The vide was psted nline the Mnday befre Hallween.
1. What was my feeling at that time?2. What was the reactin f my family?3. Hw did I finally get my head ut f the pumpkin?* Mm was filming the whle time
1. Was the vide ppular and what's the reactin f the public?2. Hw did my family and I take the matter?3. ENDING
Nun: Pumpkin; dad; Jasn;mm; head; nseVerb: manage; supprt; rest; pull
pumkpin; dad; mm; Jasn; head; nsemanage; supprt; rest; pull
pumpkin; mm; dad
1. I felt s scared that my thrat tightened and my knees felt weak. 2. I frze with terrr, t scared t mve an inch.3. I was seized by a strng sense f hrrr and my palms were sweating.4. This made me feel sick and shivery.5. A fld f fear welled up in me./ Fear flded ver me. 6. Jenny was wrried sick. Her thrat was dry and her face was burning up.
para 1 ---feelings语料库
panic & fear & anxius
1. Twards the end f the day my lungs panted as they struggled fr xygen. 2. When I returned frm my shift I gasped fr breath and my head was dizzy with pain.3. But I lay suffcating slwly. My face was purple and my lips turned blue. I culdn't think. I drifted fr a few mments and then everything went blank. A rush f air revived me. 4. Again the Nautilus attacked the ice sheet like a huge battering ram, nly this time frm beneath. There was a shattering, crunching sund, as it brke thrugh, shting frwards and upwards and then crushing the ice beneath it as it landed. Oxygen flwed int everyne's lungs. We were saved.
para 1 ---语料库
“20000 leagues under the sea”《海底两万里》
“I can’t get it ut!” I rared, my vice sunding unnaturally lud in the enclsed space. The muffled vices frm utside were ddly calming, thugh – Mm unruffled and amused, Jasn giving advice, my 10-year-ld brther, Austin, singing a sng I culdn’t make ut. There was enugh space arund my neck t let a little light in and, frtunately, I’ve always liked the smell f pumpkin. My bellwing prvked little sympathy. “Dn’t use up all yur xygen,” Mm suggested.Dad was summned – less, it seemed, in expectatin f practical help than t make sure he didn’t miss ut n the spectacle. I heard him prpse calling the fire department. “Stay tuned,” said Mm; she’d mentined she was ging t uplad the vide t Facebk, but it was nly then I realised she’d been filming the whle time. I was stuck fr five r six minutes thugh it felt much, much lnger. The vide cuts befre my rescue – Dad gt me t push my head farther int the pumpkin s Mm culd reach in and und the rubber band rund my pnytail. I emerged with squash-cnditined hair, a sre chin and my nse plugged with pulp.
That Facebk vide went up the Mnday befre Hallween, and by the end f that day it had ver 1,000 views. Peple asked Mm t put it n YuTube, and by Wednesday mrning we were getting 5am calls frm TV breakfast shws and then the internatinal media – the vide started racking up hundreds f thusands f views. When I went n a yuth camp, I was recgnised by children I’d never met. The pumpkin als became a minr celebritPassersby and trick-r-treaters wuld knck and ask, “Which is Rachel’s pumpkin?” befre taking selfies with it.Althugh ur pumpkin carving the fllwing year was a mre sedate affair, I wuldn’t say I learned my lessn. A few mnths later I squeezed myself int a laundry basket during a game f hide-and-seek and became hpelessly jammed. It was Dad wh respnded t my cries fr help. Inevitably, I was kept waiting fr a while – first he had t lk fr the vide camera.
该文第一段描写了主人公由于求生欲而自救：首先从由于缺氧开始发晕的细节描写入手，回想起过往生活的点滴，奋力一博，南瓜破裂落地的过程。其中关于“rhythmic beating” 和“a buzzing nise indide head“这样的听觉描写，也有假设中的 “picture f stars and squiggly lines” 这样的视觉描写和”aha, he is feeling dizzy”的听觉描写；最后是“memries” 想象，imagery运用到位，语言也较符合孩童的天真烂漫。第二段衔接了前一段中关于险些丧命而珍惜生命的主旨，并没有沿着vide的话题，而是升华到珍惜与家人的时光；但是结尾句中仍然注意“cda“回应---never eat ne single bite f pumpkin again,虽与原文结局有差距，但也能自圆其说。结合文本语言，还是可以算一篇中上之作。squiggly lines 弯弯曲曲的线
I was stuck fr five r six minutes thugh it felt much much lnger t me. The rhythmic beating sund f my heart was gradually being envelped by a buzzing nise inside my head. If I were in a cartn, the picture f stars and squiggly lines shuld have cme ut frm my pumpkin head and the audience wuld knw, "aha, he is feeling dizzy". Indeed due t the lack f xygen, I stpped bth panicking and the pulling. I was abut t give up. All in a sudden, memries flashed befre my eyes: Jasn and I playing at the backyard last summer, the embarrassing talent shw at grade five and every Sunday’s mvie night with was just t gd t give away! I screamed and tried t pull ut my head frm the pumpkin using all f the energy nce again! This time, victry! The pumpkin finally cracked and fell n the kitchen flr. The vide went up n the internet the Mnday befre Hallween and gt millins f views nline, but I never nce watched it. Fr me, it was the clsest experience t death and, mre vitally, lsing the nes that I truly lve. Frm that time afterwards, I changed my life in tw perspectives. One, I evermre cherished my rights t make mre memries with my family and friends. Tw, I wuld never have ne single bite f pumpkin again.
It was five r six minutes thugh it felt much lnger.My lungs panted, struggling fr xygen and wrse still, I started t have a crick in my neck frm the supprt f the great weight as well as the surge f panic sweeping thrugh my bdy. Luckily, Jasn bviusly had sensed smething wrng and help had been called. Dad’s familiar ftsteps apprached, and later smewhere came a cracking sund, rumbling and eching in bth my ears. All at nce, I was greeted by sudden blinding lights. “Say cheese!” It was nt until then that I realized my dear mm was filming all thrugh the time.
The vide was psted nline the Mnday befre Hallween.It received hundreds and thusands f views instantly and went viral. Smetimes I wuld cme acrss strangers recgnizing me. Hwever, I had never regretted ding it.Thugh the pumpkin head jke had repeatedly been mentined, it never failed t make my family laugh a hearty laugh. Every Hallween frm then n, a new traditin was passed n, but f curse with great cautin and a wider pening n the pumpkin.