高中英语2025届高考推荐信写作指导和练习

这是一份高中英语2025届高考推荐信写作指导和练习，共13页。
【试题探究】
假定你是李华, 你的美国网友David看完电影《哪吒之魔童降世》海外版后非常喜欢, 写信想请你再推荐一部中国电影。请你根据以下要点给他回信:
1.表示高兴;
2.推荐一部电影;
3.推荐的理由(至少两条)。
注意: 1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
Step 1: 审题布局
Step 2: 巧饰亮点
要点1: 我很高兴知道你对中国电影《哪吒之魔童降世》感兴趣。
一般表达: I am glad t knw yu’re interested in the Chinese film, Ne Zha.
句式升级(高级词汇, 被动语态):
I’m delighted t knw yu’re fascinated by the Chinese film, Ne Zha.
要点2: 这部动画电影也是以中国经典神话故事为基础, 和《哪吒之魔童降世》有许多相似之处。
一般表达: This animated film is als based n classic Chinese fairy tales, and has much in cmmn with Ne Zha.
句式升级(定语从句):
This animated film, which is als based n classic Chinese fairy tales, has much in cmmn with Ne Zha.
Step 3: 衔接成篇
Dear David,
I’m delighted t knw yu’re fascinated by the Chinese film, Ne Zha.And I’m perfectly willing t recmmend anther impressive Chinese mvie at yur request.
Since I knw animated films are yur favrites, yu can’t miss Mnkey King: Her Is Back.This animated film, which is als based n classic Chinese fairy tales, has much in cmmn with Ne Zha, s I think it’ll appeal t yu.Additinally, Mnkey King and Ne Zha are bth regarded as heres by Chinese peple.Thrugh these tw mvies, yu will get a better understanding f Chinese culture.
I hpe yu’ll find the mvie well wrth seeing.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【句式储备】
1.篇头——开篇表意, 说明目的
①Our schl’s appraching 100th birthday will be celebrated this July.Culd yu please recmmend a student t address at the pening ceremny in English?
我们学校将在今年七月庆祝即将到来的百年校庆。你能推荐一位学生在开幕式上用英语发言吗?
②Hearing/Learning that yu are cming t visit China, I wuld like t recmmend several places f interest t yu.
听说你要来中国, 我想向你推荐几个名胜古迹。
2.篇中——紧扣要点, 推荐理由
①He is an all-rund student with excellent grades in all subjects.As a by with great ptential, he is gd/skillful at slving difficult prblems.
他是一个全面的学生, 各科成绩优异。作为一个很有潜力的男孩, 他善于解决难题。
②In additin, what makes him a mdel student is his psitive attitude twards life.
此外, 使他成为模范学生的是他积极的生活态度。
3.结尾——表达希望, 盼回复
①Yur taking my recmmendatin int cnsideratin will be highly expected.Keenly anticipate yur prmpt reply.
希望您能考虑我的建议。热切期待您的及时答复。
②I d hpe that yu can find my recmmendatin beneficial.Lking frward t yur early/prmpt reply.
我希望我的推荐对你有帮助。期待你的早日/及时回复。
【拓展储备】
假定你是李华, 你的英国朋友Peter打算这个寒假来中国旅游, 让你推荐一个城市, 你想推荐杭州作为他旅游行程的首选。请用英语给他写封信, 内容包括:
1.推荐城市;
2.推荐理由;
3.你的祝愿。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
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【参考范文】
Dear Peter,
I’m delighted t knw yu’re cming t China fr yur winter hliday.Persnally, I’d like t recmmend the city f Hangzhu t yu.
When it cmes t Hangzhu, the first thing that cmes t mind is West Lake, which has been a scenic spt fr hundreds f years.Besides, there are many turist attractins in and arund the city, such as Tiger-running Spring, the Lingyin Mnastery and Spring Dawn at Su Causeway.Mst imprtantly, Hangzhu is hme t delicius fd, such as Dngp Prk and Lngjing Shrimp.
I hpe the nice weather and cnvenient transprtatin here can make yur trip mre enjyable.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【要点精练】
1．假定你是李华，你的交换生朋友William对学校开展的研学旅游活动很感兴趣。他来信希望你能给他推荐一个研学城市。请你给他回信，内容包括：
1.推荐研学的城市；
2.推荐理由；
3.表示祝愿。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear William,
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Yurs,
Li Hua
2．假定你是某国际学校学生李华，你校将组织开展“走进文化遗产”主题活动，现向全校学生征求活动建议。请你给组织者写信，内容包括：
1.推荐活动;
2.说明理由。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Organizers,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
3．假定你是李华，英国交换生Frank写信给你，希望你推荐一个中国成语，作为鼓励他学习中文的座右铭。请你回封信，推荐成语“愚公移山”，内容包括；
1.简介成语故事和寓意；
2.推荐理由。
注意：1.写作词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
生词：成语 idim; 座右铭 mtt; 愚公移山Yu Gng Yi Shan
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4．假设你是晨光中学的学生李津，你校最近在举行“校园之星”优秀学生评选活动，请你用英语推荐你的同学王华，内容包括：
1.人物和事迹简介；
2.你从他/她身上学到了什么。
注意：1.词数不少于100；
2.短文题目已为你写好，不计入总词数。
A rle mdel arund me
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5．假定你是李华，你校的英国交换生Jim在邮件中提到他想报名参加主题为“了不起的中国人” (Amazing Chinese Peple)的网络短视频大赛，向你征求创意。请你给Jim回信，内容包括:
1．推荐拍摄人物；
2．说明推荐理由。
注意：
1．词数100左右;
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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6．假定你是李华，你的外国朋友Peter对中文歌曲很感兴趣，要求你推荐一款学习中文歌曲的app，请你回复邮件。内容包括：
1.介绍一款 app；
2.分享使用体验。
参考词汇: 歌词: lyrics 网易云音乐: NetEase Music QQ 音乐: QQ Music
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
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Yurs,
Li Hua
7．假定你是李华，你所在的社区正在进行年度美丽楼道服务之星(Service Star f the Year)评选活动。请给社区负责人Owen写信推荐员工张杰，内容包括：
1.写信目的；
2.推荐理由。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Owen,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
8．假定你是李华，你的英国网友David计划在他毕业旅行时到中国来亲身体验和感受中国文化，请你用英文写信向他推荐你眼中最具代表性的城市。
1.城市概况；
2.推荐原因。
注意：
1.写作词数应为 80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear David,
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Yurs,
Li Hua
9．假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Sam最近在准备有关中国饮食文化的课堂展示，写邮件请你推荐一种中国特色美食，请给他写一封回信，内容包括：
1.美食简介;
2.推荐理由。
注意：1.词数100左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Sam,
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Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
10．假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。在世界地球日即将到来之际，你校与英国友好校将在线举办“绿动校园，青春飞扬”的主题摄影展，以此来记录校园环保活动中的精彩瞬间。现组委会向同学们征集照片，你打算参加此项活动。请按照以下提示用英语给组委会写一封信来推荐你的照片：
（1）描述照片的内容；
（2）说明选择该照片的理由；
（3）表达对该照片入选的愿望。
参考词汇：绿动校园，青春飞扬Green Campus, Flying Yuth
注意：
（1）词数不少于100；
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
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Yurs,
Li Jin
【参考答案】
1．Dear William,
Learning that yu are interested in the study tur but at a lss abut which city t visit, I’d like t recmmend Guangzhu t yu.
Guangzhu, the capital city f Guangdng, is a perfect cmbinatin f ld and new.Fr ne thing, it is an ancient city with rich histrical sites, such as Chen Clan Academy, Xiguan and Shameen, where yu can immerse yurself in its prfund histry and splendid Lingnan culture.Fr anther, Guangzhu enjys a high reputatin fr mdern cmplexes, amng which the icnic Cantn Twer is what yu can’t miss.Equally impressive is the Cantnese cuisine, which will give yu a feast fr yur appetite.
I’m sure that yu will find Guangzhu a wrthwhile city t explre.Wish yu a meaningful and unfrgettable study tur!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【写作解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。交换生朋友William对学校开展的研学旅游活动很感兴趣，要求考生写信给他推荐一个研学城市。
【要点分析】1.词汇积累
完美的：perfect → ideal
丰富的：rich → abundant
确信的：sure → certain
难以忘怀的：unfrgettable → memrable
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Guangzhu, the capital city f Guangdng, is a perfect cmbinatin f ld and new.
拓展句：Guangzhu, which is the capital city f Guangdng, is a perfect cmbinatin f ld and new.
[高分句型1] Learning that yu are interested in the study tur but at a lss abut which city t visit, I’d like t recmmend Guangzhu t yu.(运用了连词that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Equally impressive is the Cantnese cuisine, which will give yu a feast fr yur appetite.(运用了关系代词which引导限制性定语从句)
2．Dear Organizers,
I’m writing t share sme ideas fr the upcming “Explring Cultural Heritage” event.
Firstly, I prpse rganizing visits t lcal cultural heritage sites fr students t explre and learn.This wuld deepen ur understanding f ur cuntry’s rich histry and culture, fstering a sense f natinal pride and cultural identity.Secndly, hsting themed lectures r wrkshps by experts wuld ffer insights int the value and significance f cultural heritage, enhancing ur academic knwledge and verall develpment.Lastly, hands-n activities such as traditinal craft making r flk perfrmances wuld allw us t experience the charm f ur traditinal culture firsthand and acquire practical skills and knwledge.
In summary, by incrprating diverse activities, we can effectively shwcase the allure and imprtance f cultural heritage while prmting a deeper appreciatin and inheritance f ur traditins.Thank yu fr cnsidering these suggestins.Lking frward t a successful event!
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【写作解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生所在学校将组织开展“走进文化遗产”主题活动，现向全校学生征求活动建议。请你给组织者写信。
【要点分析】1.词汇积累
培养：fster→develp
获得：acquire→btain
提供：ffer→prvide
举行：hst→hld
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：In summary, by incrprating diverse activities, we can effectively shwcase the allure and imprtance f cultural heritage while prmting a deeper appreciatin and inheritance f ur traditins.
拓展句：In summary, It is by incrprating diverse activities that we can effectively shwcase the allure and imprtance f cultural heritage while prmting a deeper appreciatin and inheritance f ur traditins.
【高分句型1】In summary, by incrprating diverse activities, we can effectively shwcase the allure and imprtance f cultural heritage while prmting a deeper appreciatin and inheritance f ur traditins.（运用了while引导的时间状语从句的省略）
【高分句型2】This wuld deepen ur understanding f ur cuntry’s rich histry and culture, fstering a sense f natinal pride and cultural identity.（运用了现在分词作状语）
3．Dear Frank,
In respnse t yur letter inquiring abut a Chinese mtt, I strngly recmmend t yu the idim Yu Gng Yi Shan, which can definitely keep yur willing heart t learning Chinese!
This idim actually riginates frm a tuching legend, which literally tells us hw Old Man Yu led his family t remve the tw muntains blcking the drway f their huse, accmplishing this missin impssible with the help f Gd.I believe the idim is an ideal mtt fr yu because it highlights the mral that if we keep trying and never give up, we will eventually achieve ur aim, hwever hard it is, which is a universal value applicable t language learning.Mrever, by embracing this legend, learners can immerse themselves in Chinese culture and gain insights int the beliefs and histrical narratives that shape Chinese sciety.
I’m fully aware hw challenging it is fr a freigner t learn Chinese and I’m deeply cnvinced that the understanding f this idim will fuel yur enthusiasm fr Chinese.Attached t the letter is my humble calligraphy f the fur characters “Yu Gng Yi Shan”, which, I guess, can figure as a reminder.
Hpe yu enjy it!
【写作解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国交换生Frank写信，向他推荐一个中国成语，作为鼓励他学习中文的座右铭。
【要点分析】1.词汇积累
推荐：recmmend→put frward
完成：accmplish→achieve
并且：mrever→furthermre
激发：fuel→simulate
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Hpe yu enjy it!
拓展句：I hpe yu can be fnd f it and lk frward t sharing with yu the feelings after learning it.
【高分句型1】In respnse t yur letter inquiring abut a Chinese mtt, I strngly recmmend t yu the idim Yu Gng Yi Shan, which can definitely keep yur willing heart t learning Chinese! （运用了which引导定语从句）
【高分句型2】This idim actually riginates frm a tuching legend, which literally tells us hw Old Man Yu led his family t remve the tw muntains blcking the drway f their huse, accmplishing this missin impssible with the help f Gd.（运用了which引导定语从句，hw引导宾语从句，现在分词作定语和状语）
4．范文
A rle mdel arund me
When it cmes t the rle mdel arund me, it’s nbdy but Wang Hua.Liu Wei is my classmate, wh is strng and independent.He cmes frm a pr family.What makes matter wrse is that he suffered frm a disease in Senir Tw.Because f the illness, he even asked a three-mnths leave frm schl.During that time, he nt nly fught against the disease but kept n studying.
Whenever facing the difficulty, he never gives up.Life is nt easy fr Liu Wei, but he still lves life.He is always an example fr everyne t fllw.
As a student f Chenguang Middle Schl, I want nminate my classmate Wang Hua as the “Campus Star”.Wang Hua is a remarkable individual wh cnsistently exhibits exceptinal qualities in bth academic and persnal aspects.
Wang Hua excels in all subjects, especially in mathematics and science.He is always ready t help thers with their studies, patiently explaining difficult cncepts and encuraging his peers t strive fr excellence.Hwever, his achievements are nt limited t academics.He is als actively invlved in varius vlunteer activities, such as assisting the elderly and participating in envirnmental prtectin prjects.
What I have learned frm Wang Hua is his dedicatin t learning and his cmmitment t serving thers.He is a rle mdel wh inspires me t wrk harder and be mre cmpassinate.His psitive attitude and unwavering spirit are qualities that I admire and aspire t emulate.
Therefre, I strngly recmmend Wang Hua as the “Campus Star”.His dedicatin, kindness, and leadership qualities make him a deserving candidate fr this hnr.I believe that his example will inspire thers t fllw in his ftsteps and strive fr excellence in all aspects f their lives.
【写作解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生用英语推荐你的同学王华，参加“校园之星”优秀学生评选活动。
【要点分析】1.词汇积累
热爱：lve→have a passin fr
面对：face→in the face f
非凡的：remarkable→utstanding
相信：believe→hld the view that
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Life is nt easy fr Liu Wei, but he still lves life.
拓展句：Althugh life is nt easy fr Liu Wei, he still lves life.
[高分句型1] What makes matter wrse is that he suffered frm a disease in Senir Tw.(运用了what引导主要从句)
[高分句型2] I believe that his example will inspire thers t fllw in his ftsteps and strive fr excellence in all aspects f their lives.(运用了that引导宾语从句)
5．Dear Jim,
I’m thrilled t hear yur intentin t participate in the “Amazing Chinese Peple” nline shrt vide cmpetitin.Fr yur inspiratin, I’d like t recmmend a figure wh truly deserves t be featured.
My suggestin is t fcus n Dr.Zhng Nanshan, a renwned respiratry expert and a her in the fight against COVID-19.His dedicatin t science, curage in speaking the truth, and relentless effrts t prtect public health have earned him widespread respect and admiratin.
By shwcasing Dr.Zhng’s achievements and struggles, yu will nt nly present an amazing Chinese persn but als cnvey the spirit f perseverance and respnsibility that defines many great Chinese individuals.
Lking frward t seeing yur creatin!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【写作解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给Jim回信，推荐短视频采访的人。
【要点分析】1.词汇积累
建议：suggestin→advice
奉献：dedicatin→devtin
参加：participate in→take part in
关注：fcus n→cncentrate n
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：My suggestin is t fcus n Dr.Zhng Nanshan, a renwned respiratry expert and a her in the fight against COVID-19.
拓展句：My suggestin is t fcus n Dr.Zhng Nanshan, wh is a renwned respiratry expert and a her in the fight against COVID-19.
[高分句型1] Fr yur inspiratin, I’d like t recmmend a figure wh truly deserves t be featured.(运用了wh引导定语从句)
[高分句型2] By shwcasing Dr.Zhng’s achievements and struggles, yu will nt nly present an amazing Chinese persn but als cnvey the spirit f perseverance and respnsibility that defines many great Chinese individuals.(运用了动名词作宾语和that引导的定语从句)
6．Dear Peter,
I’m thrilled t knw abut yur interest in Chinese sngs.I’d like t recmmend an app called NetEase Music.This app has a vast library f Chinese sngs, and each sng is accmpanied by lyrics, which can be very helpful fr learning Chinese.
I frequently use NetEase Music myself.I appreciate its user-friendly interface and straightfrward peratin.Mrever, its lyrics feature is utstanding, with lyrics scrlling in sync with the music, helping me understand the meaning f the sngs better.I believe yu’ll enjy this app as well.
Lking frward t hearing yur feedback.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【写作解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外国朋友Peter回复一封邮件，推荐一款学习中文歌曲的app，包含app简介和使用体验两个要点。
【要点分析】1.词汇积累
激动的：thrilled→excited
巨大的：vast→huge
带有：be accmpanied by→pssess
简单的：straightfrward→uncmplicated
2.句式拓展
原句子句：I frequently use NetEase Music myself.I appreciate its user-friendly interface and straightfrward peratin.
拓展句：I frequently use NetEase Music myself because I appreciate its user-friendly interface and straightfrward peratin.
【高分句型1】This app has a vast library f Chinese sngs, and each sng is accmpanied by lyrics, which can be very helpful fr learning Chinese.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Mrever, its lyrics feature is utstanding, with lyrics scrlling in sync with the music, helping me understand the meaning f the sngs better.（运用了with复合结构以及现在分词作状语）
7．
I am writing t recmmend Zhang Jie as the Service Star f the Year f the beautiful crridr.I chse him fr the fllwing reasns.
First f all, Zhang Jie, whse wrk ranges frm cleaning the hallways t helping his neighbrs, is hard-wrking and he wrks frm mrning till night.The wrk f cleaning is dirty and tiring.Hwever, he never cmplains abut it.Besides, he is full f respnsibility.Nt nly des him d the wrk that belngs t him, but als he devtes t sme extra wrk, like taking care f neighbrs’ children.Third, he is willing t build a harmnius cmmunity.He tries his best t guard the security f the cmmunity.
I hpe that he can get the award.
【写作解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给社区负责人Owen写信推荐员工张杰为楼道服务之星。
【要点分析】1.词汇积累
选择：chse→ select
此外：besides→ in additin
照顾：take care f→ tend
充满：be full f → be filled with
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The wrk f cleaning is dirty and tiring.Hwever, he never cmplains abut it.
拓展句：Thugh the wrk f cleaning is dirty and tiring, he never cmplains abut it.
【高分句型1】First f all, Zhang Jie, whse wrk ranges frm cleaning the hallways t helping his neighbrs, is hard-wrking and he wrks frm mrning till night.（运用了whse引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Nt nly des him d the wrk that belngs t him, but als he devtes t sme extra wrk, like taking care f neighbrs’ children.（运用了部分倒装和that引导的限制性定语从句，nt nly…but als…连接的并列句）
8．Dear David,
I’m thrilled t hear abut yur plans t visit China fr yur graduatin trip! Amng the cuntless cities, I highly recmmend Beijing, the capital f China.
Beijing, a city with a rich histrical and cultural heritage, ffers a unique blend f ancient and mdern.Here, yu can witness the majesty f the Frbidden City and the tranquility f the Summer Palace.Mrever, the lively Hutng areas prvide a glimpse int traditinal Beijing life.
I’m sure Beijing will leave a lasting impressin n yur China jurney.Lk frward t hearing abut yur adventures!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【写作解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生用英文写信向David推荐自己眼中最具代表性的中国城市。
【要点分析】1.词汇积累
激动的：thrilled→excited
无数的：cuntless→numerus
强烈：highly→strngly
此外：mrever→besides
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Beijing, a city with a rich histrical and cultural heritage, ffers a unique blend f ancient and mdern.
拓展句：Beijing, which is a city with a rich histrical and cultural heritage, ffers a unique blend f ancient and mdern.
[高分句型1] I’m sure Beijing will leave a lasting impressin n yur China jurney.(运用了省略that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Lk frward t hearing abut yur adventures! (运用了动名词短语作宾语)
9．Dear Sam,
Thank yu fr yur trust.As fr me, I will definitely recmmend Sichuan ht pt t yu.
Ht pt enjys the greatest ppularity in China.Families and friends ften gather arund a big ht pt, eating and chatting cheerfully.The steaming pt is usually filled with chili peppers with bright red il n the tp.
Because everyne is free t chse their favrite fd, ht pt has becme a representative f Chinese values f penness, equality and sharing.That is why I strngly recmmend it t yu.
Have a try, and I’m sure yu will lve it.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【写作解析】本篇是应用文写作。你的英国笔友Sam最近在准备有关中国饮食文化的课堂展示，写邮件请你推荐一种中国特色美食，要求给他写一封回信。
【要点分析】1.词汇积累
肯定地：definitely→ surely
愉快地：cheerfully→ delightedly
装满：be filled with→ be full f
喜欢：lve→ enjy
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句： As fr me, I will definitely recmmend Sichuan Ht Pt t yu.
拓展句： As fr me, I will definitely recmmend Sichuan Ht Pt t yu, which is undubtedly bth delicius and savry.
[高分句型1]Families and friends ften gather arund a big ht pt, eating and chatting cheerfully.(运用了现在分词作状语的结构)
[高分句型2]Because everyne is free t chse their favrite fd, ht pt has becme a representative f Chinese values f penness, equality and sharing.(运用了because引导的原因状语从句)
10．Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Jin, a student frm Chenguang High Schl.With the Wrld Earth Day appraching, I am thrilled t participate in the “Green Campus, Flying Yuth” phtgraphy exhibitin t be held nline by ur schl and ur British sister schl.
I wuld like t submit a pht that features a grup f students planting trees with enthusiasm n a sunny afternn.I chse this pht because it captures the essence f ur campus’ envirnmental prtectin effrts and caters t the theme f “Green Campus, Flying Yuth”.
I sincerely hpe that my pht will be selected fr the exhibitin.It wuld be an hnr t have my wrk displayed with the ther utstanding entries and t cntribute t the glbal effrt f prmting envirnmental awareness.Thank yu fr cnsidering my submissin.
Yurs,
Li Jin
【写作解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给组委会写一封信来推荐照片，描述照片的内容，说明选择该照片的理由，表达对该照片入选的愿望。
【要点分析】1.词汇积累
兴奋的：thrilled→excited
参加：participate in→take part in
提交：submit→hand in
对……做贡献：cntribute t→make cntributins t
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：I chse this pht because it captures the essence f ur campus’ envirnmental prtectin effrts and caters t the theme f “Green Campus, Flying Yuth”.
拓展句：The reasn why I chse this pht is that it captures the essence f ur campus’ envirnmental prtectin effrts and caters t the theme f “Green Campus, Flying Yuth”.
【高分句型1】With the Wrld Earth Day appraching, I am thrilled t participate in the “Green Campus, Flying Yuth” phtgraphy exhibitin t be held nline by ur schl and ur British sister schl.(使用了With复合结构、不定式作状语)
【高分句型2】It wuld be an hnr t have my wrk displayed with the ther utstanding entries and t cntribute t the glbal effrt f prmting envirnmental awareness.(使用了It作形式主语且不定式作真正主语的句型、have sth.dne结构)
人称
第一人称 (I)为主
时态
一般现在时, 一般将来时
要点
1.说明写信目的
2.推荐的电影和推荐的理由
3.表达希望