2024届高三英语基础写作课件：投诉信-小区问题投诉

这是一份2024届高三英语基础写作课件：投诉信-小区问题投诉，共19页。

假定你是李华，是一名租住在伦敦某小区的中国留学生。请你给小区的物业经理Mr. Brwn写封信，内容包括：1. 反映小区里存在的问题：垃圾、噪音、陌生人出入等；2. 你的建议。Type f writing： A letter f cmplaint/ reflecting prblems Reader f the letter: The prperty manager f yur cmmunity Tne: Plite Tense: Simple present tense
Structure: Para 1: Writing backgrund+ purpse (e.g. As an verseas student frm China, I’m glad and hnred t live in ur cmmunity. But regretful t find sme terrible prblems existing here, I’m writing t draw yur attentin t them. ) Para 2: Existing prblems Initially, … What’s wrse, …. Wrse still, … Para 3: Suggestin(e.g. T imprve the situatin, it is advisable t take sme effective measures. First f all, …. In additin, … Furthermre,… ) Para 4: Ending (e.g. I wuld appreciate it if yu culd give due attentin t the matters./ I sincerely hpe the management can be imprved and that every resident can enjy a mre pleasant living envirnment. Thank yu fr yur time. )
Language: 垃圾(U)garbage(AmE) / trash(AmE) / rubbish(BrE) 抱怨cmplain(vi) abut & cmplaint (n.)提出强烈的不满bring/vice/make/file/ldge/submit ne's bitter/ serius cmplaint abut...
臭味an unpleasant/ smelly smell 搭配的verb：The air is filled rubbish gives ff/ gives ut...搭配的adj.：awful/ evil/ hrrible/ nasty/ ffensive/ unpleasant 难闻的/ 令人作呕的
噪音nise (U) & nisy (adj.)产生/ 发出噪音create/ make/ generate nise 添加adj.:deafening/ lud 震耳欲聋的awful/ hrrible/ terrible 可怕的/ 骇人的cnstant 连续不断的banging 砰砰的buzzing 嗡嗡的
使我不能入睡prevent me frm falling asleep在午夜at midnight有陌生人随意进入社区there are strangers entering the cmmunity easily
对人身和财产安全造成威胁pse a threat t ur safety/ the safety f the residents and ur pssessins影响睡眠质量be deprived f a sund sleep/ gd sleeping qualityhave a negative impact n...
Extensin: (prblem+bad influence+slutin) rubbish rubbish is thrwn everywhere/ here and theregive ut an unpleasant smell pllute the air and waterthreaten residents’ healthspread diseases Slutins:must be srted must be treated prperly
Extensin: (prblem+bad influence+slutin) nise: cnstant, annying, disturbing nise ccurs at midnightmake students unable t cncentrate n the studyresidents are deprived f a sund sleepgreatly influence residents' sleeping qualitySlutins: lay dwn rules and regulatins n it fine thse fr disbeying the rules
regulatin的搭配verb：adpt/ bring in/ impse/ issue/ intrduce regulatin的搭配adj.：safety regulatin 安全章程strict/ tight/ tugh 严格的fficial 正式的
Extensin: (prblem+bad influence+slutin)strangers: appear in the cmmunity ccasinally enter the cmmunity withut permissin/ casuallypse a threat t the safety f the residents and ur pssessinsslutins: lay dwn rules and regulatinsraise residents’ awareness f safetystrengthen management and inspectin
保安security guard/ frce安装人脸识别系统install a face recgnitin system出入证access card/ permit
Dear Mr. Brwn, 作为一名来自中国的留学生，我很荣幸住在我们社区。但很抱歉，我发现这里存在一些严重的问题，特写信希望得到您关注。 首先，垃圾被随处扔在社区，发出臭味，有传播疾病的可能。更糟糕的是，让人苦恼的噪音在午夜出现，让我们不能酣睡。还更遭的是，经常能见到陌生人随意出入社区，这对住户和财产都造成威胁。 为改善状况，我建议采取以下措施。第一，规章制度急切需要被制定来控制上述情况。此外，加强管理和巡查将对保证我们的安全大有帮助。另外，建议张贴相关的标语和海报，以提升住户维护社区和谐的意识。 如您能对这些问题给予充分关注，我会非常感激。感谢您的时间和考虑。 Yurs, Li Hua
作为一名来自中国的留学生，我很荣幸住在我们社区。但很抱歉，我发现这里存在一些严重的问题，特写信希望得到您关注。As an verseas student frm China, I’m hnred t live in ur cmmunity. But regretful t find sme terrible prblems existing here, I’m writing t draw yur attentin t them.
首先，垃圾被随处扔在社区，发出臭味，有传播疾病的可能。更糟糕的是，让人苦恼的噪音在午夜出现，让我们不能酣睡。还更遭的是，经常能见到陌生人随意出入社区，这对住户和财产都造成威胁。Initially, rubbish is thrwn randmly in the cmmunity giving ut an unpleasant smell, which has the ptential f spreading diseases. What’s wrse, disturbing/annying nise ccurs at midnight, cnsequently depriving us f a sund sleep. Wrse still, it’s nt uncmmn t see strangers enter ur cmmunity at will/ as they please, psing a threat t the safety f the residents and ur pssessins.
为改善状况，我建议采取以下措施。第一，规章制度急切需要被制定来控制上述情况。此外，加强管理和巡查将对保证我们的安全大有帮助。另外，建议张贴相关的标语和海报，以提升住户维护社区和谐的意识。T imprve the situatin, it is advisable t take sme effective measures. First f all, it’s urgent that rules and regulatins shuld be laid dwn t cntrl the issues abve. In additin , enhanced/strengthened management and inspectin will be helpful t guarantee ur safety. Furthermre, relevant slgans and psters are suggested t be put up t aruse the residents’ awareness f maintaining the harmny f ur cmmunity.
如您能对这些问题给予充分关注，我会非常感激。感谢您的时间和考虑。 I wuld appreciate it if yu culd give due attentin t the matters. Thank yur fr yur time and cnsideratin.
after due cnsideratin 经适当考虑之後 With all due respect, I disagree cmpletely. 不揣冒昧, 实不敢苟同。