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建议信是向别人提出合理的建议，并说明理由，使别人了解自己的想法、主张，能利用所提建议解决有关问题的一类信件。建议信要简洁明确、理由充分、具有合理性和说服力。其结构一
般如下：
①、明确问题，并表明帮助意愿
②、提出具体建议并给出相应的理由
③、希望对方的问题得到解决
素材精粹
【高分句型】
首段：开门见山表明写信目的
I'm very srry t hear that yu have truble the mment.Here are sme tips fr yu.
获悉此刻你遇到……麻烦，我深感遗憾。这是给你的一些建议。
Learning ，'m writing t give yu sme suggestins n hw
得知，我写信给你一些关于如何…的建议。
主体部分：提出具体建议
When it cmes t such a situatin，I wuld like t suggest ne thing， anther,'s
当遇到这种情况时，我想建议…。一方面，……。另一方面，……。而且，…
As far as I'm cncerned/Frm my pint f view，it is a gd idea wuld be wise f yu ，I strngly advise yu but nt least，yu
就我而言/在我看来，……是个好主意/你……是明智的。此外，我强烈建议你……。最后但同样重要的是，你可以……
尾段：希望采纳建议并表示祝福
Persnally，it wuld be beneficial if yu stick 在我看来，如果你坚持……的话会有好处的2. I will be very happy if yu can take my advice/ideas int cnsideratin.
如果你能考虑我的建议/想法，我会很开心。
Hpefully these suggestins will be f great help t yu. 希望这些建议对你有很大的帮助。
佳作共赏
Dear Michael，
I'm mre than delighted t learn that yu are ging t participate in the Traditinal Chinese Culture Cmpetitin.I'm willing t give yu a hand and ffer sme practical suggestins at yur request.
T begin with，it is necessary fr yu t cnsult sme bks cncerning traditinal Chinese culture，thus bradening yur hrizns and well equipping yu fr the cming cmpetitin.Secndly，why nt watch sme vide clips？Yu are bund t get sme inspiratin frm them.As fr when and where t meet，can we make it at4：00this Friday afternn in yur classrm？If it’s nt cnvenient fr yu，please let me knw what time is suitable fr yu in advance.
Lking frward t hearing frm yu.
Yurs，
Li Hua
*注：本书"佳作共赏"栏目中画波浪线的部分可作模板背诵。
（2021·北京·高考真题）
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.表达歉意并说明原因；
2.提出建议并给出理由。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m srry t infrm yu that I can’t g ut with yu this weekend. I’ve just been tld that I have t g and visit my sick grandfather in the cuntryside, wh was suddenly admitted t the hspital. I hpe the change wn’t cause yu t much truble.
Hw abut ging ut next Saturday mrning? If it’s cnvenient fr yu, let’s meet at the schl gate at 9: 00. Please let me knw what time suits yu best. I shuld be available anytime next weekend.
In additin, next Saturday, there will be a flwer shw in Beihai Park. Then we can g t see the flwers tgether.
I am lking frward t yur early reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国好友Jim写一封电子邮件，就因故不能赴约而致歉并建议再约。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
通知：tell→infrm
麻烦：prblem→truble
怎么样：what abut→hw abut
适合：fit→suit
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I shuld be available anytime next weekend.
拓展句：I shuld be available anytime next weekend s that I can g ut with yu and have a gd time.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] I’m srry t infrm yu that I can’t g ut with yu this weekend. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I’ve just been tld that I have t g and visit my sick grandfather in the cuntryside, wh was suddenly admitted t the hspital. (运用了wh引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型3] Please let me knw what time suits yu best.(运用了what引导的宾语从句)
（2021·全国·高考乙卷真题）
你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以Be smart nline learners为题写一篇发言稿参赛，内容包括：
1. 分析优势与不足；
2. 提出学习建议。
注意：
1. 词数100左右;
2. 题目和首句已为你写好。
Be smart nline learners
Netwrk learning has increasingly becme an imprtant means fr peple t acquire knwledge and slve prblems.But being smart nline learners has its advantages and disadvantages. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】ne pssible versin:
Be smart nline learners
Netwrk learning has increasingly becme an imprtant means fr peple t acquire knwledge and slve prblems.But being smart nline learners has its advantages and disadvantages.
First f all, as smart nline learners, we can make full use f the mst extensive educatinal resurces t braden the hrizn. Besides, We can take the initiative in ur study by urselves withut time and space limit.
Of curse, these disadvantages are as fllws.Faced with all kinds f infrmatin n the internet, We can't tell the difference between the true and the false, which may be harmful t ur study and life. On the ther hand, nline learning itself has sme imperfectins, making it difficult fr us nt t be affected.
In cnclusin , we shuld have a gd understanding f its advantages and disadvantages and find a prper way t make ur study mre efficient.
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以 Be smart nline learners为题写一篇发言稿参赛。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
充分利用：make full use f→ make the mst f
扩宽,丰富：braden→ enrich
各种各样： all kinds f→ varieties f
不完美：imperfectin→ defect
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：In cnclusin , we shuld have a gd understanding f its advantages and disadvantages and find a prper way t make ur study mre efficient.
拓展句：In cnclusin , we shuld have a gd understanding f its advantages and disadvantages ， finding a prper way t make ur study mre efficient.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Faced with all kinds f infrmatin n the internet ,We can't tell the difference between the true and the false, which may be harmful t ur study and life.（非谓语作状语和which引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2]On the ther hand ,nline learning itself has sme imperfectins, making it difficult fr us nt t be affected.（现在分词作状语）
（2019·天津·高考真题）
假设你是晨光中学的李津，英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间，英方教师Chris 将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座、现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件:
⑴你喜欢的讲座话题（从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一）；
⑵选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容；
⑶希望从中有何收获。
注意：
⑴词数不少于100；
⑵可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
⑶开头和结尾已给出、不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
I'm Li Jim, a student at Chenguang High Schl. ________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank yu fr yur time.
Yurs,
Li Jin
【答案】Dear Chris,
I'm Li Jim, a student at Chenguang High Schl.It’s ur great pleasure t have yu visit ur schl and give a lecture n western art during the cming summer vacatin.
When it cmes t my suggestins, I am quite interested in western music, and expect that yu culd deliver the lecture n this tpic. Served as a bridge, western music prvides us teenagers with the pprtunity t braden ur hrizns and have a better understanding n culture diversities. It als gives us strength and hpe when we are vercming difficulties.
I wuld appreciate it if yu culd take my advice, and I hpe that I can gain mre knwledge thrugh the lecture. Lking frward t yur early reply.
Thank yu fr yur time.
Yurs,
Li Jin
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英方教师Chris写信，就一个有关西方艺术的讲座内容给出意见。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
做演讲：give a lecture→make a speech
提供：prvide sb. with sth.→refer sb. sth.
机会：pprtunity→chance
采纳建议：take ne’s advice→fllw ne’s advice
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Served as a bridge, western music prvides us teenagers with the pprtunity t braden ur hrizns and have a better understanding n culture diversities.
拓展句：Western music，which is served as a bridge ，prvides us teenagers with the pprtunity t braden ur hrizns and have a better understanding n culture diversities.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】When it cmes t my suggestins, I am quite interested in western music, and expect that yu culd deliver the lecture n this tpic.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】It als gives us strength and hpe when we are vercming difficulties.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句）
（2022·江苏省泰州市教育局模拟预测）
假定你是李华，得知你的新西兰笔友Jasn正负责筹备学校的中国诗歌节。请你给他写一封信，内容包括：
1. 你的心情；
2. 活动建议；
3. 良好祝愿。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 开头和结尾已为你写好；
3. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jasn,
I’m glad that a Chinese Petry Festival is t take place in yur schl._______________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
The festival will surely deepen yur understanding f Chinese culture and I hpe it will be a success.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jasn,
I’m glad that a Chinese Petry Festival is t take place in yur schl. Varius cmpetitins, like petry translatin, petry reading and petry writing, shuld be included, which nt nly help aruse students’ passin fr getting invlved but ffer students a platfrm t shw themselves. Besides, I d recmmend a lecture n petry appreciatin be given, thus equipping the students with mre relevant knwledge.
The festival will surely deepen yur understanding f Chinese culture and I hpe it will be a success.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。新西兰笔友Jasn正负责筹备学校的中国诗歌节，要求考生给他写一封信。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
举办：take place → hld
比赛：cmpetitins → matches
激发：aruse → inspire
此外：Besides → What’s mre
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Varius cmpetitins, like petry translatin, petry reading and petry writing, shuld be included.
拓展句：Varius cmpetitins which include petry translatin, petry reading and petry writing.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Varius cmpetitins, like petry translatin, petry reading and petry writing, shuld be included, which nt nly help aruse students’ passin fr getting invlved but ffer students a platfrm t shw themselves.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句，同时使用了nt nly……but句型）
【高分句型2】I’m glad that a Chinese Petry Festival is t take place in yur schl.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
（2022·湖北·武汉市第十二中学模拟预测）
假定你是李华，你校英语广播电台将对播出时段、时长、栏目等做调整，正在向听众征求意见。请你写封邮件，内容包括：
1.你的建议；
2.你的理由。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear English radi statin,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear English radi statin,
Knwing that yu will adjust the bradcast time slt, length and clumn, I am writing t give my suggestins.
First f all, I think a 20-minute news summary can be played befre the mrning reading class, which will help students understand natinal events and stimulate their listening ability. Secndly, English pp sngs can be played fr ten minutes after schl at nn, which can relieve students’ study pressure all mrning. Finally, during the afternn break, sme excellent sample essays published by students can be played.
Hping my suggestins can be helpful.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于你校英语广播电台将对播出时段、时长、栏目等做调整，正在向听众征求意见的情况，写封邮件给出建议。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
建议：suggestins→ advice
缓解，放松：relieve→ relax
压力：pressure→ stress
优秀的：excellent→ utstanding
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Finally, during the afternn break, sme excellent sample essays published by students can be played.
拓展句：Finally, during the afternn break, sme excellent sample essays which are published by students can be played.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】First f all, I think a 20-minute news summary can be played befre the mrning reading class, which will help students understand natinal events and stimulate their listening ability.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。)
【高分句型2】Finally, during the afternn break, sme excellent sample essays published by students can be played.(运用了非谓语动词作后置定语。)
（2022·吉林长春·模拟预测）
假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter在中国留学两年后即将返回美国。他打算送给他的寄宿家庭每人一份礼物，为此来信向你求助，请你回信给他提供一些建议。内容包括：
(1)肯定他的做法；
(2)具体的建议；
(3)表达祝愿。
注意：(1)词数100左右；
(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peter,
I’m glad t hear that yu want t buy sme gifts fr yur mther that represent Chinese culture. And I am writing t give yu sme advice.
Persnally, I think yu shuld buy the fllwing tw gifts: Qipa and Chinese knt. Qipa, a very beautiful traditinal dress fr Chinese wmen, can shw the real beauty f a wman. I am sure yur mther will like it very much. What’s mre, it is als a gd chice fr yu t buy the Chinese knt. It is usually hung in the sitting rm r cars, which represents gd luck.
Wish yu a gd vacatin. Please give my best wishes t yur family.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter在中国留学两年后即将返回美国。他打算送给他的寄宿家庭每人一份礼物，为此来信向你求助，请你回信给他提供一些建议。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
建议：advice→suggestin
就我而言：persnally→as far as I’m cncerned
选择：chice→ptin
代表：represent→stand fr
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Qipa, a very beautiful traditinal dress fr Chinese wmen, can shw the real beauty f a wman.
拓展句：Qipa, which is a very beautiful traditinal dress fr Chinese wmen, can shw the real beauty f a wman.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] I’m glad t hear that yu want t buy sme gifts fr yur mther that represent Chinese culture. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] It is usually hung in the sitting rm r cars, which represents gd luck. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
（2022·北京八十中模拟预测）
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim最近总是感觉身体不适，因此写信向你询问如何健康饮食，请你给他回信。内容包括：
1. 对Jim表示关切
2. 提出合理建议
3. 表达祝愿内容
注意：1．词数 100 左右；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
I’m delighted t hear frm yu, but srry t have learned yu aren’t feeling well these days. __________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m delighted t hear frm yu, but srry t have learned yu aren’t feeling well these days. In yur letter yu asked me hw t stay healthy. Here is my advice.
Firstly, yu’d better keep a balanced diet. It can be beneficial t avid eating fd high in fat r with t much sugar. Instead, have mre fresh vegetables and fruits. Secndly, taking exercise every day helps a lt t build up a strng bdy. As is knwn, regular exercise, such as jgging, is an essential apprach t keeping fit. Finally, I wnder if yu always stay up late at night. If s, please get rid f this habit, fr never will we be healthy withut enugh sleep.
All these cunt a lt fr keeping yur bdy at a prper weight and staying healthy. I truly hpe yu will find my advice helpful and get well sn.
Best wishes!
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给好友Jim写回信，回复他咨询的如何健康饮食的问题。内容包括：1. 对Jim表示关切；2. 提出合理建议；3. 表达祝愿内容。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
开心的：delighted→excited
建议：advice→suggestin
锻炼：take exercise→wrk ut
重要：cunt→matter
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Here is my advice.
拓展句：Here is my advice, which I hpe will be helpful fr yu。
【点睛】
【高分句型1】It can be beneficial t avid eating fd high in fat r with t much sugar. Instead, have mre fresh vegetables and fruits.(运用了非谓语动词作宾语)
【高分句型2】As is knwn, regular exercise, such as jgging, is an essential apprach t keeping fit.(运用了as引导非限制性定语从句)
（2022·湖南·雅礼中学二模）
假如你是李华，你的巴基斯坦笔友Muhammad准备明年来你校做交换生，写信向你咨询如何学习中文。请你用英语给他回封电子邮件。
要点：
1. 表示欢迎；
2. 提出学习中文建议；
3. 期待与祝福。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Muhammad,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Muhammad,
Welcme t be an exchange student at ur schl next year. As t hw t learn Chinese, here cme my tips.
First, yu might as well take a Chinese curse t lay a slid fundatin. What’s mre, it is a wise chice t pick up prper Chinese TV prgrams, which will enable yu t access standard and authentic Chinese. Plus, befriending warmhearted Chinese friends arund yu is sure t better yur ral Chinese. Meanwhile, it can enrich yur knwledge f Chinese custms. Finally, I suggest yu try e-mailing me in Chinese.
I hpe my suggestins abve may benefit yu. Hpe yu will make sufficient prgress in Chinese sn. I am lking frward t yur arrival.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是李华，你的巴基斯坦笔友Muhammad准备明年来你校做交换生，写信向你咨询如何学习中文。请你用英语给他回封电子邮件。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
至于：as t→as fr
建议：tip/suggestin→advice
明智的：wise→advisable
此外：what’s mre→besides
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Plus, befriending warmhearted Chinese friends arund yu is sure t better yur ral Chinese. Meanwhile, it can enrich yur knwledge f Chinese custms.
拓展句：Plus, nt nly is befriending warmhearted Chinese friends arund yu sure t better yur ral Chinese, but als it can enrich yur knwledge f Chinese custms.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] What’s mre, it is a wise chice t pick up prper Chinese TV prgrams, which will enable yu t access standard and authentic Chinese. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Finally, I suggest yu try e-mailing me in Chinese. (运用了省略that的宾语从句和虚拟语气)
（2022·北京师大附中三模）
假如你是红星中学高三1班班长李华。最近你班同学听外教Jim线上讲课时遇到了一些问题。请你代表你班同学给Jim写一封邮信，内容包括：
1. 反映情况；
2. 给出建议。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jim,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m Li Hua, mnitr f Class One Senir Three frm Hngxing Middle Schl. Representing my classmates, I’m writing t tell yu sme questins.
During yur nline classes, yu knw, sme f ur students’ spken English is nt very gd, s we are thinking whether yu can speak a little slwly, s that we all can fllw yu. Besides, yu are t strict with us, which is f curse gd, but yu can als be relaxed and kind t us. Then, the atmsphere in yur classes will be mre active, and we dare t express urselves mre bravely. Yu can believe that we can still finish what yu ask us t d even thugh yu are nt s strict.
We will appreciate it if yu can take ur suggestins. Hpe t hear frm yu sn.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】
本文是应用文。要求考生给外教Jim写一封邮信，反映学生们线上听课时遇到的一些问题并给出建议。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
代表：represent→n behalf f
英语口语：spken English→ral English
此外：besides→what’s mre
建议：suggestin→advice
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m Li Hua, mnitr f Class One Senir Three frm Hngxing Middle Schl.
拓展句：I’m Li Hua, wh is the mnitr f Class One Senir Three frm Hngxing Middle Schl.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】During yur nline class, yu knw, sme f ur students’ spken English is nt very gd, s we are thinking whether yu can speak a little slwly, s that we all can fllw yu.(运用了由whether引导的宾语从句和s that引导的结果状语从句)
【高分句型2】Besides, yu are t strict with us, which is f curse gd, but yu can als be relaxed and kind t us.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型3】Yu can believe that we can still finish what yu ask us t d even thugh yu are nt s strict.(运用了that引导的宾语从句、what引导的宾语从句和even thugh引导的让步状语从句)
（2022·山东烟台·三模）
你校英文报正在向全校学生进行英文征稿，征稿主题是“劳动与学生成长”，请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1．你对劳动的认识；
2．你经常参加哪些劳动；
3．你的建议。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Labr and Students’ Grwth
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【答案】One pssible versin
Labr and Students’ Grwth
As is knwn t all, labr is a necessity fr a student’s grwth. At present, mst students live in cities and rarely have pprtunities t truly experience labr, resulting in lack f labr educatin. Thrugh labr, students can cultivate crrect labr viewpint and develp labr habits, which will cntribute t students’ verall develpment.
In my spare time, I’d like t help my parents d varieties f husewrk at hme. Besides, I ften vlunteer t d sme cleaning wrk fr the elderly at nursing hme.
In view f many benefits f labr t students, I suggest that we shuld regularly take part in a wide range f labr s that we can becme well-runded.
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇短文投稿，主题是“劳动与学生成长”。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
目前：at present →currently
机会：pprtunity → chance
空余的：spare →free
此外：besides→ what’s mre
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：At present, mst students live in cities and rarely have pprtunities t truly experience labr, resulting in lack f labr educatin.
拓展句：At present, mst students live in cities and rarely have pprtunities t truly experience labr, which resuls in lack f labr educatin.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】As is knwn t all, labr is a necessity fr a student’s grwth.（运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Thrugh labr, students can cultivate crrect labr viewpint and develp labr habits, which will cntribute t students’ verall develpment.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
（2022·北京八十中三模）
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国笔友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他最近因疫情在家上网课，感到效果不理想，为此感到苦恼。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：
1. 你对在线学习的看法；
2. 提出学习建议。
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
Learning that yu have been struggling t adapt t the frm f nline curses, I felt the same way as we had classes nline during the islatin f Cvid breakut. Nw, I’d like t talk abut my views n nline classes.
First and fremst, it is thrugh the internet that classes can be presented in many interesting ways: Pictures, vides, yu name it. Only in this way can teachers shed light n sme cmplex ideas and cncepts. Besides, yu can have teachers’ lectures recrded and learn them at yur wn space. T get ver yur anxiety, yu shuld g ver what yu are ging t learn next class as well as cnsult yur teacher cnstantly.
Shuld yu want t seek further help, dn’t hesitate t write t me.
Thanks fr yur letter.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】
本书面表达是一篇应用文，要求考生给英国笔友Jim回复一封电子邮件，对他最近因疫情在家上网课，感到效果不理想，为此感到苦恼，谈谈自己的看法并提出建议。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
首先： First and fremst →First f all
快速浏览：g ver →g thrugh
让某物容易被人理解： shed light n sth. →make sth. understd
寻求：seek →ask fr
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Besides, yu can have teachers’ lectures recrded and learn them at yur wn space.
拓展句：Besides, yu can have teachers’ lectures recrded and learn them at yur wn space, which will help yu better digest the pints.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] First and fremst, it is thrugh the internet that classes can be presented in many interesting ways: Pictures, vides, yu name it. (运用了强调句句式)
[高分句型2] Only in this way can teachers shed light n sme cmplex ideas and cncepts. (运用了nly+状语置于句首的部分倒装句式)
（2022·浙江·模拟预测）
假定你是李华，你校交换生Paul最近因为疫情在家上网课，感觉学习效果不理想，写信询问你如何改善。请你给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1. 给予安慰；
2. 提供建议；
3. 表达愿望。
注意：1. 词数80左右
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Paul,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Paul,
Srry t knw that yu are being trubled when taking nline classes. Actually, I have been there and here are sme tips wrking well fr me.
First, it takes self-discipline t fully engage in nline lessns, s try t remve any kind f distractin frm yur desk when learning. Taking ntes als helps yu stay fcused. Secnd, fllw the class schedule strictly as if taking regular classes at schl. Anther gd way is t pair yurself with a classmate wh can help mnitr yur study.
Everything is bund t cme back n track and hpe we will enjy classes at schl sn.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给交换生Paul写信，对他疫情期间在家上网课，感觉学习效果不理想的事情给予安慰，提供建议并表达愿望。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
事实上：actually→as a matter f fact
去除：remve→get rid f
专注的：fcused→cncentrated
一定会做某事：be bund t d→be certain t d
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Actually, I have been there and here are sme tips wrking well fr me.
拓展句：Actually, I have been there and here are sme tips that wrk well fr me.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Srry t knw that yu are being trubled when taking nline classes. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Anther gd way is t pair yurself with a classmate wh can help mnitr yur study. (运用了wh引导的定语从句)
（2022·江苏·徐州市第七中学模拟预测）
假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Tm因疫情隔离返校后无法融入到同学之中，感到很孤独。请你写封邮件，给他提出一些建议。内容包括：
1. 表达关切和鼓励；
2. 给出具体建议；
3. 表达祝愿。
注意：
1. 写作字数应为80左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；
2. 可以适当增加细节以使行文连贯。
Dear Tm,
Thank yu fr telling me what’s been upsetting yu._____________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mike,
Thank yu fr telling me what’s been upsetting yu. I can relate t hw yu feel. I knw yu’re lnely, but dn’t be discuraged! All yu need t d is make sme small changes.
First, dn’t distance yurself frm yur classmates. Yu shuld take the initiative t talk t them. Keep in mind that gd cmmunicatin is essential t frming gd relatinships with peple. Secnd, shw a genuine interest in what yur classmates d, which is a gd way t start interacting with them. Last, always wear a smile when yu see them. It may take a lt f effrt, but the reward will be amazing.
Best wishes!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封邮件给因疫情隔离返校后无法融入到同学之中，感到很孤独的英国朋友Tm表达关切和鼓励，并提出一些建议。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
气馁的：discuraged→ unnerved
远离：distance→ keep away frm
重要的：essential→ significant
惊人的：amazing→ marvelus
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：First, dn’t distance yurself frm yur classmates. Yu shuld take the initiative t talk t them.
拓展句：Yu shuld take the initiative t talk t them s that yu wn’t distance yurself frm yur classmates.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Keep in mind that gd cmmunicatin is essential t frming gd relatinships with peple. (运用that引导宾语从句)
【高分句型2】 Secnd, shw a genuine interest in what yur classmates d, which is a gd way t start interacting with them. (运用which引导非限定性定语从句)
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