新高考英语一轮复习 读后续写精读练习（八）含答案解析

这是一份新高考英语一轮复习 读后续写精读练习（八）含答案解析，共8页。试卷主要包含了 续写词数应为150左右；，第二段续写等内容，欢迎下载使用。
“What a crabby-lking lady（怨妇）,” the cashier at my lcal cnvenience stre whispered t her cwrker. I was grabbing smething ff the shelf. I had a half dzen kids waiting fr me utside in the van, and here's the thing: they were all my wn children. N time fr plite. N casual cnversatin with the checkut lady, n nd f apprval tward the stck by, n breathing. Just get the tilet paper, tw gallns f milk and sme Frsted Flakes and get back t my children!
But my interest was arused by the crabby-lking lady. Which ne was she? Taking a family pack f tilet paper under my arm, I scanned the tiny stre fr the crabby lady. Let's see, there's a middle-aged guy checking n prk, an lder gentleman at the checkut purchasing an egg salad sandwich and a cffee, and... just then I saw her, the crabby-lking lady.
Her eyes were small; her brwn hair was pulled back in a pnytail s tight that it lked like her frehead wuld drp. Her muth was shut serius. This lady lked like she had smelled smething really bad. Then, I turned away frm my wn reflectin in the cnvex security mirrr（安全反射镜）at the back f the stre. The crabby-lking lady... was me!
That night, I cried. I was the crabby-lking lady! Me! The girl nce vted nicest smile by her high schl class! Things must get changed! Right then and there I reslved t d ne thing ver the next year. One simple reslutin: t smile. I didn't need t wait fr January 1st--I wuld start right nw.
I reslved t smile at anyne and anything, even thugh they wuld let me dwn. And I als reslved t make a cnscius effrt t smile, at least ten times a day.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
On the first day f “Missin Smile” I practiced smiling as planned.
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A mnth later, smething different happened.
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二：文本解析
1.故事大意：
一个六个孩子的妈妈在便利店购物时，被收银员评价为“怨妇”后受到很大触动，决心每天微笑10次来改变自己。
2. 第一段续写：
根据第一段首句On the first day f “Missin Smile” I practiced smiling as planned，续写第一段的情节发展方向应为：我第一天按照计划练习了微笑10次，对任何人，任何事，哪怕是一些原本会让我失望的人或事。此处要点为“practice” 和“as planned”。续写的情节可以是对小猫小狗练习微笑，可以是对邻居练习微笑，也可以对花草树木练习微笑，也可以对镜子练习微笑，对自己的孩子等一切人与事练习微笑；不必一一列举，但是要说明练习了10次。
这样写已经基本符合要求，如果能提及自己对原本会失望的事情也刻意微笑了会更好；可以写的情节有，看到家里一片狼藉，提醒自己微笑；小孩子打破了碗，提醒自己微笑；丈夫下班迟回家，提醒自己微笑；邻居家的孩子球打碎了自家的窗户玻璃，提醒自己微笑。此处不一而足。
3.第二段续写：
首句One mnth later, smething different happened起承上启下作用。续写第二段的情节发展方向应为：我在练习微笑一个月之后，情况发生了改变。
此处要突出与第一段的对比，强调different；一个月之后的不同可能表现在以下几个方面，自己的情绪上、外貌上、对待他人的态度上以及他人对我的评价上。这几个方面不需要全部提及，但是自己情绪上的改变是重点。
续写的内容要突出我不再需要刻意练习微笑，相反，遇到所有人所有事我会自然而然地露出微笑。情节部分可以是第一段续写内容的情景再现，不同的是，以前是忍住怒火刻意微笑，现在是由内而外地微笑面对，生活也变得惬意起来。
结尾最好要与文章开头首尾照应，写出别人对我的评价的改变。可以是回到便利店购物，得到同一个收银员的赞美；也可以是在其它场合得到别人的赞美；或者是家人、邻居等发现了我的改变后对我的赞美。
三：续写单句训练
“使命微笑”的第一天，我按计划练习微笑。

我对一只奇怪的狗微笑，它在我女儿的新鞋子里，门口的推销员，我六个孩子中的三个，图书管理员问我是否知道全球人口过剩的问题，还有我的浴缸。

当我丈夫打电话说他会迟到时，我甚至对他笑了笑。

我在镜子里对自己笑了两次，只是为了提醒自己一个微笑是什么样子。

在练习了一个月后，出乎意料地，发生了一些不同的事情。

我甚至没有试图找到可以微笑的东西，我仍然会注意到微笑占据了我的脸。

当我女儿给洗碗机装上袜子时，我笑了。

当我们去教堂真的很晚的时候，我笑了。

有一天，我在当地的一家咖啡店遇到了几个朋友。

我无意中听到出纳员对她的同事说：“一个多么快乐的女士啊！”我甚至不用环顾四周就能知道她在说谁。

这是我的理解！

四：佳作展现
On the first day f “Missin Smile” I practiced smiling as planned.
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A mnth later, smething different happened.
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五：课后练笔
One evening I was resting in a cafe. I wre a pair f newly bught white leather shes, which were rather expensive. Then a by came t me.
He was in an unfit shirt, lking pale and abut eleven. At sight f my new leather shes, his big eyes were bright with hpe. N sner had I begun t speak than he pened the bx in his hand and tk ut the tls f she-plishing. He quickly bent dwn, tk ff my leather shes, and began t shine them.
He was busy ding his wrk when heavy rain began t pur dwn. Peple rushed t the café fr shelter frm the rain. Mre and mre peple crwded in and gradually separated the by frm me befre I realized it. Hurs passed, and it turned dark. I had n shes n my feet and wndered where the by had been. I thught he wuld nt return my expensive shes, and I wuld have t g hme n my bare feet.
When it was near midnight the rain ended, and there were fewer and fewer peple in the café. The café was t be clsed. I had t mve slwly t the dr, head lwered. Just as I went t the gate, I was surprised t find that a by f abut eleven, lking very familiar, was sleeping at the dr with his head leaning against a bx and his upper bdy being bare. He was hlding a package made f his shirt tightly in his arms.
注意：
1.续写词数应为 150 左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1. I shk him slightly and wke him up.
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Paragraph 2. I felt it necessary t d smething fr the by.
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六：单句训练
我轻轻摇了摇他，把他叫醒了。

他跳起来揉了一会儿眼睛，才终于认出我是谁。

然后他小心地打开怀里的包裹，把皮鞋给了我，害羞地一次又一次地向我道歉。

我付了他钱，把他冰冷的小家伙包裹起来

他的不合适的衬衫，包裹了我的皮鞋。

在回家的路上，我脑海里浮现着那个小男孩的形象。

我觉得有必要为这男孩做点什么。

第二天，我又去了咖啡馆，看到这个男孩在那里并不感到惊讶，他在顾客中间寻找生意。

我让他坐下来，我们聊了聊喝了一杯咖啡。

我知道他想赚些钱来帮助他生病的父亲和回到学校。

“你知道吗？”我只需要有人给我的员工擦鞋，因为他们太忙了，不能这样做，”我微笑着说。


参考答案
三：单句训练
The first day f “Missin Smile” I practiced smiling as planned.
I smiled at a strange dg wh peed n my daughter’s new schl shes while she was in them, the salesman t the dr, three f my six children, a librarian wh asked me if I was aware f the glbal verppulatin prblem, and my bathtub.
I even smiled at my husband ver the phne when he called t say he’d be late frm wrk.
And I smiled at myself in the mirrr twice, just t remind myself what a smile lked like.
After practicing a mnth, unexpectedly, smething different happened.
I didn't even try t find things t smile at and I'd still ntice smile take ver my face.
When my daughter laded the dishwasher with her scks, I smiled.
When we were really late fr church, I smiled.
One day I was meeting a cuple f friends at a lcal cffee shp.
I verheard the cashier remark t her c-wrker, “What a happy-lking lady!"
And I didn't even have t lk arund t knw wh she was talking abut. It was me!
六：单句训练
I shk him slightly and wke him up.
He jumped up and rubbed his eyes fr quite a while befre he finally recgnized wh I was.
Then he pened the package in his arms with cautin, gave me my leather shes, and aplgized again and again t me shyly.
I paid him and wrapped his cld little
bdy with his unfit shirt, which had wrapped my leather shes.
On my way hme, the image f the little by stayed in my mind.
I felt it necessary t d smething fr the by.
The next day I went t the café again and was nt surprised t see the by there, making his way amng custmers lking fr sme business.
I asked him t sit dwn and we talked ver a cup f cffee.
I learnt that he was trying t make sme mney t help his sick father and t get back t schl.
“Yu knw what? I just need smene t plish shes fr my emplyees as they are t busy t d that,” I said, smiling.
四：佳作展现
（一）
The first day f “Missin Smile” I practiced smiling as planned. I smiled at a strange dg wh peed n my daughter’s new schl shes while she was in them, the salesman t the dr, three f my six children, a librarian wh asked me if I was aware f the glbal verppulatin prblem, and my bathtub. I even smiled at my husband ver the phne when he called t say he’d be late frm wrk. And I smiled at myself in the mirrr twice, just t remind myself what a smile lked like.
After practicing a mnth, unexpectedly, smething different happened. I didn't even try t find things t smile at and I'd still ntice smile take ver my face. When my daughter laded the dishwasher with her scks, I smiled. When we were really late fr church, I smiled. One day I was meeting a cuple f friends at a lcal cffee shp. I verheard the cashier remark t her c-wrker, “What a happy-lking lady!" And I didn't even have t lk arund t knw wh she was talking abut. It was me!
（二）
Paragraph 1. I shk him slightly and wke him up. He jumped up and rubbed his eyes fr quite a while befre he finally recgnized wh I was. Then he pened the package in his arms with cautin, gave me my leather shes, and aplgized again and again t me shyly. I paid him and wrapped his cld little
bdy with his unfit shirt, which had wrapped my leather shes. On my way hme, the image f the little by stayed in my mind.
Paragraph 2. I felt it necessary t d smething fr the by. The next day I went t the café again and was nt surprised t see the by there, making his way amng custmers lking fr sme business. I asked him t sit dwn and we talked ver a cup f cffee. I learnt that he was trying t make sme mney t help his sick father and t get back t schl. “Yu knw what? I just need smene t plish shes fr my emplyees as they are t busy t d that,” I said, smiling.