专题11 2016年10月浙江卷（吵架出走迷路）-近年新高考英语真题读后续写解析+讲评课件

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历年高考英语读后续写真题分析
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。(2016年10月浙江高考试题) One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tm, had driven three hurs t camp vernight by a lake in the frest. Unfrtunately, n the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started t quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was s angry that she said t Tm, “I’m ging t find a better spt fr us t camp” and walked away. With n path t fllw, Jane just walked n fr quite a lng time. After she had climbed t a high place, she turned
arund, hping t see the lake. T her surprise, she saw nthing but frest and, far beynd, a snwcapped muntain tp. She suddenly realized that she was lst. “Tm!” she cried. “Help!” N reply. If nly she had nt left her mbile phne in that bag with Tm. Jane kept mving, but the farther she walked, the mre cnfused she became. As night was beginning t fall, Jane was s tired that she had t stp fr the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much t be with Tm and her family. She wanted t hld him and tell him hw much she lved him. Jane rse at the break f day, hungry and thirsty. She culd
hear water trickling (滴落) smewhere at a distance. Quickly she fllwed the sund t a stream. T her great jy, she als saw sme berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling strnger nw, Jane began t walk alng the stream and hpe it wuld lead her t the lake. As she picked her way carefully alng the stream, Jane heard a helicpter. Is that fr me? Unfrtunately, the trees made it impssible fr peple t see her frm abve. A few minutes later, anther helicpter flew verhead. Jane tk ff her yellw bluse, thinking that she shuld g t an pen area and flag them if they came back again.
注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1：    But n mre helicpters came and it was getting dark again. ____________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2：    It was daybreak when Jane wke up. __________________________________________________________
One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tm, had driven three hurs t camp vernight by a lake in the frest. Unfrtunately, n the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started t quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was s angry that she said t Tm, “I’m ging t find a better spt fr us t camp” and walked away.With n path t fllw, Jane just walked n fr quite a lng time. After she had climbed t a high place, she turned arund, hping t see the lake. T her surprise, she saw nthing but frest and, far beynd, a snwcapped muntain tp. She suddenly realized that she was lst.
夫妻吵架，可能跟寻找野营地点意见不一致有关。
Jane吵架出走，迷路了。
“Tm!” she cried. “Help!”N reply. If nly she had nt left her mbile phne in that bag with Tm. Jane kept mving, but the farther she walked, the mre cnfused she became. As night was beginning t fall, Jane was s tired that she had t stp fr the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much t be with Tm and her family. She wanted t hld him and tell him hw much she lved him.
Jane rse at the break f day, hungry and thirsty. She culd hear water trickling (滴落)smewhere at a distance. Quickly she fllwed the sund t a stream. T her great jy, she als saw sme berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling strnger nw, Jane began t walk alng the stream and hpe it wuld lead her t the lake.
Jane想寻找回去的办法。
As she picked her way carefully alng the stream, Jane heard a helicpter. Is that fr me? Unfrtunately, the trees made it impssible fr peple t see her frm abve. A few minutes later, anther helicpter flew verhead. Jane tk ff her yellw bluse, thinking that she shuld g t an pen area and flag them if they came back again.
Jane想到有可能吸引直升机的办法。
1. 一片漆黑立刻笼罩了整个森林。
Immediately, an abslute darkness ruled the frest.
ruled the frest
2. 简，精疲力竭，害怕，躺在一块石头旁边，想念她遥远的家人。
Jane, exhausted and scared, lay dwn near a stne, missing her family at a distance.
exhausted and scared
3. 所有美好的回忆涌上心头，她忍不住哭了起来：“如果不是我和汤姆吵架，走开，爬到高处，我就不会被困在这个可怕的地方，面对死亡的危险。”
All the fantastic memry crwded in and she culdn’t help crying, “if I hadn’t quarreled with Tm, walked away and climbed t the high place, I wuldn’t be trapped in this awful place, cnfrnted with the danger f dying.”
All the fantastic memry crwded in and she culdn’t help crying, “Hadn’t I quarreled with Tm, walked away and climbed t the high place, I wuldn’t be trapped in this awful place, cnfrnted with the danger f dying.”
memry crwded in
cnfrnted with the danger f dying
4. 她后悔万分，醒着，眼睛里噙着晶莹的泪水。
She regretted with endless anxiety, and then became asleep with shining tears in her eyes.
regretted with endless anxiety
with shining tears in her eyes
5. 尽管她很虚弱，她还是挣扎着站起来，继续寻求帮助。
Althugh she was weak, she cntinued t search fr assistance.
Weak as she was, she struggled t her feet, cntinuing searching fr assistance.
struggled t her feet
search fr assistance
6. 令她非常高兴的是，一架直升飞机一次又一次地从头顶飞过。
T her great jy, a helicpter was flying verhead again and again.
T her great jy
Fly verhead
1. On _________(see) me, he gave such a start f surprise that he drpped all the things in his hand.2. He was s surprised ____he std there ____ his muth pen.3. Maybe _______ (ashame) f what he had dne, he was abut t turn away _____ I seized his arm quickly.4. I stared____ him fr several secnds and brke the silence, _________(say) “Ry, trust me. I am willing t help yu.” 5. _______________ (regret) what he had dne, he culdn’t hld back his tears, bent dwn and burst ut ________(cry) with his head buried in his hands.
Having regretted
6. _________ (feel) a sense f relief, Ry can’t wait __________ (aplgize) t ur teacher fr his behavir.7. In frnt f the ffice, he hesitated ____________ (knck) at the dr.8. __________(encurage) by me, he eventually made it.9. Ry pulled ut the mney and handed it t the teacher, ____________ (aplgize) fr his behavir.10. Once yur utging persnality left a deep impressin _____ us. 11. Yu are blessed _____ such a gd friend.12. _________(step)ut f the ffice, we felt a sense f relief with the sun ___________ (shine) dwn ver us.
2) rganizatin
3) language
Predict the plt prperly
2) Feelings情感
3) Surrundings环境
Jane was lst
they quarreled
ne weekend in July
in the frest
On weekend in July, Jane was lst in the frest because she had quarreled with Tm.
In what rder is the material develped?
With n path t fllw, Jane……with复合结构……, she turned arund, hping t ……分词作状语Jane tk ff her yellw bluse, thinking that ……Jane rse……, hungry and thirsty. 形容词作状语If nly she had nt left her mbile phne …… 固定句式Never in her life had she tasted anything better. 倒装
quarrel
saw helicpters
was rescued?
cnfused，tired
Para. 1: But n mre helicpters came and it was dark.  续写部分: 简当时的感受？ 简是如何过夜的？ 简睡着了吗？Para. 2: It was daybreak when Jane wke up. 续写部分：简获救了吗？ 谁救了简？ 怎么救的？ 她当时的感受？
Paragraph 1 ： But n mre helicpters came and it was getting dark again._______________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2 ： It was daybreak when Jane wke up._______________________________________________________________________
根据下面的推断， 本段应该是Jane肚子在森林里度过，根据前文， 本段侧重于Jane的内心描写。
表明上一段Jane在森林里又独自度过了一天。
本段应该是Jane如何被救，根据前文， 可能直升机又来了。
Paragraph 1 ： But n mre helicpters came and it was getting dark again.
Jane lay dwn near a stne.
She reminded her husband’s gd deed.
She missed Tm.
She regrated t quarrel with Tm.
Paragraph 2 ： It was daybreak when Jane wke up.
helicpter was flying verhead again.
she flagged her yellw bluse.
she was eventually nticed.
It was her husband,they agreed never t quarrel again.
A: actins 动作的丰富性F: feelings 情感表达的多样性S: surrundings 恰当运用环境描写
But n mre helicpters came and it was getting dark again. Immediately, an abslute darkness ruled the frest. Jane, exhausted and scared, lay dwn near a stne, missing her family at a distance. All the fantastic memry crwded in and she culdn’t help crying, “Hadn’t I quarreled with Tm, walked away and climbed t the high place, I wuldn’t be trapped in this awful place, cnfrnted with the danger f dying.” She regretted with endless anxiety, and then became asleep with shining tears in her eyes.
注意连接词以及短语的使用。
It was daybreak when Jane wke up. Weak as she was, she struggled t her feet, cntinuing searching fr assistance. T her great jy, a helicpter was flying verhead again and again. Eager and excited, she flagged her yellw bluse and spared n effrt t yell s as t attract thers’ attentin. Frtunately, she was eventually nticed and brught int the helicpter.
注意倒装句的亮点句型的使用。
There, she saw her husband, a man staring at her, wearing an expressin f relief. As tightly as pssible, she hugged him and was t thrilled t say anything. Besides, they agreed never t quarrel again, determining t live the life t the fullest.