专题06 导学案——如何使续写中的动作描写富有“电影镜头感”

这是一份专题06 导学案——如何使续写中的动作描写富有“电影镜头感”，共8页。

学习目标：
1.Learn ways t describe vividly in cntinuatin writing.
2. Prmte writing skills thrugh practice.
Step I：输入——夯实基础
“看”
a.根据英语写出汉语意思 catch a glimpse f ____________
take a quick lk_____________
lk int __________________
lk up____________________
gaze at_____________________
stare at____________________
glare at____________________
peep at_____________________
glimpse/glance at____________
gape at ____________________
blink at____________________
ne’s eyes fall n smeplace___
lk at sb straight in the eye____
ne’s eyes fix/fcus/cncentrate n_
ne’s eyes scan ________________
b.根据汉语提示默写英语短语
偷瞄一眼_______________________
瞥见；不注意看到_________________
向里看，调查____________________
抬起头向上看____________________
凝视____________________________
盯住____________________________
怒目而视________________________
偷窥_____________________________
瞥一眼___________________________
吃惊地看________________________
朝…眨眼_________________________
某人的目光落在___________________
直视某人的眼睛___________________
某人的目光紧盯着_________________
某人的眼睛扫视___________________
“走”的精彩描写
a.根据英语写出汉语意思 tipte ________________________
stride ________________________
Sneak________________________
limp _________________________
stumble ______________________
stagger _______________________
slip int the rm _______________
strm ut f the dr____________
dash back _____________________
rush/hurry t the statin__________
pace restlessly__________________
wander aimlessly_______________
b.根据汉语提示默写英语短语
蹑手蹑脚 ________________________
大步走_________________________
鬼鬼祟祟地走 ___________________
瘸着走 __________________________
跌跌撞撞地走____________________
蹒跚 ____________________________
溜进房间 ________________________
冲出房门_________________________
冲回 ____________________________
冲到车站_________________________
不安地走动_______________________
无目的地漫步_____________________
“手”的动作描写
a.根据英语写出汉语意思 grasp at sth____________________
seize sth (frm sb)______________
drag _________________________
reach fr ne’s hand ___________
raise ne’s hands ____________
slid ne’s hands int____________
catch/ hld f ne’s arm_________
cup ne’s hand ver____________
with ne’s head in ne’s hands__
fld ne’s arms _______________
catch /grab ne’s arm __________
pull sb. int ne’s arms________
b.根据汉语提示默写英语短语
尽力抓住某物____________________
（常指通过暴力突然）夺取________
拖拽；吃力地往前拉______________
伸手抓住某人____________________
举手____________________________
将手插进
抓住某人的手臂________________
捂住
双手抱着头
某人双臂交叉___________________
抓住某人的胳膊________________
拉某人进怀 ___________________
Step II：学会“5招”使续写“灵动”——让你的动作描写富有“电影镜头感”
Suddenly, A mving dt(点) n the hrizn was sptted. Exhausted but hpeful, Jane jumped t her feet t catch a clear sight f it."The helicpter,"Jane murmured, sprang up and dashed t the center f an pen area, waving her yellw bluse desperately and yelling at the helicpter with excitement. This time she was sptted, which made her feel mre delighted. Eyes brimming with tears, Jane jumped ff the rck and rushed twards Tm like a flying arrw, hugging tightly in his arms, “please never leave me alne!"
第1招：三联动——连续使用三个动词并列做谓语
例如：（上文中红色句子）
"The helicpter,"Jane murmured, sprang up and dashed t the center
jumped ff the rck and rushed twards
第2招： 非谓动——非谓语动词与主句的谓语搭配使用
例如：（上文中蓝色句子）
"The helicpter,"Jane murmured, sprang up and dashed t the center f an pen area,
waving her yellw bluse desperately and yelling at the helicpter with excitement.
Eyes brimming with tears, Jane jumped ff the rck and rushed twards Tm like a
flying arrw, hugging tightly in his arms, “please never leave me alne!"
第3招： 副助动——句子前后或动词前后使用恰当的副词增强语效
例如：
Suddenly, A mving dt(点) n the hrizn was sptted.
her yellw bluse
第4招： 介宾动——介词短语修饰限定，尤其是with复合结构
例如：
Jane jumped ff the rck and rushed twards Tm like a flying
With butterflies in his stmach, he walked twards the entrance.
第5招： 无主动——无灵主语往往是时间或地点名词后接see或witness等动词
例如：
The little river and wds in my hmetwn witnessed my grwth.
Step III：Practice makes perfect!
句子训练：
1. He left his tent________________________.
他一头雾水地离开他的帐篷
2. Hearing that he had been saved, we ______________________.
听说他得救了，我们松了口气。
3. He lked at me ______________________________.
他以可怕的眼神看着我。
4. They left the cave _______________________.
他们惊慌地离开了那个山洞。
5. She stared _________________________at the stranger.
她惊愕地盯着那陌生人。
6.At the sight f the snake, Jack ___________________________.
一看到那条蛇，杰克跳起来、抓起一块石头就扔过去。
7._________________________, the peple n bard gt panicked, _____________.
飞机急剧下降，机上的人们开始恐慌, 全都尖叫起来。
8.At last, we returned t ur camp, _________________________.
我们终于回到了营地，又渴又饿筋疲力尽。
9.______________, fear verwhelmed me, __________________.
夜幕降临，我感到极度害怕，使我浑身哆嗦。
10.________________________, we ran ____________.
恶狼在后面紧追，我们拼命地逃跑。

Step IV：语篇输出——学以致用
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
(2021·江苏如皋第二次适应性考试)One dark night during the summer hlidays, I walked ver t my friend Jeremy's huse t stay ver. We were ging t have a mvie marathn f ur favrite sci­fi adventure film series and stay up late with sme snacks and drinks. I had nt been t his huse befre because he had nly recently mved, s I asked him t text me ver his new address: 64 Cherry Tree Rad.
Jeremy's new street was a nice part f twn, lined with tall trees and mst f the huses had a hedge r fence at the frnt. Sme f the huses had their numbers n the gate, sme n the huse, and sme didn't seem t have a number at all. It had started t clud ver as I left my huse, and as I turned
n t his rad, it began t rain. As the rain gt heavier, I rushed t find number sixty­fur and eventually fund it ... r s I thught. I walked past number 62, s assumed it was the next ne, which appeared t have n number. Yu see, usually the dd numbers are n ne side f the street, the even numbers n the ther.
I walked quickly up the driveway t the frnt dr. It was very dark t and there were n lights n inside the huse, which did seem strange. Hwever, I was getting drenched (湿透的)and wanted t get inside! I rang the bell, but nbdy came, s I rang and kncked again. Then I nticed there was huse number after all. A ridiculus small ne that said 63. There was a sudden thud (呯的一声) inside the apparently empty huse, and a mment later the frnt dr pened vilently.
A hded (戴兜帽的) man with a beard and blue glasses hurried past me and ran int the street. There was a shut frm inside: “Wait fr me, Rb！” Anther man rushed ut, but he drpped what he was carrying and tripped n the drstep. The ther man shuted frm the rad “C'mn, Kev！” he picked himself up and lked at me befre racing after his friend.
注意：
1．续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
I lked at what the secnd man had drpped; it was jewellery._________________________
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“Yu were brave fr trying stp them，” said the fficer. ____________________________
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