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    导学案:如鲠在喉”,如何“一吐为快”续写精彩故事

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    这是一份导学案:如鲠在喉”,如何“一吐为快”续写精彩故事,共4页。
    Learn the 4 strategies t make up the stry in cntinuatin writing.学会“四步”续写故事
    Learn t describe details vividly and prperly in cntinuatin writing.学会精彩细节描写
    Leading in-what difficulty d yu have in cntinuatin writing?
    导入——你的读后续写“卡”在哪儿?
    Step I. Watch vide and get the plt f the stry.
    Task 1理清故事:
    Characters---Sheldn, Mm, Dad Grge, Brther Grgie, twin sister Misey
    Setting---When?________________________
    ---Where?________________________
    Plt---(提取故事情节的动作链)--- urge --- ______ --- ________---______
    Emtinal changes(情感变化) ---frightened--- ______--- ______---_______---________
    Step II. Suppse yu are the playwright and directr, Hw will yu develp the stry?
    Task 2
    后续动作链——Smack(拍)--- _______ --- _______ --- _______---_______
    后续情感变化——frightened---_________---__________
    Theme f the stry(故事主题): ___________________________________________________.
    Step III 构思段落框架
    Task 3 根据所给文字和两个段首句,构思出两段的大概内容
    Fun fact, the first time Sheldn almst died was at the age f nine. The murder weapn? It was a Jimmy Dean sausage! That was a Mnday mrning,time was tight. Mther urged three children t have their breakfast a little bit faster. "Let’s g! Let’s g! We’re gnna be late! " Sheldn decided t give up his nrmal 20 chews per bite. He had a bite f the sausage and tried t wlf it dwn. Gd damn it! The sausage chked him all f a sudden! He culdn't breathe at all with his eyes wide pen and his face turning bright red. At the sight f this scene,his twin sister reprted t Mm,“Mm. Sheldn is making faces at me!”Mm turned and, finding the situatin was nt right, she shuted , “Grge, help!” Dad came and he laid his little sn n his lap and attempted t smack the sausage ut in vain. Panicked,the twin sister began t cry,"Sheldn is gnna die! Sheldn is gnna die!"
    Paragraph 1: Dad lifted Sheldn up t his shulder, seized him by the legs and hang him in the air. “Here we g! Let’s shake!” _______________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2: That mrning, Mm sent Sheldn t schl half an hur behind the class time.____ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Step IV. 如何写“活”动作表情细节
    Task 4 reveal emtinal changes by describing the details vividly.
    With bth his hands t his neck, Sheldn culdn't breathe at all, his eyes ____ and his face _____. (Sheldn噎住时无助感)
    _____(panick), his twin sister Misey cried ut, "Sheldn is gnna die!"(双胞胎姐姐的惊慌)
    Frighted and cncerned, Mm _____(hurry) called Dad fr help_____ heart in her thrat. (妈妈的担忧害怕)
    Wrried ____ Mm was, she still kept her head cl. She tld Dad t use Hemlich, ______(remind) him nt t hurt his sn’s little ribs. (妈妈的冷静清醒)
    Watching calmly as if nthing were happening , Grgie cntinued eating his bread and jelly. (哥哥的冷漠旁观无动于衷)
    withut hesitatin, Grge stepped up t Sheldn, lay his little sn n his lap and smacked him hard n the back. (爸爸的镇定和执行力)
    _____(pint) at the jelly in Grgie’s hand, Sheldn urged Mm t thrw away the jelly _____(instant) he caught his breath.(Sheldn的呆萌可爱)
    T Mm's relief, Sheldn caught his breath and was able t speak. /be relieved t find that Sheldn caught his breath and was able t speak. (妈妈放心了)
    ______ hearing Sheldn's reply, his big classmates _______ (同学们了解情况后的反应)
    Cnfused, Sheldn wndered why his big students laughed after hearing his terrible experience.(被哄笑后Sheldn的困惑)
    Step v. 完成故事续写
    Task 5 根据框架写出草稿,润色修改,完成整个故事续写
    Paragraph 1: Dad lifted Sheldn up t his shulder, seized him by the legs and hang him in the air. “Here we g! Let’s shake! _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2: That mrning, Mm sent Sheldn t schl half an hur behind the class time.____ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    Step VI. 总结反思:读后续写“如鲠在喉”,如何能“一吐为快”续写精彩故事?
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