04 建议信 --英语满分作文分类话题---应用文万能句型写作速成技能突破加模板与练习

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——————建议信
【篇章结构】
1. 问题陈述：根据信息点确定举行表达。
2. 提出建议：使用多种句型，避免单一句型表达。
3. 愿望或期望：写信的结尾套句。
【话题词汇】
beneficial adj.有益的
advice n. 建议; asksb. fr advice 向某人征求意见
beneficial adj. 有益的
suggest vt.建议
make sme suggestins提出一些建议
view n.观点
recmmendatin n.推荐；be highly recmmended强烈建议
beaddicted t 对……上瘾
significant adj.有重大意义的
prpse v.建议
give sb. sme advice n给某人提关于……的建议
cncerning/regarding/as t/with regard t prep.关于
express ne's views n/cncerning….表达某人对……
practical adj.实用的
prefer 更喜欢
persnally就我个人而言
Chinese civilizatin 中华文明
learn a lt abut了解许多关于……
mrever 此外,而且
amazing 令人惊叹的
well-knwn 著名的
magnificent view壮丽的景观
sightseeing spts 游览景点
a better chice更好的选择
have a gd time 玩得愉快
accunt/cnsideratin 考虑……;
as w well as 也，和
【核心句型】
一 凤头
1. Having learnt that ur library is planning t buy new bks, I'm willing t recmmend sme bks t yu.
得知我们图书馆准备买新书，我愿意向您推荐一些书。
Glad/Pleased/Delighted t knw that yu are traveling in Shanghai，I think it is a gd chice t visit Huangpu River.
很高兴得知你在上海旅游，我认为参观黄浦江是个不错的选择。
I have learned that yu have sme truble in... and wuld like t give/ffer yu the fllwing suggestins.
我知道你在……方面有困难，因此我想给你提如下一些建议。
4. When it cmes t/As fr..., the fllwing are my suggestins./My suggestins are as fllws.
当涉及/关于……，我的建议如下。
5. I'm writing t give yu sme suggestins/give yu a hand.
我写这封信的目的是给你一些建议/帮助。
I'm extremely delighted t receive yur letter asking fr my advice n hw t fit in the new schl life.
很高兴收到你的来信，信上询问我关于如何适应新的学校生活。
Here are my sme suggestins.
这有我的一些建议。
二 猪肚
1. The reasn why I recmmend this bk is that it emphasizes the imprtance f gd habits.
我推荐这本书的原因是它强调好习惯的重要性。
It is a gd way t braden yur mind, thrugh which yu can learn different cultures f the wrld.
这是一个很好的可以拓宽视野的方式。通过这种方式，你可以了解到世界上的不同文化。
First f all, yu shuld listen t the teacher carefully and take ntes in class s that yu can g ver yur lessns as sn as yu can after class.
首先，你应该认真听老师讲课。上课做好笔记，以便下课后可以及时复习。
I recmmend it mainly fr the fllwing tw reasns.
我推荐它主要有以下两个原因。
In my pinin/As far as I'm cncerned/Persnally, it wuld be wise t take the fllwing actin.
在我看来，采取如下行动是明智的。
I think it wuld be f benefit/beneficial if yu...
我认为如果……，将会受益。
a gd/great/better chice.
做……是一个好的/棒的/更好的选择。
It is als a gd idea/als helps t d..., which can...
做……也不错，这能……
三 豹尾
1. If yu need further infrmatin, dn't hesitate t cntact me.
如果你需要更多信息，请联系我。
2. I'll be mre than happy if yu can take my recmmendatin/ideas int cnsideratin.
如果你能考虑我的建议/想法，我会非常高兴。
3.I hpe that my suggestins/advice will be beneficial/f benefit t yu.
我希望我的建议对你有益。
4.I hpe yu will find my suggestins/advice helpful/useful/ practical/beneficial.
我希望你认为我的建议有帮助/有用/实用/有益的。
【话题词汇写一写】
有益的______________
建议n.___________;向某人征求意见__________________
有益的______________
建议v.______________
提出一些建议_________________
观点________________
推荐n.______________；强烈建议______________________
对……上瘾_____________________
有重大意义的________________________
建议v.______________________
给某人提出关于……的建议____________________________
关于____________________________________________________
表达某人对……____________________________________
实用的___________________________________
更喜欢___________________________________
就我个人而言 ___________________________
中华文明________________________________
了解许多关于……_______________________
此外,而且________________________________
令人惊叹的______________________________
著名的______________________________
壮丽的景观______________________________
游览景点______________________________
更好的选择______________________________
玩得愉快______________________________
考虑……;______________________________
也，和______________________________
【经典考题】
假如你是李华。母亲节前夕,请你发表一篇约100词的班级公开信,提醒大家母亲节到了,并就如何庆祝母亲节给出你的建议。
注意:
词数100左右;
可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
开头语和结束语已经给你写出。
Dear classmates,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【满分作文】
Dear classmates,
Have yu realized Mther's Day is arund the crner? And what ideas have yu cme up with t celebrate it?
In my view, hw much yu’ll spend fr yur mther des nt matter; the essential issue is if it can cnvey ur hearty lve and gratitude t ur mthers. S a bunch f flwers, a pstcard r a hug is all acceptable in return fr their devtin t us. But ding what they d fr us every day, I think, is mre significant in hnr f them. Only in this way will we be verwhelmingly aware f hw much mthers have given t us. I’ve made a plan t ck a meal fr my mther that day, even thugh I never did it befre.
My dear friends, have yu kept a decisin in place nw?
Yurs,
Li Hua

【习作点评】
1. 格式正确，语言流畅，用词准确，使用了不少高级句型和短语。
2. 必背句式：
(1) arund the crner即将到来
(2) cme with with提出
(3) hw much yu’ll spend fr yur mther des nt matter
本句使用主语从句，谓语动词为高级词汇matter重要
(4)ding what they d fr us every day, I think, is mre significant in hnr f them.
做主语的动名词短语中包含what引导的宾语从句。
Only in this way will we be verwhelmingly aware f hw much mthers have given t us.
nly用于句首时需要使用部分倒装。介词f后面用hw引导的宾语从句。

【模板仿写】
Dear classmates,
Have yu realized Mther's Day is ________________________________________即将到来? And what ideas have yu_________________________________________ t celebrate it?
In my view, hw much yu’ll spend fr yur mther _____________________________并不重要; the essential issue is if it can __________________________________表达我们衷心的爱和感激 t ur mthers. S a bunch f flwers, a pstcard r a hug is all acceptable _______________________________作为回报 their devtin t us. But ding what they d fr us every day, I think, is mre significant in hnr f them. ___________________________________________只有这样will we be verwhelmingly aware f__________________________________母亲给了我们多少. I’ve made a plan t ck a meal fr my mther that day, even thugh I never did it befre.
My dear friends, _________________________________________你做好决定了吗?
Yurs,
Li Hua

【即时训练】
假如你叫李华，你的英国朋友Andrew下个月要来你校学习两个月。他来信请你对他上学期间的交通方式提出建议。现在,请你用英语回一封信, 按以下各点注意:
1.建议骑自行车上学;
2.自行车是学生常用的交通工具;
3.骑自行车的一些好处;
4.骑自行车需注意的问题。
注意:
1. 词数 100左右。
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。
Dear Andrew,
__________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Andrew,
As fr the questin abut the transprtatin t and frm schlId like t recmmend yur riding a bicycle. Here are sme reasns.
Firstly, riding a bike t and frm schl is very cmmn amng the students,fr buying r repairing a bicycle desn’t cst a lt. Next, parking a bicycle is easy and cnvenient in ur schl.Actually/As a matter f fact,bicycle-riding is als a practical way t d exercise and prtect the envirnment. What yu shuld d carefully is just t keep an apprpriate speed while riding and lck it after yu’re ff it.In this way,yu’ll feel it simple and relaxing t ride a bicycle while yu're here.
Hpefully,these tips culd be helpful.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua