第21讲 书面表达之建议信（讲义）-2024年中考英语一轮复习讲义（全国通用）

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中考总复习一般分为三轮：
1、第一轮复习为基础知识的单元、章节复习。通过第一轮的复习，使学生系统掌握基础知识、基本技能和方法，形成明晰的知识网络和稳定的知识框架。
2、第二轮复习打破章节界限实行大单元、小综合、专题式复习。第二轮复习绝不是第一轮复习的压缩文档，而是一个知识点综合、巩固、完善、提高的过程。复习的主要任务及目标是：完成各部分知识的条 理，归纳，糅合，使各部分知识成为一个有机的整体。
3、第三轮复习是知识、能力深化巩固的阶段。复习资料的组织以中考题及模拟题为主，回扣教材，查缺补漏，进行强化训练。同时，要教给学生一些必备的应试技巧和方法，使学生有足够的自信从容地面对中考。
►第21讲 书面表达之建议信（讲义）
【复习目标】
1.精选写作话题，紧扣核心目标。
2.提升语言质量。
3. 强化高效训练。
【网络构建】
【考情分析】
建议信命题规律
书信类一直是中考英语考试中一种常考的形式，而建议信也是考查得较多的。建议信是向别人提出合理的建议，让对方接受自己的想法和主张，解决有关问题。建议信可以是写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出看法和建议，也可以是写给某个组织或机构，就改进服务等方面提出建议或忠告。建议信的观点要合情合理，注意礼貌。同时，建议信要尽量简洁明确，理由充足，具有合理性和说服性。
【名师解难】
建议信要给出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由，而且提出的理由要合情合理，语气一定要得当，既要委婉礼貌，又要有说服力。
一般来说，建议信可分为三个部分：
（1)开头；开门见山，简要陈述事由，简单介绍自己并陈述自己的观点，注意语气。
（2)主体；说明建议的内容，对所提出的建议进行分析、说明原因。这一部分注意要简 明扼要，目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。
（3)结尾；对自己提出的建议简单地做一小结并表达愿望。
建议信
高分策略之词汇：
一 单词
二 短语
一.篇首句
1.I’m very glad t receive yur letter. Nw I’m writing t give yu sme advice n hw t…
我很高兴收到你的来信。现在我写信给你一些如何…的建议。
2.I’m srry t knw that…. I’d like t share with yu sme ways f ...
很抱歉的知道…我想给你分享一下…的方法。
3. I have learnt that…. Here are sme suggestins that help yu.
我知道…这里是我给你的能帮到你的建议。 运用了定语从句
4.Hw's it ging? Yu asked me abut … in yur last letter. Here are sme gd suggestins fr yu.
最近好吗？在你上一封信中，你问我…这些是给你的建议。
二.篇中句
1.Yu’d better…
你最好…
2.I think it wuld be mre beneficial if yu culd…
我认为，如果你…将会大有裨益。 高级句型
3.Yu’re suppsed t…
你应该…
4.Mst imprtant f all，yu shuld…
最重要的是，你应该…
三.篇尾句
1. I hpe that my suggestins are helpful fr yur decisin-making anyway.、
我希望我的建议对你做决定有一定帮助。
2.I believe that yu will take my suggestins int accunt.
我相信你会认真考虑我的建议的。
3.Whatever yu decide t d，gd luck with yur studies/wrk.
不管你做怎么决定，祝你学业/工作好运！
4.I hpe these ways are f sme use t yu, and I believe everything will be ging well again sn!
我希望这些方法对你有用，并且我相信一些都会很快好起来的。
典型模板
Dear …
I’m very glad t receive yur letter. Yu asked me abut______________(引出主题) Here are sme gd suggestins fr yu.
First，it’s imprtant t_________.(建议一)Besides，it shuld be a gd idea t__________.(建议二)Yu can als__________.(建议三)As t__________, I suggest______________.(可具体到某一方面给出建议).In additin，___________(其他建议).I’m sure______________(预测可能的结果，给对方行动的信心和决心).
I hpe these ways are f sme use t yu, and I believe everything will be ging well again sn!
Yurs
【模板范文】
Dear Bb,
Learning that yu want t knw the ways t prevent Cvid-19, I'm glad t share sme gd ideas with yu.
Firstly, yu shuld wear a mask if yu have t g ut. Dn't g t crwded places, like supermarkets. Secndly, yu shuld wash yur hands with running water r sap whenever yu tuch smething. Remember t wash them slwly and carefully. And never fail t pen the windws regularly t let in sme fresh air and d keep yur rm clean. Besides, cver yur nse and muth when sneezing. If yu dn't feel well, g t see a dctr. Mst imprtant f all, yu shuld frm a gd habit. G t bed early and get up n time. Be sure t have enugh sleep, and take mre exercise!
I hpe these ways are f sme use t yu, and I believe everything will be ging well again sn!
Best wishes.
Yurs,
Li Hua
（2023·黑龙江哈尔滨·三模）
假如你是九年级一班的李力，这周六下午你要参加学校英语俱乐部举办的活动——演讲。请你根据以下信息给你的外教David写一封电子邮件，告诉他活动的相关信息并请他对你的演讲内容提出建议。
写作要点：
（1）英语俱乐部活动主题：携手创建优美校园环境（Tgether fr a Better Schl Envirnment）
（2）本次俱乐部活动形式：
①海报（pster）展示
②讲述发生在你身边的故事
③演讲
（3）谈谈你在演讲中对创建优美校园环境如何“从我做起”的具体建议。
写作要求：
（1）不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。
（3）字迹工整、语言精炼、表达准确、条理清晰。
（4）至少80词。
Dear David,
I’m writing t tell yu smething abut ur club activity which will be held this Saturday afternn.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Li
【答案】例文：
Dear David,
I’m writing t tell yu smething abut ur club activity which will be held this Saturday afternn. The theme f this English Club activity is: Tgether fr a Better Schl Envirnment. The activities include pster displays, telling stries happening arund yu and speeches.
I will give a speech, and the fllwing is the cntent. As a middle schl student, we shuld take gd care f ur campus envirnment. We shuld nt tread n the grass, r climb trees. We shuld thrw the rubbish int the dustbin. Finally, we shuldn’t spit anywhere. Sputum is full f bacteria, dn’t bring yur wn germs t thers. Let’s wrk tgether t create a civilized campus. D yu have any suggestins fr my speech? I lk frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Li
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：材料已给出，写作时注意表述清晰，做到无语法和单词拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写邮件的目的，介绍本次活动的主题与形式；
第二步，详细介绍演讲内容，望对方给出建议，并期待回复。
[亮点词汇]
①give a speech演讲
②tread n the grass踩踏草坪
③spit吐痰
④Sputum痰
⑤is full f充满
⑥civilized文明的
⑦thrw int扔进
[高分句型]
①The activities include pster displays, telling stries happening arund yu and speeches.（非谓语动词：动名词作定语修饰stries）
②Let’s wrk tgether t create a civilized campus.（祈使句）
（2023·福建福州·三模）
假如你是李华，你收到英国笔友Harry的邮件，他针对学校将要开设的特色选修课 (elective curses) 的选课问题征求你的看法和帮助，请根据邮件内容给他回复，词数80左右。信件的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Harry,
I’m glad t hear that __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear Harry,
I’m glad t hear that yur schl is planning t ffer yu sme elective curses. I think it’s gd fr yu. Here is my advice.
I think it is necessary fr a freigner t learn Chinese because Chinese is being used mre and mre widely in the wrld. S yu had better take the curse.
But hw t learn Chinese well? First, yu had better believe in yurself and try t read Chinese ludly. What’s mre, it’s a gd way t take part in a Chinese club t practise speaking Chinese. Last but nt least, I think yu shuld learn Chinese by listening t Chinese pems and watching mvies abut Chinese culture.
I hpe my advice is helpful t yu.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中“关于学习中文的建议”一项，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山提出自己的学校开设选修课，希望得到对方的建议；
第二步，具体阐述自己需要得到哪方面的建议；
第三步，书写结语，希望尽快得到回复。
[亮点词汇]
①ffer sb. sth.给某人提供某物
②decide t d sth.决定做某事
③give sb. sme advice给某人一些建议
④lk frward t ding sth.期待做某事
[高分句型]
①D yu think I shuld als take the curse? (含有宾语从句的复合句)
②S if I take it, culd yu give me sme advice n hw t learn Chinese well? (if引导条件状语从句)
（2023·吉林·统考一模）
假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Frank是一个中国迷，他计划在中秋节期间到中国旅游。这是Frank第一次来中国，他希望你能写一封e-mail为他提供一些建议。
内容包括：
（1）中秋节的习俗。
（2）最适宜出游的城市及原因。
（3）推荐适合带回英国的礼物。
写作要求：
（1）语言流畅，层次清晰，内容可以适当发挥。
（2）词数80—100（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
（3）书写规范, 卷面整洁。
（4）文中不得出现真实学校名称和个人姓名。
Dear Frank,
I’m glad t hear yu’re cming t China.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hpe my reply will help yu and yu will have a gd time in China.
All the best, Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Frank,
I’m glad t hear yu’re cming t China. The Mid-Autumn Festival is ne f the traditinal festivals in China. We ften eat mn cakes and admire the mn. Chengdu is a city where yu can feel relaxed. There are many teahuses in which yu can chat with friends r d business. In additin, Chengdu is als the hmetwn f the pandas. Guangzhu is a mdern city with numerus snacks, making it a great place t taste fd. If yu want t buy gifts, tea and Chinese knts are gd chices.
I hpe my reply will help yu and yu will have a gd time in China.
All the best, Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件，属于电子邮件写作；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：邮件开头、结尾以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接邮件开头，介绍中秋节的习俗；
第二步，推荐最适宜出游的城市，并说明原因，可列举具体的事例；
第三步，推荐适合带回英国的礼物并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①chat with friends和朋友闲聊
②have a gd time玩得愉快
[高分句型]
①Chengdu is a city where yu can feel relaxed.（where引导的限制性定语从句）
②There are many teahuses in which yu can chat with friends r d business.（which引导的限制性定语从句）
③If yu want t buy gifts, tea and Chinese knts are gd chices.（if引导的条件状语从句）
（2023·内蒙古呼伦贝尔·统考二模）
假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Chris对中国文化很感兴趣，他给你发来邮件，询问中国人日常生活中的基本社交礼仪，如待人接物、餐桌礼仪等。请你用英语回复一封邮件，介绍你所知道的相关礼仪。
提示词语： 社交的 scial；礼仪 manners；握手 shake hands；礼貌 plite；礼物 gift；筷子 chpsticks。
提示问题： 1. What d we d when we meet peple fr the first time?
2. Hw d we behave(行为) prperly at table?
注意事项： 1. 词数90词左右，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
Dear Chris,
I’m glad t knw that yu’re interested in Chinese scial manners.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hpe the abve is helpful. Please feel free t ask fr mre infrmatin.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Chris,
I’m glad t knw that yu’re interested in Chinese scial manners. China is a cuntry with a lng histry, s there are many custms here. Let me tell yu sme f them.
Firstly, yu are suppsed t shake hands when yu meet smene fr the first time. Secndly, yu shuld bring a gift when yu are invited t a party and be sure t arrive n time r a few minutes earlier. Thirdly, when yu eat meals with thers, it’s rude t pint at thers with yur chpsticks. And dn’t make nise when yu have yur sup.
I hpe the abve is helpful. Please feel free t ask fr mre infrmatin.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点题，说明中国有很多风俗礼仪。
第二步，介绍日常生活中的基本社交礼仪，如待人接物、餐桌礼仪等。
第三步，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①a cuntry with a lng histry历史悠久的国家
②be suppsed t应该
③fr the first time首次
[高分句型]
①Secndly, yu shuld bring a gift when yu are invited t a party and be sure t arrive n time r a few minutes earlier. (when引导时间状语从句)
②And dn’t make nise when yu have yur sup. (祈使句否定式)
（2023·浙江温州·校考三模）
假如你是李华，近日你收到英国笔友Je的来信，他和你一样，也是一名九年级的学生，面对升学感到压力很大。请你给他写封回信，安慰他，参考所给信息，为他提出至少2条减压的建议。
要求：（1）文中不得出现真实的姓名、学校等信息；
（2）词数：110词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Je,
Happy t receive yur letter, but I’m srry t hear that yu have t face a lt f pressure. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Je,
Happy t receive yur letter, but I’m srry t hear that yu have t face a lt f pressure. Dn’t wrry t much abut it, and just take it easy. As yur friend, I’d like t ffer yu sme suggestins t help yu relieve yur pressure.
First, yu shuld learn t relax. If yu are feeling stressed ut, yu can talk t thers face t face r by chatting n QQ r WeChat. Ding sme exercise regularly can help yu relax yurself and build up yur bdy as well. Secndly, it’s a gd idea t ask the psychlgy teacher fr help when yu are under pressure. The teacher will give yu helpful advice s that yu can easily find a way ut.
I hpe yu will find my suggestins helpful.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封回信，属于电子邮件写作；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：信件开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，不要遗漏提示中的“你体会”这一要点，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接书信开头，对Je进行安慰；
第二步，按照要点给Je提出减轻压力的建议，可列举具体的事例；
第三步，希望提出的建议能对Je有所帮助并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①take it easy放轻松
②ffer sb sth向某人提供某物
③feel stressed ut感到压力过大
④as well也，又，还
[高分句型]
①If yu are feeling stressed ut, yu can talk t thers face t face r by chatting n QQ r WeChat.（if引导条件状语从句）
②Secndly, it’s a gd idea t ask the psychlgy teacher fr help when yu are under pressure.（it作形式主语，动词不定式作真正的主语）
（2023·安徽·校联考三模）
假如你是校英语报编辑李华，收到了九年级学生××的电子邮件，邮件中她诉说了她最近遇到的两个问题。请你根据以下提示，针对她的问题给她回一封电子邮件，给出合理的建议。
提示：
1. 上课容易犯困。建议：每天早睡，保证至少八个小时的睡眠；
2. 英语口语不好。建议：参加英语社团，多用英语与他人交流等。
要求：
1. 习作包括提示要点，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺、条理清晰；
3. 词数100左右（邮件格式及开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear ××,
I’m srry t hear that yu’re in truble. I’m t give yu sme advice n yur prblems.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hpe my advice will be helpful t yu.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear Han Mei,
I’m srry t hear that yu’re in truble. I’m t give yu sme advice n yur prblems.
Fr yur first prblem—yu get sleepy in class easily, I think maybe yu dn’t get enugh sleep the night befre. S why nt stp staying up late? Try t g t bed early and make sure yu get at least eight hurs’ sleep every night. And yu can drink sme cffee when yu feel really sleepy.
Fr yur secnd prblem, I think yu shuldn’t be afraid t speak in English. T imprve yur spken English, yu can jin the English club and cmmunicate with thers in English as much as pssible. What’s mre, yu can watch sme English talk shws t learn hw t speak English well.
I hpe my advice will be helpful t yu.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“提示”中给出的关键信息，回复电子邮件，就对方的问题给出合理的建议。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明邮件的主题；
第二步，针对两个问题分别给出建议；
第三步，希望自己的建议有用。
[亮点词汇]
①make sure 确保
②at least 至少
③be afraid t d sth. 害怕做某事
④in English 用英语
[高分句型]
①S why nt stp staying up late?（表建议的常见句型）
②And yu can drink sme cffee when yu feel really sleepy.（when引导时间状语从句）
③What’s mre, yu can watch sme English talk shws t learn hw t speak English well.（动词不定式表目的状语；疑问词+动词不定式）
（2023·江西吉安·统考一模）
假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Mike因为父母工作地点的改变而转到新的学校就读，但一直苦于没有适应新的校园生活，于是发来邮件向你请教。请你根据表格要点提示和要求，给Mike 回一封邮件：提出你的建议并表达期待(各补充一点)。
要求：
1.邮件应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2.邮件中不得出现真实的人名和地名；
3.词数80-120。邮件的开头和结尾都已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
I am srry t knw that yu still can’t get used t the life in yur new schl._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I lk frward t hearing frm yu sn. Best wishes fr yu!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】One pssible versin:
Dear Mike,
I am srry t knw that yu still can’t get used t the life in yur new schl. I’d like t give yu sme advice.
Firstly, yu can make sme new friends. As yu knw, friendship can keep yu away frm lneliness and help yu t get used t the new schl life. Secndly, yu can take part in different schl activities. That will nt nly make yur life interesting but als help yu t make mre new friends. Besides, yu can als try t develp sme hbbies. Hbbies can make yu feel happy and relaxed frm busy schl life. And they usually lead t a meaningful life.
I am sure yu will get used t yur new schl life sn by ding these things.
I lk frward t hearing frm yu sn. Best wishes fr yu!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生要注意不要遗漏表格给出的建议，可适当提出自己的更多建议并添加细节使文章更通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。可以给对方一些建议；
第二步，详细阐述自己的建议并表达期待，希望他早日适应新学校生活；
第三步，书写结语，表达“希望收到他的好消息”。
[亮点词汇]
① as yu knw 正如你所知道的
② keep away frm 远离
③ get used t 习惯
④ develp hbbies 发展爱好
⑤ lead t 导致
[高分句型]
I am sure yu will get used t yur new schl life sn by ding these things.（省略that的宾语从句）
（2023·安徽阜阳·统考二模）
假定你是李华。你的加拿大朋友Mike发来邮件说他即将转入新班级，他担心和新同学相处时会遇到困难。请你用英文给他回复一封邮件，提几点建议，帮助他与新同学愉快相处。
要点：1.尊重他人；2.乐于助人；3.乐于分享。
注意：1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2.词数80~100，开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：respect (v. 尊重)
Dear Mike,
Hw is everything ging? Yu asked me hw t get alng well with ther classmates in yur new class. Here are sme ways that might help.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Mike,
Hw is everything ging? Yu asked me hw t get alng well with ther classmates in yur new class. Here are sme ways that might help.
First f all, yu shuld respect thers. Fr instance, say hell t anyne arund yu, which can make them familiar with yu as sn as pssible. In additin, be friendly t peple. If yu are always ready t help them, they will understand yu better. What’s mre, it is better fr yu t take an active part in the activities after-class where yu can shw yur talent and can make mre friends wh have the same interest with yu. Finally, yu shuld be willing t share the sadness and happiness with thers.
I hpe my advice will be helpful t yu. May yu be happy in yur new schl.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出；
第二步，介绍如何与新同学愉快相处的建议；
第三步，表达自己的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①get alng well with与……友好相处
②fr instance例如
③be friendly t对……友好
[高分句型]
If yu are always ready t help them, they will understand yu better.（if引导条件状语从句）
（2023·江西抚州·统考一模）
假定你是李华，你的留学生朋友Jack要在暑假期间回国，打算为他妈妈准备几件富有特色的礼物，特来向你咨询。请你给他回复一封邮件。
写作要点：
1.建议礼物：旗袍和中国结。
2.说明礼物原因，表达祝福。
提示语：旗袍：chensam 中国结：Chinese knt
作文要求：
1.短文应该包括以上全部信息，可以适当发挥，要求条理清楚，行文连贯，段落分明。
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名。
3.词数不少于80词。
Dear Jack,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
Dear Jack,
I’m glad t hear that yu are cming back hme during the summer hliday and yu want t bring a few gifts fr yur mther that symblize the Chinese culture.
In my pinin, yu can buy the fllwing tw presents. First f all, chengsam, a very beautiful traditinal dress fr Chinese wmen, can shw the real beauty f a wman, thus I am sure that yur mther will like it very much. What’s mre, the Chinese knt, which is pretty decratin ppular with Chinese, is usually hung in the sitting rm f ur hme. It stands fr unity and gd luck. Meanwhile, I’m cnvinced that it will bring gd luck and happiness t yur family.
Have a gd vacatin and remember me t yur mther.
Yurs
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，未电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，建议买旗袍和中国结作为礼物，并说明该礼物的意义；
第三步，书写结语，表达祝福。
[亮点词汇]
①in my pinin依我之见
②first f all首先
③what’s mre另外
[高分句型]
①What’s mre, the Chinese knt, which is pretty decratin ppular with Chinese, is usually hung in the sitting rm f ur hme.(which引导的定语从句)
②Have a gd vacatin and remember me t yur mther.(祈使句肯定形式)
（2023·广西·统考三模）
假如你是李华，你的好朋友Lucy是月光中学的初三学生，中考将至，她写邮件询问你，如何缓解学习压力。请你根据下面的导图内容，用英文给她回复一封邮件。内容要点：
写作要求：
1. 文中须包含以上要点，可以适当发挥；
2. 文中不能提及本人的真实姓名、地名和校名；
3. 字数80左右，开头不计入总词数。
Dear Lucy,
Hw are yu these days?
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】One pssible versin:
Dear Lucy,
Hw are yu these days? In yur e-mail, yu asked hw t relieve study pressure. I have sme advice t tell yu.
First f all, yu can listen t sme sft music. Music can make yu relaxed. Yu can als watch sme interesting mvies which will make yu feel happy. Then yu can learn much better. Besides, it’s a gd idea t ask yur parents r teachers fr help if necessary. At last, exercise is a gd way, t.
Everything will be OK. I hpe these suggestins can be helpful.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件，要求就如何减轻学习压力给好友提些建议。
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主
③提示：题目要求根据所给提示，就好友关于缓解学习压力的问题回一封电子邮件，给出一些建议，并进行适当的内容扩展。写作时注意适当增加细节，不要遗漏要点。
[写作步聚]
第一步，开篇点题。
第二步，根据所给要点，给出一些建议，并进行适当补充。
第三步，表达祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①first f all首先
② help向……寻求帮助
③at last最后
[高分句型]
①Yu can als watch sme interesting mvies which will make yu feel happy.（which引导的定语从句）
②Besides, it’s a gd idea t ask yur parents r teachers fr help if necessary.（it作形式主语）
（2023·辽宁鞍山·统考中考真题）
眼睛是心灵的窗户。假如你是李平，你的朋友Mike最近为近视感到困扰。请你根据下面表格的提示信息给他写一封电子邮件，说明他近视的原因并提出建议。
要求：（1）不能出现真实的校名、人名等相关信息。
（2）根据中文和英文提示，可以适当发挥。
（3）内容完整、意思连贯、符合逻辑、书写整齐。
（4）词数：80~100词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：视力 eyesight；近视 mypia；电子产品 electrnic device
Dear Mike,
Hw is it ging with yu?
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Ping
【答案】例文：
Dear Mike,
Hw is it ging with yu? I’m srry t learn that yur eyesight is getting weaker. I think yu may use electrnic prducts fr a lng time, which is bad fr yur eyesight. And reading bks fr t lng may cause mypia.
But dn’t wrry. I’d like t share with yu sme ways f prtecting eyesight. At first, yu shuld cntrl the time yu spend n electrnic prducts. Yu can d mre utdr activities. What’s mre, yu shuld develp sme gd habits. Yu shuld eat mre vegetables and fruit. They are gd fr yur health. Besides, ding eye exercises plays an imprtant rle in relaxing yur tired eyes. Lastly, yu shuld have yur eyes examined every term t make sure yur eyes stay healthy.
I hpe yu’ll find my ways helpful.
Yurs,
Li Ping
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示信息给对方一些建议，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，介绍对方近视的原因；
第二步，针对朋友的问题给出相应的建议；
第三步，表达自己的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①wuld like t d sth.想要做某事
②be gd fr对……有好处
③play an imprtant rle in在……中起重要作用
[高分句型]
①I think yu may use electrnic prducts fr a lng time, which is bad fr yur eyesight.(which引导的定语从句)
②ding eye exercises plays an imprtant rle in relaxing yur tired eyes.(动名词作主语)
（2023·江苏无锡·统考中考真题）
青少年在成长过程中会遇到各种问题，为此《21世纪英文报》开设了Teens Talk专栏，倾听读者的心声，并由“少年之友”Sigmund Friend予以回复。假设你是李华，最近也遇上了些烦心事，请给该专栏发一封英文邮件，讲述你的烦恼并寻求建议。
注意事项：
（1）邮件内容须自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
（2）词数在100左右，邮件开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
（3）邮件中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称。
Dear Mr. Friend,
I’m writing t yu abut the prblem I’m facing at the mment.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m lking frward t hearing frm yu sn.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear Mr. Friend,
I’m writing t yu abut the prblem I’m facing at the mment.
These days I’m nt happy. I always argue with my parents. They nly care abut my schlwrk. The summer hliday is cming. They plan t chse lts f after-schl classes fr me. But I dn’t want t take these classes and dn’t want t be s busy. I’m interested in painting. I just want t take painting lessns during the hliday. They disagree with me. I dn’t knw what t d. And hw can I imprve the relatinship with my parents? Can yu give me sme advice?
I’m lking frward t hearing frm yu sn.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据要求讲述自己的烦恼。注意不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明自己遇到了问题。
第二步，讲述自己的烦恼并寻求建议。
第三步，书写结尾。
[亮点词汇]
①argue with和某人争吵
②care abut关心
③take painting lessns上绘画课
[高分句型]
①The summer hliday is cming. (现在进行时表示将来的动作)
② I dn’t knw what t d. (疑问词+动词不定式)
3．（2023·山东滨州·统考中考真题）
假如你是李华，近日你的英国笔友Amy发来邮件，向你诉说她最近的困扰；自己体型微胖，想通过节食减肥，以更美的面貌进入新的学校学习。请你根据邮件内容用英语给她回封邮件，谈一谈你对这问题的见解。
参考词汇: diet(v.节食), appearance (n.外貌), inner beauty (内在美)
Dear Li Hua,
I have been a bit larger than ther girls since I was little. Fr a lng time, this really trubled me. I feel mre wrried because I will start my senir high schl life sn! I am afraid that the students in the new schl will laugh at me because I am “big”. I decide t lk mre beautiful, s I want t lse weight by dieting. What d yu think f my plan? Can yu give me sme advice?
Lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Amy
要求：1.要点齐全，并适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名与校名；
3.卷面整洁，书写美观，可适当加2—3分；
4.80词左右。开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Amy,
I have received and read yur letter, in which yu said yu wanted t lse weight by dieting.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs, Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Amy,
I have received and read yur letter, in which yu said yu wanted t lse weight by dieting. As yu mentined in the letter, I have sme advice fr yu.
Firstly, there is n need t care abut what thers think f yu. The mst imprtant thing is t be cnfident and psitive, as it will help yu have curage t face and vercme yur truble. Inner beauty is mre imprtant than appearance. Secndly, keep a healthy diet. Stay away frm high-fat fd and eat mre fruit and vegetables instead. A balanced diet is very imprtant fr lsing weight. Thirdly, ding prper exercise is necessary. Yu’d better get up early in the mrning and d sme sprts regularly.
The mre yu exercise, the healthier yu’ll be. I hpe my advice will be helpful t yu.
Yurs, Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据邮件内容提出建议，并适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，提出要给Amy的建议；
第二步，具体阐述给Amy同学的三个建议；
第三步，总结全文，表达期望。
[亮点词汇]
①there is n need t d sth没必要做某事
②stay away frm…与……保持距离
③have curage t d sth有勇气做某事
[高分句型]
①I hpe my advice will be helpful t yu.（宾语从句）
②Stay away frm high-fat fd and eat mre fruit and vegetables instead.（祈使句）
4.（2022·山东威海·中考真题）
某英语杂志社Just Ask栏目收到一位青少年Claire的电子邮件，邮件中讲述了自己的困惑，并向大家寻求帮助。认真阅读这封电子邮件，假定你是Sarah或Kevin，请从不同角度给出合理化建议。
要求： (1) 词数100左右，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
(2) 文中不得出现任何与考生相关的真实信息。
Dear Claire,
I understand yu. Once I was als in the similar situatin. It’s nt easy fr us t get thrugh teenage years smthly. Here are my pinins.
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Gd luck!
Sarah/Kevin
【答案】Versin 1
Dear Claire,
I understand yu. Once I was als in the similar situatin. It’s nt easy fr us t get thrugh teenage years smthly. Here are my pinins.
First f all, just be yurself and stick t yur wn style. There is n need t care t much abut what yu are in thers’ eyes. After all, yur uter lk is nt as imprtant as yur inner beauty. Figure ut what yu are gd at and wrk hard t make yurself better at it. Everyne will lk up t yu if yu are utstanding enugh.
What’s mre, yu shuld knw what true friends are. A true friend will always care abut yu, nt yur clthes. He will reach fr yur hand and tuch yur heart, but nt laugh at yu.
In additin, wearing cmfrtably and cnveniently is enugh fr a teenager. With the grwth f yur age and experience, yu will develp yur sense f fashin.
Gd luck!
Kevin
Versin 2
Dear Claire,
I understand yu. Once I was als in the similar situatin. It’s nt easy fr us t get thrugh teenage years smthly. Here are my pinins.
First f all, the clthes we wear dn’t need t be fashinable but suitable. Fashin can mean a lt, nt just abut clthes. Fr example, if yu can speak beautiful English r vlunteer t help thers, yu are in fashin.
Next, a true friend shuld be smene wh really understands yu. Yu can have a talk with yur friends laughing at yu and tell them yur feeling. I believe they will change.
Mst f all, different peple can have different pinins even fr the same clthes. The true fashin is t be yurself. Dn’t care t much abut what thers say. Keep active, d what yu are gd at and imprve yurself t be a better persn.
Gd luck!
Sarah
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇邮件作文。要求根据邮件的内容，写一封回信，给出建议。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：以例文1为例，写作时要以第二和第三人称来行文，时态以一般现在时为主。作文可分为四段，第一段引出话题；第二、三、四段就他人的看法，交友和穿着等方面给出建议。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
5．（2022·山东滨州·统考中考真题）
假定你是李华，最近你的笔友刘明发来邮件，向你诉说他的困扰；他的父母不让他用手机APP给英文电影配音，认为会影响学习和休息。请你根据邮件内容用英语给他回封邮件，内容包括：
1.表示理解，并予以安慰；
2.提出合理的建议；
3.希望情况有所好转。
参考词汇：dub（v. 配音）
要求：1.要点齐全，并适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名与校名：
3.卷面整洁，书写美观，可适当加2-3分；
4. 80词左右。开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Liu Ming.
I’m srry t hear that yu had an argument with yur parents when dubbing freign films by using mbile apps.
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Yurs.
Li Hua
【答案】One pssible versin:
Dear Liu Ming,
I’m srry t hear that yu had an argument with yur parents when dubbing freign films by using mbile apps.
I cmpletely agree that it is a gd way t learn English with interest. Hwever, yu shuldn’t make yur parents angry, because they are the nes wh lve yu all the time. Dn’t be s upset. G straight t yur parents and tell them yu are srry fr that. Then, listen t yur parents patiently, and yu will understand what yur parents are wrried abut. At last, yu can talk t yur parents abut the advantages f dubbing freign films by using mbile apps.
I hpe things will be better fr yu sn.
Yurs.
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一封电子邮件。针对刘明的困扰提出合理性建议。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第二人称和第三人称为主。分为三段式：第一段开头已给出；第二段针对刘明的困扰提出合理建议；最后一段表达自己的希望。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
目录
一
复习目标
掌握目标及备考方向
二
考情分析
建议信中考考情分析
三
建议信
的考向
1.精选写作话题，紧扣核心目标。
2.提升语言质量。
3. 强化高效训练。
4.提升必考题型归纳
四
真题感悟
中考建议信经典考题精选
建议
advice v.
建议
suggestin n.
帮助
help v.
有帮助的
helpful adj.
收到
receive
推荐
recmmend v.
提供
ffer/prvide/supply
发展
develp v.
实用的
practical adj.
考虑
cnsider v.
考虑
accunt/cnsideratin
也，和
as well as
除...之外
in additin t
征求某人的建议
ask fr sb.’s advice
在…方面给某人建议
give sb. advice/ suggestins n…
提出一些建议
make/ffer sme suggestins/advice
接受我的建议
adpt/accept/fllw/ take up my advice/ suggestins
在我看来，就我而言
in my pinin/as far as I’m cncerned/persnally
表达某人的观点
express ne’s views/pinins
对某人有益
be beneficial/be f benefit t sb.
觉得我的建议有益/实用
find my suggestins/advice helpful/practical
一个有效的方式
an effective way
记住
keep… in mind
振奋某人的精神
lift ne’s spirits
对…有坏影响
对…有坏影响
培养好的习惯
develp gd habits
涵括各种各样的…
cver a wide variety f
T: LiHua2023@163.cm
Frm: Harry@htmail.cm.
Dear Li Hua,
I’m glad t tell yu that ur schl is planning t ffer us sme elective curses, including Chinese, designing, phtgraphy and sme ther subjects. Many f my friends decide t chse Chinese. Is it necessary fr a freigner t learn Chinese? D yu think I shuld als take the curse? And I hear Chinese is difficult fr freigners. S if I take it, culd yu give me sme advice n hw t learn Chinese well?
Lking frward t hearing frm yu!
Yurs,
Harry
Hw d yu relieve pressure?
① talk t thers
② d sme exercise
③ ask the psychlgy teacher fr help
……
写作要点
具体内容
Yur advice
1.Make mre friends;
2.Attend schl activities.
3. ...
Yur wishes
...
Hw t relieve (缓解) study pressure?
listen t sme sft music
watch sme interesting mvies
ask yur parents r teachers fr help
……
近视原因
长时间使用电子产品；
读书时间过长。
建议
控制使用电子产品时间；
养成好习惯（如饮食、做眼保健操）
……
希望
……
Frm: Claire T: Just Ask
Subject: Asking fr advice
Dear friends,
I feel terrible and I really need yur advice. The prblem is that I’m nt interested in clthes. I dn’t knw what’s in fashin and I dn’t like ging shpping fr clthes. Sme f my friends laugh at me and say that I haven’t gt style. What d yu think I shuld d?
Claire, 13
Dear Li Hua,
I’m in truble nw. Yesterday I argued with my parents because they didn’t allw me t dub freign films by using mbile apps. They thught that it wuld have a bad influence n my study and sleep. I brke their hearts and made them angry. I’m srry fr that but I really think it helpful t learn English by dubbing the freign films. Nw I dn’t knw what t d. Culd yu help me?
Yurs.
Liu Ming