衡水市2020届新高考英语高三作文“内容概要”模拟练习（三）写作指导

2020届衡水市新高考英语高三作文“内容概要”

模拟练习（三）写作指导

阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

Although being famous might sound like a dream come true, today's stars, feeling like zoo animals, face pressures that few of us can imagine. They are at the center of much of the world's attention. Paparazzi(狗仔队) camp outside their homes, cameras ready. Tabloids(小报) publish thrilling stories about their personal lives. Just imagine not being able to do anything without being photographed or interrupted for a signature.

According to the psychologists, celebrities(名人) worry constantly about their public appearance. Eventually, they start to lose track of who they really are, seeing themselves the way their fans imagine them, not as the people they were before everyone knew their names. Over time, they feel separated and alone.

The phenomenon of tracking celebrities has been around for ages. In the 4th century B.C., painters followed Alexander the Great into battle, hoping to picture his victories for his admirers. When Charles Dickens visited America in the 19th century, his sold-out readings attracted thousands of fans, leading him to complain about his lack of privacy. Tabloids of the 1920s and 1930s ran articles about film-stars in much the same way that modern tabloids and websites do.

Being a public figure today, however, is a lot more difficult than it used to be. Superstars cannot move about without worrying about photographers with modern cameras. When they say something silly or do something ridiculous, there is always the Internet to spread the news in minutes and keep their "story" alive forever.

If fame is so troublesome, why aren't all celebrities running away from it? The answer is there are still ways to deal with it. Some stars stay calm by surrounding themselves with trusted friends and family or by escaping to remote places away from big cities. They focus not on how famous they are but on what they love to do or whatever made them famous in the first place. With these effective approaches, some celebrities relieve the stress and remain popular with fans. Consequently, though being famous is driving some stars crazy, some wise ones enjoy what reputation brings them.

二、概写步骤

第一步：通读理解全文，了解文章结构，理清各段落之间的逻辑关系，提取全文中心词，尤其是名词与动词。

第二步：细读原文，划出各段的主题句与关键词，关键词以动词与名词为主，涵盖段落全部要点。

第三步：根据所划内容，结合理解，理清句内逻辑关系，然后转述或合成句子。可用中文概括出段落大意，然后用一句话翻译出来(合理利用原词)。

第四步：通读修改。要考虑句首连接词的使用、高级词汇的替换、句式的多样、语法是否正确以及字数的多少等

第五步：用衡水体抄到试卷上，力求清楚美观。

三、分段概括

关键词句已在原文标出，结合理解，用中文概括出一句话并译成英文。

❶目前，名人的隐私受到粉丝的打扰，面临着巨大的压力。

Currently, celebrities, with their privacy being disturbed by fans, are confronted with high pressures.

❷心理学家们认为，名人过于注重他们的公众形象，使他们自己与世隔绝，非常孤独。

Psychologists say that celebrities focus too much on their public image, leaving themselves cut off and isolated.

❸事实上，同样的问题存在已久，但今天的名人面临更多的挑战。

In fact, the same problem has existed for long, but today's celebrities have more challenges to face.

❹因此，为了解决这个问题，一些聪明的名人优先考虑做他们喜欢做的事情，而不是做一些有压力的事情。

Therefore, to tackle the problem, some wise celebrities give priority to doing what they like rather than doing something stressful.

四、下水范文

Currently, celebrities, with their privacy being disturbed by fans, are confronted with high pressures. (要点1)Psychologists say that celebrities focus too much on their public image, leaving themselves cut off and isolated. (要点2)In fact, the same problem has existed for long, but today's celebrities have more challenges to face. (要点3.4)Therefore, to tackle the problem, some wise celebrities give priority to doing what they like rather than doing something stressful. (要点5)【68字】

参考范文：

Living in the public gaze, stars suffer from great pressure. (要点1)What's worse, anxiety over their public appearance robs them of the objective self-image, which leads to the feeling of isolation in the long term. (要点2) While being tracked has been a headache to celebrities for centuries, modern cameras and the Internet make it harder to be famous nowadays. (要点3. 4) However, by dealing with the stress wisely, stars still can stay popular and happy. (要点5)【71字】