2020江苏高考英语二轮讲义：专题五书面表达层级二　第三讲　过渡衔接巧妙运用

第三讲　过渡衔接，巧妙运用[学生用书P109]一篇好的文章读起来是抑扬顿挫、圆润通畅、朗朗上口的。词汇再美、句式再高级，若缺乏有效的衔接与过渡，充其量只能是一盘零乱的珍珠，虽光彩夺目却不堪受用。有效地使用过渡成分将亮点语句串“珠”成篇，是成就满分作文的最后一道“工序”。利用好“起”“承”“转”“合”四方法，会让文章读起来自然流畅，彰显考生深厚的写作功底，折服阅卷老师挑剔的目光，为之“倾倒”而给高分。 ——创造良好开端表示“起”的词汇常用在段落或文章的开头，用于开篇引出扩展句。常见的词汇有：first, firstly, first of all, at first, in the first place, above all, to begin/start with, today, now, nowadays, at present, currently, recently, generally speaking, according to等。①(2019·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)To begin with, because I am very good at drawing Chinese painting, I can introduce and explain a lot of Chinese painting knowledge to the visitors.②(2018·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)According to our tradition，you are supposed to arrive early, so that you can help the family prepare the dinner, which is not only meaningful but also interesting.③(2017·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)Now I’m writing to tell you the plan for the next class.④(2017·天津卷书面表达)Firstly，I am expected to know about the polite language related to my service. ——顺势承上启下表示“承”的词汇常用于承接主题句或第一个扩展句。常见的词汇有：second/secondly, also, besides, in addition, soon afterwards, after that, what’s more, furthermore, moreover, what’s worse, still less, to make matters worse, worse still, for example, in other words, especially, particularly, obviously, meanwhile, at the same time等。①(2019·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)Besides, I have a sense of responsibility and rich experience in being a volunteer. ②(2019·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)Moreover, I learned Chinese painting for more than ten years in my childhood; therefore, I do know a lot about this great art form.③(2017·北京卷书面表达)Several days later, when the video was played on the graduation ceremony, it was well received. ——巧妙转折过渡表示“转”的词汇常用来表示不同或相反的意见或情况。常见的词汇有：but, yet, however, while, otherwise, or (else), on the contrary, on the other hand, contrary to, in any case, though, although, as, even if/though, despite, in spite of, regardless of等。①(2018·北京卷书面表达)Though/Although the foreign students have studied in our school for a long time，they don’t know how to make tea.②(2017·江苏卷书面表达)However, China saw a decline in its economic growth rate last year.③(2017·北京卷书面表达)Some compromises were unavoidable, but the video turned out perfect. ——完美结束全文表示“合”的词汇常用于小结段落中上文的内容，引导最后一个扩展句或引导结尾句表示段落的结束。常见的词汇有：finally, last but not least, in short, in brief, in conclusion, in a/one word, to sum up, all in all, on the whole, in general等。①(2019·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)Last but certainly not least, as vice monitor of our class, I am kind, patient and always ready to help others.②(2019·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)To sum up, I wish you could live up to the expectations of our school.③(2018·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)In brief, do as the Chinese do when in China.④(2018·北京卷书面表达)In a/one word, I do hope your dream will come true and it’s my pleasure to show you around in Beijing when that day comes.[学生用书P110] 用过渡性词语完成句子1．In addition, your teaching is beneficial for me to broaden my horizons.The teaching about the cultural differences between China and foreign countries can broaden my horizons.→In addition, your teaching is beneficial for me to broaden my horizons, such_as_the_cultural_differences_between_China_and_foreign_countries．2．In this activity, the students have improved their ability of creativity.In this activity, the students have raised their awareness of environmental protection.→In this activity，the students not_only have improved their ability of creativity, but_also have raised their awareness of environmental protection.3．We should avoid using phones while walking.We should avoid talking while driving.→We should avoid using phones while walking or_talking_while_driving．4．The continuous increase in private cars has given rise to the traffic jam and caused serious environmental problems.I propose an environmentally­friendly commute.→The continuous increase in private cars has given rise to the traffic jam and caused serious environmental problems, so_I_propose_an_environmentally­friendly_commute．5．I am sorry that I cannot attend school.I’ve got flu.→I am sorry that I cannot attend school because_I’ve_got_flu．6．The doctor said my injury was a little serious according to CT scanning.The doctor advised me not to move for at least three days.→The doctor said my injury was a little serious according to CT scanning, so_he_advised_me_not_to_move_for_at_least_three_days． 选用适当的过渡性词语补全短文to begin with, last but not least, moreover, as far as I’m concernedDear Jim，I am glad that you are interested in Chinese culture and eager to explore more.As_far_as_I’m_concerned,_the Ancient Poetry is your best choice. To_begin_with,_by learning Chinese ancient poems, you can have an extensive knowledge of history and culture in ancient China. Moreover,_you can feel the charm of the language by reading poems, which helps to improve your Chinese. To follow the course well, you’d better read and recite as many poems as possible. Last_but_not_least,_it is a good idea to search for related background knowledge so that you will fully understand the conception of poetry.What do you think of the course? I am sure you will have a lot of fun from it.Yours，Li Hua