2020江苏高考英语二轮讲义：专题五书面表达层级二　第二讲　句式要高级句子要鲜活


第二讲　句式要高级，句子要鲜活[学生用书P106]
句式单一，缺乏生气的文章，哪怕无任何错误也不可能得高分。精彩句式的合理使用会使文章极具可读性。考生在写作时应多运用一些高级句式和复合句，并注意句式的灵活多变，让文章读起来抑扬顿挫，让考生深厚的语言功底得以体现，让作文跨上五档线！

　特殊句式，风景独好
写作中，如果考生能够使用强调句、倒装句、省略句、感叹句等特殊句式，不仅能彰显考生的英语水平，还能提升写作档次。
1．运用强调句
①(2019·太原模拟书面表达)With your generous help, I firmly believe that I will adapt to the college life as soon as possible.
→It is with your generous help that I firmly believe that I will adapt to the college life as soon as possible.
②(2019·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)I believe hard work will pay off!
→I do believe hard work will pay off!
2．运用倒装句
(2019·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)The game is so significant that it is required that everyone should be present punctually.
→So significant is the game that it is required that everyone should be present punctually.
3．运用虚拟语气
If you should accept my application, I would spare no effort to commit myself to your satisfaction.
→Should you accept my application, I would spare no effort to commit myself to your satisfaction.
4．运用省略句
(2019·昆明高三摸底调研书面表达)While we travel along the way, we can enjoy the beautiful scenery as well as the new looks of the villages and towns.
→While travelling along the way, we can enjoy the beautiful scenery as well as the new looks of the villages and towns.
5．it 句型
①(2018·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)First of all, bear it in mind that you had better arrive punctually or some time earlier than the appointed time, which is of great significance to show your politeness.(it作形式宾语)
②(2018·江苏卷书面表达)It is necessary to hold an objective attitude towards ratings.(it作形式主语)
　三大句式，编排巧妙

1．增加亮点的定语从句
定语从句的应用可以非常有效地提升表达档次，在写作中如果我们可以把两个简单句合并为一个含有定语从句的复合句，或者把并列句改为含有定语从句的复合句，这些都能为文章增加亮点。
①(2018·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)Everyone is welcome to watch the film. It tells about the development of our school.
→Everyone is welcome to watch the film, which tells about the development of our school.
②(2017·浙江卷6月书面表达)We will go to the Spring Mountain and there we can have a climb.
→We will go to the Spring Mountain, where we can have a climb.
③(2019·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)Further, it is necessary for you to take a good rest. It will provide enough energy for you.
→Further, it is necessary for you to take a good rest, which will provide enough energy for you.
2．提升档次的名词性从句
名词性从句包括主语从句、宾语从句、表语从句和同位语从句，是写作中常见的高级表达句式。
①(2019·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)I hold the firm belief that I am the very person for this job.(同位语从句)
②(2018·全国卷Ⅲ书面表达)It is worth mentioning that our volleyball team won the championship twice in national middle school volleyball matches.(主语从句)
③(2018·江苏卷书面表达)There is no doubt that it is unwise to depend completely on the ratings in consumption.(同位语从句)
④(2017·北京卷书面表达)That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze River is a better choice(表语从句)．
3．吸引眼球的状语从句
在英语写作中，状语从句是经常用到的句型，它的灵活运用能使作文更具吸引力。
①(2018·北京卷书面表达)Since you have long been interested in Chinese culture, I think Beijing Language and Culture University is an ideal place for you.
②(2018·江苏卷书面表达)Therefore, we should give a second thought to these ratings whenever we go shopping.
③(2017·全国卷Ⅲ书面表达)If you want to apply for membership, you are required to fill in the application form and send an email to pingpong@123. com.
④(2019·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)When it comes to what I can do to help, I believe I can be an outstanding tour guide in terms of Chinese painting explanation.

　活用非谓，手法老到
1.运用非谓语动词整合简单句，提升表达档次。
写作时，考生可以利用非谓语动词对两个简单句进行整合，使其成为较高级的表达。
①On the other hand, I will help set up the English Corner. I will provide us students with a platform to practice our oral English.
→On the other hand, I will help set up the English Corner, providing us students with a platform to practice our oral English.(现在分词作状语)
②I feel quite sorry for that. I begin to think about what to do to help.
→Feeling quite sorry for that, I begin to think about what to do to help.(现在分词作状语)
2．运用非谓语动词简化复合句，使语言简练。
①When the airport is completed next year, it will help promote tourism in this area.
→The airport to be completed next year will help promote tourism in this area.(不定式作定语)
②Because I was amazed at how skillful they were, I determined to be just as good as them.
→Amazed at how skillful they were, I determined to be just as good as them.(过去分词作状语)

　适时感叹，必要强调
①How happy I was to be one of the members in this warm family! This is one of the most treasured moments in my memory.
成为这个温暖大家庭的一员，我是多么高兴啊！这是我记忆中最珍贵的时刻之一。
②Not only did it get us close to nature and relieve us of the heavy schoolwork, but it also promoted the friendship among us. What a wonderful time!
这件事不仅使我们亲近自然，摆脱繁重的功课，而且增进了我们之间的友谊。多么美好的时光啊！
③How considerate of you to remember my birthday!
您真得很体贴，还记得我的生日。

　高级表达，佳作之道

1．As the saying goes...常言道……
Just as the saying goes，“One tree doesn’t make a forest.”， our success is based on cooperating with others.
正如谚语所言：“独木难成林。”我们的成功是建立在与别人合作的基础上的。
2．It goes without saying that...毋庸置疑……
It goes without saying that nothing is more important than health.
毋庸置疑，没有什么比健康更重要。
3．There is no denying that...不可否认……
There is no denying that it was my teacher’s encouragement and help that resulted in my steady progress.
不可否认，是老师的鼓励和帮助让我稳步前进。
4．It is a good idea to do sth.做……是个好主意。
(2019·重庆调研书面表达)It is a good idea to travel with a good friend，which will reduce your travelling expenses.
与好朋友一起旅行是个好主意，这能减少旅行的费用。
5．It is a virtue and tradition for sb. to do sth.
做某事是某人的优良传统和美德。
(2019·河南六市联考书面表达)It is a virtue and tradition for us Chinese people to help those in need.
帮助需要帮助的人是我们中华民族的优良传统和美德。
6．It is strongly recommended that...强烈建议……
It is strongly recommended that the school should give students more free time to take part in sports activities.
强烈建议学校给学生们更多的自由时间参加体育活动。
7．If I were...，I would...如果我是……我会……
(2019·海口调研书面表达)If I were you，I would make good use of my spare time to help him get rid of this bad habit step by step.
要是我是你的话，我会充分利用业余时间帮助他渐渐地去掉这个坏习惯。
8．I sincerely hope that...我真诚地希望……
(2019·重庆第一次调研书面表达)We sincerely hope that all students will provide original artworks to celebrate the 60th anniversary of our school.
为庆祝我校60周年校庆，我们真诚地希望所有的学生提供原著艺术作品。
9．The problem with ... is that ...……的问题是……
The truth is that...事实是……
The most important factor is that...最重要的因素是……
This is because/why...这是因/这就是为什么……
(2019·陕西质量检测书面表达)But the problem is that a number of middle school students are growing increasingly addicted to phones.
但是问题是许多中学生沉溺于手机。
The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you don’t have to worry so much.
事实上每个人都有似乎诸事不顺的一段时期，因此你没有必要太担心。
10．I hold the view/belief that...我持……观点/我认为……
We hold the firm belief that the visitors will know more about Chinese Traditional culture and at the same time enjoy the beauty of it.
我们坚信游客会了解更多的中国传统文化，与此同时享受中国传统文化的美。
[学生用书P108]
佳句输出
1．While working, I realized how_hard_it_was_to_work_in_the_fields_under_a_hot_sun．
在工作的时候，我意识到在烈日下的田野里工作是多么辛苦。
2．After that, you can go to Shanghai, where_you_can_stay_for_a_week.
之后，你可以去上海，在那里待一个星期。
3．Whenever/No_matter_when_I’m_unhappy,_it is my friends who cheer me up.
不管什么时候我不高兴了，总是我的朋友们让我振作起来。
4．When_built_up/set_up，the new stadium will become the new landmark in our school.
建成后，新体育馆将成为我们学校的新地标。
5．Parents usually have such high expectations that their children_find_it_hard_to_live_up_to_them.
父母通常有如此高的期望值，以至于孩子觉得很难不辜负父母的期望。
6．As far as I’m concerned，it_is_everyone’s_duty_to_protect_the_earth．
在我看来，保护地球是每个人的责任。
7．It_is_obvious_that_some online courses of spoken Chinese can be helpful for you to adapt to the Chinese language environment.
显然，网上的一些汉语口语课程有助于你适应汉语环境。
8．It’s_a_great_pity_that I have to cancel the Sunday bookstore appointment with you.
非常遗憾我不得不取消我们周日一块儿逛书店的约定。
9．Busy_though/as_I_am_with_the_lessons，I have managed to find time to hang out with my friends.
尽管忙着上课，我还是设法挤出时间和朋友们出去玩。
10．Only when you come to China can_you_experience_Chinese_food_culture．
只有当你来到中国时，你才能体验中国的饮食文化。
11._What_I_want_to_stress_is_that you’d better bring some gifts，such as a book or a Chinese knot.
我想强调的是你最好带些礼物，比如一本书或一个中国结。
12．The_reason_why_I_suggest_you_apply_for_Peking_University_is_that it is one of the best universities in China.
我建议你申请北京大学的原因是它是中国最好的大学之一。
根据汉语提示完成下面的作文
Dear Henry，
How is everything？I am writing to invite you to join a paper­cutting show to be held this Sunday.
1．It_is_reported_that_there_will_be_a_Chinese_paper­cutting_show(据报道，将有一个中国剪纸展) this Sunday in the art gallery，which is expected to last about eight hours from 8：00 am to 4：00 pm. I know you are always interested in traditional Chinese culture. 2.The_more_you_know_about_it，the_better_you_will_like_it(你越了解它，你就会越喜欢它)，so I think we can go there together. 3.Not_only_will_all_kinds_of_paper­cutting_works_be_on_display(不仅要展出各种剪纸作品)，4.but_(also)the_craftsmen_will_show_visitors_how_to_cut_paper_into_different_shapes_on_the_spot(而且工匠会当场向游客展示如何把纸剪成不同的形状). I am sure you will feel amazed at this traditional Chinese art. Would you like to attend the show with me this Sunday?
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours，
Li Hua