2021版高考英语新课程译林版一轮复习写作高分进阶：1.3灵活运用复杂句式增添语言的内蕴美 学案

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3. 灵活运用复杂句式, 增添语言的内蕴美

1. 句子形式多样化:根据表达的需求, 可以采用多种句式, 这样既能恰当表达, 又能避免形式单一

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①They were so heavy that we couldn’t lift them at first.  (so. . . that. . . 句型)

②There is no doubt that it is unwise to depend completely on the ratings in consumption.  (同位语从句)

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① In recent years, more and more people start to protect our environment, which makes our environment more and more colorful.

→In recent years, with more and more people starting to protect our environment, our environment is becoming more and more colorful. (with复合结构) 

→Nowadays, there are so many people who start to protect our environment that our environment is becoming more and more colorful. (there be 句式) 

②If you study hard, you will make rapid progress.

→Study hard and you will make rapid progress. (并列句) 

2. 使用非谓语动词形式, 句子凝练高端

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①After learning it,  I’ m sure I’ll have a better understanding of the differences and similarities between Chinese culture and Western culture.

②On arriving at the tea house,  the foreign students were impressed by the unique tea pots and tea cups.

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①She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (非谓语动词)

→She walked out of the lab, followed by many students.  

②They sang and laughed as they went back to school. (非谓语动词)

→They went back to school, singing and laughing.  

3. 运用定语从句, 增加细节, 填补内容

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①Material collecting took us a whole week,  during which we interviewed our teachers and took pictures of every aspect of school life.

②I am eager to invite you to join our team for the upcoming event,  in which you will demonstrate your ability and make acquaintance with more friends with the same interest.

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①You’d better make full preparations before class and have a brief understanding of the history of Tang Dynasty, which makes it easy for you to go through the class(使你容易通过这门课).  

②Besides, there will be a lot of useful and interesting activities, from which you can have a clearer picture of Chinese culture(从中你对中国文化会有更清晰的认识).  

③I have found a flat for you on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese school. It is on the third floor with three rooms, one of which is bedroom(其中一个是卧室), and the other two are bathroom and kitchen.  

4. 巧用倒装, 增强句子的表现力

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①Not only will our club’s works be displayed,  but we also have a valuable set of paper-cutting created by a famous artist of this field.

②Not only did you help improve my English,  but you also gave me more confidence in learning.  

③Next came the moment when I asked them to have a try themselves.

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①Though I’m weak, I’ll make the effort. (倒装)

→Weak as/though I am, I’ll make the effort.  

②He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. (倒装)

→No sooner had he come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.  

5. 恰当使用强调句, 增强说服力

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①It is you who taught me how to learn English well.

② It was on Friday that our activity began.

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①He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper. (强调句)

→It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened.  

②It is working in teams instead of on my own that has freed me of trouble and made my work more efficient.  

6. 自如应用各种名词性从句, 精彩纷呈

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①If you are interested in what I have stated above, sign up on our school website before September 1st.

②That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze River will be a better choice.

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①To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things. (主语从句)

→What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.  

②I have just found that I have to attend an important meeting that afternoon(我那天下午得参加一个重要会议).  

7. with or without精彩点缀, 妙不可言

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①Moreover, with the stadium set up,  a wide range of sports events are able to be held,  of which ping-pong,  football as well as running competitions enjoy great popularity.

②Without any hesitation,  we began to work.

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①As an old saying goes, living without a clear and achievable aim(没有清晰可达到的目标) is like sailing without a compass.  

②I can’t thank you enough for your generous help, without which I couldn’t have made such great progress(没有这些帮助我不能获得这么大的进步).  

8. 巧用副词, 充分表情达意

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①I am exceedingly delighted to hear from you.

②I genuinely hope that you can squeeze some time for our festival and have fun with us.

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①She patiently(仔细地) explained all the rules to the students and required everyone to follow them.

②We were perfectly(完全地) satisfied with the result of the experiment.

9. 语气委婉而中肯, 易于接受

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①If you have further questions,  please feel free to let me know.

②I sincerely hope you can set aside some time for the art feast.

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①I wonder if you could tell me(你能否告诉我) what books I need to read and the requirements of my homework.  

②What do you think of it? Are you satisfied with it? If not, please tell me as quickly as possible(请尽快告诉我).  

　　根据所给信息补全短文, 并注意高级句式的应用。

假定你是李华, 你校的交换生Tom对中国的民间艺术很感兴趣, 本周五学校将要举办“校园文化节”, 请你写一封电子邮件, 邀请Tom去体验编织艺术。              世纪金榜导学号

Dear Tom,

Here comes a piece of good news(来好消息了).  The Campus Culture Festival will be hosted this Friday. Since you have a strong passion for Chinese folk art, it’s a great pleasure for me to invite you to join us.  

The activity is scheduled to last approximately two hours, from 3:30 pm to 5:30 pm in the school hall. It covers a wide variety of content. Not only can we appreciate numerous appealing weaving works ranging from chairs and tables to various decorations(我们不仅能够看到许多吸引人的编织艺术作品, 从桌椅到各种装饰品不一而足), but also we’ll watch the documentary concerning(有关的) the history of the weaving art.  

In addition, some distinguished professors(一些著名教授)will be invited to deliver a lecture about how to promote the development of the weaving art(如何促进编织艺术的发展), during which time you will definitely gain a better understanding of it(在这期间你定会对它有更好的了解). By the way, if you are available, we’ll meet at three outside the school gate.  

　　How I hope you can take my invitation into consideration(我多么希望你能考虑一下我的邀请啊)!  Your timely reply will be highly appreciated.  

Yours,

Li Hua

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