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2021版高考英语新课程译林版一轮复习写作高分进阶：3.4创新精神 学案
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4. 创新精神
假定你是李华, 你校在学生中征集意见, 询问学生是否赞成开设iPad课堂(iPad classrooms)。你支持开设iPad课堂。请给校长写一封建议信, 要点如下:
1. 资源丰富;2. 促进交流;3. 利于环保;4. 其他理由。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
Step 1:精准审题 谋篇布局
人称 | I |
时态 | 一般现在时 |
段落布局 | 开头点题:首先表明自己支持的态度 主题段落:分条陈述支持的理由 结尾:提出自己的希望 |
Step 2:头脑风暴 字字珠玉
(1)美词:in favor of, to begin with, customize, tailor, for the sake of, take. . . into consideration
(2)佳句
① I am in favor of this plan for the following reasons.
② To begin with, everyone learns differently. Students can customize their iPad with materials that fit their level and learning style.
③For the sake of environmental protection, opening iPad classrooms is a good way to save trees that we have been cutting down for paper.
Step 3:斟酌词句 妙笔生花
要点1:并且, 当和网络相连接的时候, 学生们可以和老师以及同学进行互动, 讨论如何更方便地学习。
一般表达:Moreover, when the students are connected to the Internet, they can interact with teachers and classmates and discuss how to learn more conveniently.
句式升级(过去分词作状语, 宾语从句)
并且, 当和网络相连接的时候, 学生们可以和老师以及同学就他们如何可以更方便地学习进行互动。
Moreover, when connected to the Internet, students can interact with teachers and classmates about how they learn more conveniently.
要点2:为了保护环境, 我们应该开设iPad课堂, 以减少用于造纸的树木砍伐。
一般表达:To protect the environment, we should open iPad classrooms to reduce the trees cut down for paper.
句式升级(动名词作主语, 定语从句)
为了保护环境, 开设iPad课堂是一种很好的方式来拯救用于造纸而被砍伐的树木。
For the sake of environmental protection, opening iPad classrooms is a good way to save trees that we have been cutting down for paper.
Step 4:衔接过渡 斐然成篇
Dear Headmaster,
We have been asked about our opinions on opening iPad classrooms. I am in favor of this plan for the following reasons. To begin with, everyone learns differently. Students can customize their iPad with materials that fit their level and learning style, and thus tailor it to different needs. Moreover, when connected to the Internet, students can interact with teachers and classmates about how they learn more conveniently. For the sake of environmental protection, opening iPad classrooms is a good way to save trees that we have been cutting down for paper. Most importantly, I believe students will develop their interests in the subjects by enjoying a new way of learning.
I hope you would take my ideas into consideration and we look forward to attending an iPad class.
Yours,
Li Hua
近些年来, 随着网络的普及, 越来越多的学生的书写能力明显退步了。为了改变这种局面, 保护传统民族文化——汉字, 我校学生会提出以下倡议:
1. 减少上网时间, 多读书;
2. 记日记的好习惯, 练习书写;
3. 少用电子邮件, 尽量动手给亲朋好友写书信。
请你根据以上内容, 代学生会写一封英文倡议书。
注意:
1. 词数80左右, 开头和结尾已经给出, 不计入总词数;
2. 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:普及:popularity 汉字:Chinese characters
Dear friends,
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Let’s take action now!
Students’ Union
【参考范文】
Dear friends,
In recent years, many of us don’t write as well as we did in the past with the popularity of the Internet. In order to improve our handwriting and protect Chinese characters, we’d like to offer some suggestions:
First, we should spend less time online and read more books. Besides, we’d better form the habit of keeping diaries every day to practise handwriting. What’s more, it is better to write letters to our relatives and friends by hand rather than send e-mails.
Beautiful and neat handwriting is beneficial to us. So please pay more attention to our handwriting.
Let’s take action now!
Students’ Union
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