2019版二轮复习英语练酷版练习：专题六 应用文写作常见8大文体（四）(含解析)

应用文写作常见8大文体(四)——建议信

建议信是生活中常见的一种文体，是写信人向收信人对某事提出的建议或忠告。建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确，具有合理性和说服力。

具体写作步骤一般是“三段式”，通常以firstly, secondly, thirdly或to begin/start with, then, later, last but not least 等依次陈述建议。具体写作结构为：

(一)开头常用语

1．I know you have trouble in ...after reading your letter. I am writing to give you some suggestions/offer you some advice.

在读了你的信后，我知道你在……上有困难。我写这封信的目的是给你一些建议/忠告。

2．You’ve asked me for advice with regard to/regarding ...and I’ll try to make some useful suggestions here.

关于……你向我征求建议，在此，我尽力提出一些有用的建议。

(二)主体部分常用语

1．The following are my suggestions./My suggestions are as follows.

我的建议如下。

2．In my opinion/Personally/As far as I’m concerned, it would be wise to take the following action.

在我看来，采取如下行动是明智的。

3．I think it would be more beneficial if you could ...

我认为如果你能……可能会更有利。

(三)结尾常用语

1．I hope you will find these suggestions helpful./I hope my suggestions will be of benefit to you.

我希望你会发现这些建议有帮助。/我希望我的建议对你有益。

2．I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration seriously.

我相信你会认真考虑我的建议的。

(2018·南昌模拟)假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom想在他的学校以“Chinese poetry”为主题举办一系列活动，他写信向你求助，请给他回信，提供至少两条建议。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

 (一)准审题、准表达保基本分

[中档作文]

Dear Tom，

I’m very glad❶ to hear that you are planning to hold activities about Chinese poetry.I’m writing to give you some advice❷.It is to make the activity more meaningful and unforgettable❸. My suggestions are  as follows.

First❹， you’d better introduce the history of Chinese poetry briefly❺.It dates from ancient times❻.Then❼， you can share the different❽ forms of poems with students.As far as I’m concerned, it is a good idea to call on English speakers to read more  Tang Poetry and Song Ci❾.They are very popular among English speakers.Finally， it’s recommended that students write some poems by themselves.

I’d appreciate it if you can take my suggestions into account.Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours，

Li Hua

(二)巧润色、大升级创高分

(请根据括号内要求升级上面的中档作文)

Dear Tom，

I’m (1)more than delighted (词汇升级❶) to hear that you are planning to hold activities about Chinese poetry.I’m writing to give you some advice (2)on  how to make the activity more meaningful and unforgettable (❷❸合并升级为“疑问词＋to do”结构)．My suggestions are as follows.

(3)To start/begin with (词汇升级❹), you’d better introduce the history of Chinese poetry (4)dating from ancient times briefly (❺❻合并升级为非谓语动词作定语)．(5)In addition (词汇升级❼), you can share the (6)various (词汇升级❽) forms of poems with students.As far as I’m concerned, it is a good idea to call on English speakers to read more Tang Poetry and Song Ci, (7)which are very popular among them (❾合并升级为定语从句)．(8)Last but not least (词汇升级), it’s recommended that students write some poems by themselves.

I’d appreciate it if you can take my suggestions into account.Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours，

Li Hua

下文是根据上面的题目学生完成的一篇习作，文中共有10处语言错误，请改正。

Dear Tom，

I’m so glad to hear that you are planning to hold activities about Chinese poetry.To make it more meaningfully and unforgettable, here is some advices.

To begin with, you’d better introduce the history of Chinese poetry which dated from ancient times briefly. Then you can share the different forms of poems for students.Taken Tang Poetry and Song Ci for an example, they are very popular among English speakers.Eventually, since poems can convey certain emotions, it’s a good idea to let the students feel it by reading some poems.It’s also recommended that every student writes some poems their own.

I hope you’ll find these suggestions helpful and wish you succeed.

Yours，

Li Hua

答案：第二句：meaningfully→meaningful; advices→advice

第三句：dated→dates

第四句：for→with

第五句：Taken→Take; 去掉an

第六句：feel后的it→them

第七句：writes→write; their前加of

第八句：succeed→success