专题04 观点看法类-2020中考英语考前必背六大类满分作文
展开专题04 观点看法类
一、命题规律
分析全国近5年的中考真题可知，书面表达对“观点看法类”的话题考查比重仅次于“做法建议类”，也是各地市高频考查方向。此类话题，通常在背景材料中说明某种“好/坏/新/……”的现象，或以表格或图示展示不同人群的“不同或对立”的观点，由此让学生最终陈述自己的观点，并说明理由(注意理由要有理有据、条理清晰)。同时，该话题涉及的现象往往与热点话题(如：二孩政策、真人秀节目、“低头族”等)结合，因此学生在平时的复习过程中也不要忽略这一方面。
二、好词好句积累
【开头句】
1. As for it , different students have different thoughts. Some students stand by it, others are against it. As far as I'm concerned, I think study trip is good for students, and here are my reasons.
2. Do you agree that your parents have a second child? Different students have different opinions about it.
3. Last week, we had a discussion about the hot topic “To change or not”. I think different people have different choices to deal with problems.
4. I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life.
5. When they come across problems, they don't know what to do. The problem raises people's attention.
6. We did a survey about middle school students' weekend activities. Here are the results.
7. As students, what should we do to build our country? I think we should study hard to get rich knowledge so as to make contributions to our country.
8. I don't think grades are important. Students have different abilities and some of them can't be measured by grades, such as creativity, abilities to communicate and act.
9. Our class have had a discussion about whether we can use mobile phones.
10. I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life.
【中间句】
1. As for me, I'd love to have a brother or sister as company, so that I can share my happiness and sorrow with him or her anytime.
2. There is no doubt that junk food is delicious and attractive, but it surely does harm to our body.
3. What's more, do more outdoor activities. As long as you are busy with something interesting, you will more probably get away from junk food.
4. In my opinion, those kids who are good at learning are able to manage their time very well.
5. From my opinion of view, we need to make some good friends so that we can learn from each other.
6. Instead of giving up, I chose to change. I tried my best to listen to tapes and practice speaking every day.
7. On one hand, parents should give them proper suggestions, and give them more chances to make their own decisions. On the other hand, children shouldn’t depend on their parents too much.
8. In order to produce enough vegetables and fruits, they are busy growing plants.
9. To start with, I wasn’t good at English and seldom got high scores on the exams.
10. But some others don't think so. They think students shouldn't use mobile phones.
11. What's more, they share the idea that teenagers are supposed to make a good plan for future.
【结尾句】
1. In a word, both the cock and the hen are useful. It is wrong for them to see their own use instead of seeing others' use.
2. If everyone makes a contribution to building a green city, Ezhou will become a better place to live in.
3. I'm sure a good balance between learning and playing can make a great contribution to kids' growth.
4. All in all, it's very important for children to learn to be independent.
5. In a word, it's our duty to make reading become a part of our life.
6. Sharing bikes bring people so many advantages, so let's protect them and follow the rules of using them.
7. All in all, grades can be a way to measure students' achievements in schoolwork. However, different interests and abilities can make a students a full man.
8. In my opinion, I think we'd better not use mobile phones. We should spend more time on our study instead of using mobile phones.
9. In my opinion, we need to make some good friends so that we can learn from each other. Also, we must be active and exercise more because keeping healthy is helpful to a successful life.
训练一
关于“说英语”问题，李华和他的英语老师Miss Wang持不同的观点。请你仔细阅读下图中的对话内容，从中选择一个角色，按照所给要求写一篇短文。
要求：(1)用“Li Hua”或“Miss Wang”补全短文首句；
(2)写出所选角色的观点，并续写理由；
(3)短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名或地名；
(4)词数80个左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
参考词汇： shy; make a mistake; believe in
【审题】
- 本文写作围绕的话题是：“说英语”，但是写作的关键是根据图片和要求，首先确定从谁的立场来阐述(注意：横线上先填所选角色，再续写理由)；
- 写作时，尽量从自己熟悉的人或事入手，以便展开叙述。同时注意写作时要结合图片中所给的对话提示，可适当发挥；
- 选择的角色不同，人称的使用也不同。
【要点指导】
对“说英语”的看法 | |
要点提示 | 素材串联 |
正文：阐述“我”的观点 | 1. 你的英语不好是因为你不说英语(poor, because)2. 说得越多，你的英语变得越好(the＋比较级＋...，the＋比较级＋...)3. 每天尽量多说英语(every day, as much as possible)4. 不要害羞或怕犯错误，你的老师和同学愿意帮你(be afraid of, make a mistake, be ready to)5. 重要的是，相信你自己，不要放弃(believe in yourself, never give up) |
结尾：总结 | 记住：熟能生巧(practice makes perfect)
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【范文1】
I am Miss Wang. Your English is poor because you don't speak English. English, like any other language, is a tool of communication. The more you speak it, the better your English will become. So you should try to speak every day as much as possible. And don't be shy or afraid of making a mistake. Your teacher and classmates are always ready to help you. The most important thing is that you must believe in yourself and never give up! Always remember: practice makes perfect！
【范文2】
I am Li Hua. I don't speak English because my English is poor. I find it hard to speak English. I am a little shy and afraid of making a mistake. I always feel nervous when I stand up speaking English in class. I'm afraid that my classmates may laugh at me when I speak English. To tell you the truth, I don't believe in myself. The less I speak, the worse my English will be. When my English improves, I will enjoy speaking it.
训练二
现在很多学生不能好好管理时间以致影响了学习。请你就此写一篇短文谈谈你的看法。
内容包括：1.你或你的同学一次未能按时完成学习任务的经历(任务内容、拖延的原因及后果)；
2．对如何管理好时间提出两点建议。
作文要求：1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。
2．语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
Nowadays, many students can't make good use of their time and this has a bad influence
on their study.___________________________________________________________________
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【审题】
- 本文要求对“很多学生不能好好管理时间以致影响了学习”这一现象谈自己的看法，根据所给的两点内容提示可知，本文写作思路很明确：首先，讲述你或你的同学一次未能按时完成学习任务的经历；然后，表明自己的观点，并给出合理的建议；
- 讲述经历时，因为是过去的事情，用一般过去时；表明观点则用一般现在时。
【要点指导】
对“不好好管理时间影响学习”的看法与建议 | |
要点提示 | 素材串联 |
正文：自己的经历 | 时间：上周末(last weekend)2. 事件经过：好朋友Jim教我一种新的电脑游戏，我玩了很长时间以至于忘记写家庭作业(play a kind of computer game; forget to do homework)3. 事件结果：父母和老师都很生气，我也很沮丧(be angry with sb.；upset) |
结尾 | 看法与建议 看法：我认为要做好周计划(make a weekday plan)
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【范文】
Nowadays, many students can't make good use of their time and this has a bad influence on their study. I had an experience like this. Last weekend, my good friend, Jim taught me how to play a kind of computer game. It was interesting. So I spent more time on it. I forgot to do my homework in the end. My teachers and parents were angry with me. I was also upset.
How to make good use of our time? I think we should make a weekday plan. We should make a plan before we do something. And we should write it on the paper and put it up some place where we can see it easily. It can help us to remember what we have to do next.
训练三
向他人表达善意并帮助他人体现了一个人良好的品格。当你向别人表达善意并给他人提供帮助时，你希望得到回报(repay)吗？针对这一话题，九年级六班的同学们展开了辩论。
假设你是正方或反方的一员，请围绕你的观点，结合自己的亲身经历，说出2至3条理由来说服同学们(只需选择一方观点表达即可)。
要求：1. 词数不少于80词；
2. 文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
When I show kindness and help others,I___________________________________________
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【审题】
- 根据所给的背景材料，学生首先要确定是围绕“正方”或“反方”其中之一展开写作；
- 本文的写作思路也很清楚，即：阐明自己的观点(正或反)→讲述自己的经历→说出2至3条理由，由图片人物对话的内容进行联想，注意语篇的连贯性。
【要点指导】
帮助别人是否期待回报？ | |
要点提示 | 素材串联 |
开头：阐明观点 | 1. 帮助别人不希望得到回报(expect, repay)2. 我认为，帮助别人给我一种强烈的被需要的感觉，并给我带来快乐(a strong feeling, bring happiness)3. 每个人都会陷入困境，需要帮助(get into trouble) |
正文：讲述经历 | 几天前，在公园里散步发现一个小男孩哭泣(have a walk)；他找不到妈妈，我给他妈妈打了电话(can't find)；他妈妈想给我买礼物表示感谢，我拒绝了(thankful, want to buy me a small gift, refuse)；我感到很高兴(feel quite happy) |
结尾：发表感慨 | 1. 世界需要爱，我们要时刻准备帮助别人(be ready to)2. 一句“谢谢”就足够了(enough)
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【范文】
When I show kindness and help others, I never expect them to repay me. In my view, helping others gives me a strong feeling of being needed and brings me happiness. On the other hand, everyone may get into trouble and need help, too.Several days ago, while I was having a walk in the park, I found a little boy crying. Then I asked him what the matter was, and he told me he couldn't find his mom. Luckily, he remembered his mother's phone number. So I called her immediately. Ten minutes later, the boy saw his mom and became excited. His mom was so thankful that she wanted to buy me a small gift, but I refused. At that time, I felt quite happy because I did something really good.All in all, the world needs love and we should be ready to help others without expecting any repay. If you wanted repay, a “Thanks” would be enough.
训练四
你的学校正在开展“诚信”教育，英语俱乐部为配合这次活动将举行一次演讲比赛。请根据下表所提示的要点，写一篇演讲稿。
朋友李雷 | ★爱踢足球、玩游戏，考试舞弊 ★学习退步，不被信任 |
你的观点 | ★诚信考试，独立完成作业 ★说实话、做诚实孩子 ★(请补充一点) |
要求：1)短文应包括表格中的所有内容，可适当发挥；
2)词数90左右，不包含已给出句子的词数；
3)演讲稿中不得出现你的真实姓名和校名。
参考词汇：cheat in the exam; fall behind (落后)
Hello, everyone! It's a great honor to give a speech here._____________________________
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That's all. Thank you for listening!
【审题】
- 本文围绕“诚信”教育写演讲稿，所给的表格要点提示已明确给出写作思路：首先介绍朋友李雷的情况，然后表明自己的观点，补充的内容要合理，注意句子结构准确，篇章结构连贯；
- 介绍别人的情况，用第三人称；表明自己的观点则用第一人称。
【写作要点】
朋友李雷 | 爱踢足球、玩游戏、考试作弊(likes playing football and computer games; often cheats in the exams) 学习退步、不被信任(gradually falls behind other students; isn't trusted by others) |
我的观点 | 诚信考试，独立完成作业(should be honest in the exam; do homework by ourselves)应该讲实话(ought to tell the truth)努力做到遵守诺言(try our best to keep the promise) |
【范文】
Hello, everyone! It's a great honor to give a speech here. I'd like to tell you something about my friend Li Lei. He likes playing football and he also likes computer games. To get good grades, he often cheats in the exams. As a result, he gradually falls behind other students. What's more, he isn't trusted by others. So I think we should be honest in the exam. And it's important to do homework by ourselves. We ought to tell the truth and be honest students. If we promise to do something, we'd better try our best to keep the promise.That's all. Thank you for listening！
训练五
每个人对交友都有不同的看法，请根据图示提供的信息，以“Good Friends in My Eyes”为题，写一篇100词左右的短文，首先分享大众观点，然后从中选出你最看重的两方面进行阐述，并说明理由。
要求：1. 短文语句通顺、意思连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 题目与开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不得出现个人真实信息。
参考词汇：some...others...; not only...but also...; both... and...; work together
Good Friends in My Eyes
Everyone needs friends. Different people have different ideas about making friends.________________________________________________________________________
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【审题】
本文写作围绕的观点是“Good Friends in My Eyes”，所给背景材料已经给出了写作思路：首先根据所给提示阐述大众观点，然后选出两个方面阐述自己的观点与理由。考生要注意语篇的连贯性，理由的合理性。
【要点指导】
我眼中的好朋友 | |
要点提示 | 素材串联 |
开头：大众观点 | 1.一些人认为：诚实、开朗(honest; outgoing)2.一些人认为：热爱运动(sports)、乐于助人(be ready to)3.其他人认为：努力学习(study hard)、和睦相处(get on well with) |
正文：我的观点及理由 | 1.最重要的是：诚实守信(honest)2.应该交流与合作(communicate, cooperate)3.由于我很害羞并且安静，希望朋友有趣、幽默(funny and humorous) |
结尾：总结感受 | 希望所有人能找到好朋友(wish that all of us can find friends) |
【范文】
Good Friends in My Eyes
Everyone needs friends. Different people have different ideas about making friends. Some people like the friends who are not only honest, but also outgoing. Some want friends that are good at sports and always ready to help others. Others like friends who study hard and get on well with others.
In my opinion, I think it is important for my friends to be honest. What's more, good friends should communicate and cooperate with each other. At the same time, I am a little shy and quiet. So I expect my friends to be funny and humorous. In this way, I hope my friends can make me
laugh.I wish that all of us can find friends.
训练六
对于“中学生在校是否可以使用手机”，不同学生有不同的看法，请你根据下面表格中的提示写一篇短文，向某英语报社投稿。
观点 | 赞成 | 反对 |
理由 | 1. 便于联系：…… 2. 获取信息：…… | 1. 浪费时间：…… 2. 危害身心健康：…… |
你的观点及理由 |
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要求：①包含所有要点，不逐字翻译，围绕要点适当发挥；
②书写规范、工整，条理清晰；
③文中不得出现真实人名、地名、校名等；
④词数：80－100词，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Can middle school students use mobile phones at school?
Nowadays, more and more teenagers use mobile phones. Can middle school students use mobile phones at school? Different students have different opinions about it._________________
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【审题】
- 本文的话题是“中学生在校是否可以使用手机”，因此文体是议论文。根据表格提示可知写作重点有：赞成及反对的理由，自己的观点及理由；
- 本文对“中学生在校是否可以使用手机”进行讨论，以一般现在时为主。描述别人的看法和理由时使用第三人称，表达自己的观点和理由时，使用第一人称。
【要点指导】
中学生在校是否可以使用手机 | |
要点提示 | 素材串联 |
开头：表明观点 | 已给出 |
正文：正反两方面的看法 | 赞成1. 便于与家长、老师或朋友进行联系(it's convenient for students to call their parents, teachers or friends)2. 运用手机获取信息，如查询生词、浏览新闻(look up new words; look through news) 反对1. 花费太多时间在QQ和游戏上，浪费时间(spend too much time on...; a waste of time)2. 危害身心健康，如：伤害眼睛，结交坏朋友(be unhealthy for...) |
结尾：自己的看法和理由 | 我认为，学生不能使用手机，因为对身体健康和学习没有好处(In my opinion；be bad for...)
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【范文】
Can middle school students use mobile phones at school？
Nowadays, more and more teenagers use mobile phones. Can middle school students use mobile phones at school? Different students have different opinions about it.Some students think they can use mobile phones at school. First, it's convenient for students to call their parents, teachers or friends. Second, they can search what they need on mobile phones. For example, they can look up new words and look through news.However, some students disagree. They think using mobile phones at school is a waste of time. Many students spend too much time on games and QQ. Besides, it's unhealthy for the mind and the body, such as hurting eyes, making some bad friends.
In my opinion, students can't use mobile phones at school. It's bad for our health and study.
训练七
随着手机使用的日益广泛，“作业帮”等手机运用软件的出现，现在，手机又有了新的用途——随时查找作业答案。
部分学生认为：有时作业太多，太难，不得不向手机求助。
自己的观点：1. 抄写答案不能提高学生的学习能力，只能阻止学生思考；
2. 恰当运用网络，不依赖网络。
注意：1. 文中应包括提示观点，可以适当发挥，增加自己的看法，使内容更连贯，更合理；
2. 词数约80词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
(参考词汇：the students' abilities, make proper use of)
Some students now have a new use for the Internet—use mobile phones to find out the answers to their homework. But different people have different ideas about it.
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【审题】
本文要求考生对“作业帮”等手机运用软件这一现象给出看法，文中给出的几条信息提示必须都涉及到，可以适当拓展。
【要点指导】
对“作业帮”的看法 | |
要点提示 | 素材串联 |
开头：表明观点 | 现在，一些学生对网络有了一个新的使用方法……(Some students now have a new use for the Internet...) |
正文：陈述理由 | 1. 一些学生认为他们有太多的作业……(Some students say/think that they have so much homework...)2. 并且还有一些问题对于他们来说解决出来很困难。(And some of the problems are too hard for them to work out.)3. 然而，查找作业答案不能提高学生的能力……(However, I think copying the answers can't improve the students' abilities...) |
结尾：自己的看法 | 在我看来，我们可以更合理地使用网络……(In my opinion, we can make proper use of the Internet ...)
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【范文】
Some students now have a new use for the Internet—use mobile phones to find out the answers to their homework. But different people have different ideas about it. Some students think that they have so much homework every day that they don't have enough time. And some of the problems are too hard for them to work out. So they have to use mobile phones to find out the answers.
However, I think copying the answers can't improve the students' abilities, and may make them stop thinking. In my opinion, we can make proper use of the Internet and can't depend on it. Studying online can be a way to help study, but the best way is studying (to study) by oneself.
