2021届高考英语二轮复习专项解密23---书面表达之应用文含解析

这是一份2021届高考英语二轮复习专项解密23---书面表达之应用文含解析，共21页。

Part 1解密高考
【考点综述】
书面表达应用文是历年高考英语的重点主观测试题之一，它有利于考查学生运用英语语言知识的综合能力，这种综合能力包括从单词拼写、词语搭配、词法结构到语法，从遣词造句、把握要领、谋篇布局到修辞风格等。该题在英语卷中占25分，约占全卷分值17%，是重要题型。而在听、说、读、写四项技能中，“写”是最令学生头疼的，有些学生对书面表达题束手无策，无从下手。因此，在高中阶段尤其是在高三备考阶段的英语教学中，如何进行有针对性的强化训练和学法指导，培养学生的英语书面表达能力是极为重要的。
【备考建议】
1．审题
动笔之前，必须认真审题，分析命题意图。有的考生唯恐时间不够，急于成文，不认真审题，结果写出的文章抓不住重点，杂乱无章，缺乏逻辑性。其实审题的过程是一个思考加工的过程，并不是浪费时间。在审题的过程中，考生可以根据题目确定文章体裁，考虑文章结构，内容。把与题目有关的材料分析、整理加以取舍，这样初步形成这篇文章的大致框架，这在很大程度上关系到整篇文章的成败。
2．拟提纲抓要点，列提纲。依据格式要求和内容提示，分清主次，理顺关系，抓住要点，列出提纲。因考试时间有限，宜用简易英文提纲。
(1)文章的主要要点要有逻辑地结合起来，使其结构严谨，内容连贯，层次分明，分好段落，设计好文章的开头和结尾。同时要有意在句子之间使用一些过渡性词语(比如表示因果、条件、时间等逻辑关系的词汇或结构)。高考高分作文的共性就是有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，意思连贯，给人以一气呵成之感。恰当地使用过渡词可以使文章结构紧凑，过渡自然，避负脱节现象。
(2)语言表达。新的评分标准鼓励学生尽量使用较复杂的结构和高级词汇。语言要准确，长短句结合。学着使用一些高级词汇，为文章增色。评价一篇文章的好坏，一条重要的原则就是“上下文连贯”，要让评卷者有一种通篇流畅、一气呵成的感觉。可采用下列策略：
①使用高级语法与句型，如：名词性从句，分词作状语和定语，还有如不定式、强调句、感叹句、倒装句。
常见词的复合结构，如“with+复合宾语结构”等等，这些形式来提高文章的档次，写出亮点句子。
②使用过渡性词汇，增加文章的逻辑性与连贯性。因为过度词可使文章结构更紧凑，上下文更连贯，逻辑性、可读性更强。比如常见的过渡性词语有表列举的first，secnd，third，next，then等等；表因果的because f，thanks t等。
③为了避免重复和连接上下文，多用指代词。对于出现过的非关键次和短语，常用指代词来代替，保持文章的简洁，使文章跟紧凑。
3．修改
写完之后，一定要认真仔细地修改。可遵循下列修改校对的方法：
(1)检查格式，内容要点。
(2)检查句子时态、语态是否正确，结构是否完整。
(3)检查大小写、单词拼写是否正确，书写要工整认真。通过这样的检查过程，能够最大程度的减少错误的发生，从而减少人为失分。
Part 2对点解密
【真题对点析】1
（2020 • 全国卷3）
假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括:
1. 剧情简介；2. 指导内容；3. 商定时间地点。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 结束语已为你写好。
【答案】Dear Miss Evans,
Hw is everything ging! I am writing in sincerity t ask yu a favr regarding a play we adapted accrding t the textbk.
We’d like t cmbine yur culture with urs by adapting the classic nvel The Steambat fr a shrt English play. The play is set n a big strm after midnight, n the raft dwn the river navigatin, we see a steambat that is ging t sink. We saved a scared by. Hwever, the adaptin is quite a challenge. Having written the English script, we dn’t want anything inapprpriate t spil the play. S wuld yu please spare sme time t review the draft script attached t this email and make necessary changes? If it is cnvenient, may I pay yu a visit at yur ffice next Tuesday t give yu mre details?
Given yur busy schedule, I’d be very appreciative if yu ffer t give sme prfessinal advice. Lk frward t yur early reply. Best regards!
Yurs truly,
Li Hua
【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，请求外教 Miss Evans对于《the Steambat》改编短剧的支持。
【详解】第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时，一般过去时和一般将来时。 结构：总分总法
第一段说明写这封邮件目的；第二段详细说明英语戏剧的剧情介绍和指导内容细节问题；第三段表达感谢，并期待早日得到回复。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
write t；accrding t ；cmbine ； adaptin ；challenge；attached t ；cnvenient
第三步：连词成句
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：If it is cnvenient, may I pay yu a visit at yur ffice next Tuesday t give yu mre details? 这句话运用了if引导的条件状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
【对点模拟练】1
你是李华，你校学生会即将组织一次徒步活动，已在校园网发布方案，征求师生的修改意见。你需要写一 封邮件，包含以下两点:
1. 提出你觉得需要改进的地方；
2. 需要改进的原因。
徒步活动主题:发现重庆
时间:5月1日下午2点
路线:从人民大礼堂(the Great Hall f the Peple)到解放碑、(Liberatin Mnument),全程徒步。
注意:
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【范文】Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m really excited t hear that a hiking activity frm the Great Hall f the Peple t the Liberatin Mnument is ging t be held n the Labr Day hliday.Hwever, there may be further imprvement f the scheme yu’ve psted n the campus website,as I’d like t pint ut.
First f all, the hike needs t be planned in mre details as the infrmatin released nline appears t be t general. As participants, we need t knw hw lng the hike will last.In the mean time, we are willing t have a clearer picture f security precautins and necessary medical supprt fr the activity.Only by ding s are yu likely t make it a success.What’s mre, I suggest the hike be mre suited t the theme “Discver Chngqing” thrugh additinal activities. I prpse an intrductin f the architecture n Chatianmen Square.By appreciating the artistic style f the landmark, we can gain a deeper insight int the prsperity f ur city.
All in all, if the hike is rganized in mre details and in a mre supprtive way, it is sure t succeed.I hpe that my vice abve can be heard and cnsidered and wish the activity a great success.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求李华写一封邮件，对徒步活动方案提出修改意见。
【详解】
第一步：审题
体裁：建议信
人称：第一人称
时态：一般将来时；一般现在时
要点：
1.听说学校徒步方案，指出有待改进。
2.需改进的地方和具体原因。
第二部 列要点 写提纲
Para. 1 be excited t hear that…; is ging t be held; further imprvement; pst n the campus website
Para. 2 plan in details; have a clearer picture f sth; security precautins; medical supprt; prpse an intrductin f sth; gain a deeper insight int sth
Para. 3 in a mre supprtive way; be sure t succeed;
第三步 连词成句
1. I’m really excited t hear that a hiking activity frm the Great Hall f the Peple t the Liberatin Mnument is ging t be held n the Labr Day hliday.
2. There may be further imprvement f the scheme yu’ve psted n the campus website.
3. The hike needs t be planned in mre details as the infrmatin released nline appears t be t general.
4. We need t knw hw lng the hike will last.
5. We are willing t have a clearer picture f security precautins and necessary medical supprt fr the activity.
6. I suggest the hike be mre suited t the theme “Discver Chngqing” thrugh additinal activities. I prpse an intrductin f the architecture n Chatianmen Square.
7. When we appreciate the artistic style f the landmark, we can gain a deeper insight int the prsperity f ur city.
8. If the hike is rganized in mre details and in a mre supprtive way, it is sure t succeed.
9. I hpe that my vice abve can be heard and cnsidered and wish the activity a great success.
第四步 润色提高
1. 添加关联表达
Hwever; First f all; In the meantime; What’s mre; All in all
2.句式升级
Hwever, there may be further imprvement f the scheme yu’ve psted n the campus website, as I’d like t pint ut.
As participants, we need t knw hw lng the hike will last.
Only by ding s are yu likely t make it a success.
By appreciating the artistic style f the landmark, we can gain a deeper insight int the prsperity f ur city.
第四步 漂亮书写
【点睛】
范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，分段合理。本文句式运用灵活，运用了种句式。比如使用了定语从句Hwever, there may be further imprvement f the scheme yu’ve psted n the campus website, as I’d like t pint ut. 使用了nly的倒装句作小结：Only by ding s are yu likely t make it a success. 使用介词短语，让文章更加连贯简洁：By appreciating the artistic style f the landmark, we can gain a deeper insight int the prsperity f ur city.
【真题对点析】2
【2019·浙江】假定你是李华，经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括:
1.表示感谢；
2.回顾Alex对你的帮助；
3.临别祝愿。
注意:
1.词数80左右；
2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
Dear Alex,
Hearing that yu will return t yur cuntry sn, I feel a bit upset. But meanwhile, I want t send my sincere gratitude fr yur kind help with my English learning.
I still remember what yu have devted t imprve my ral English and English writing. Besides, yu als frankly shared yur learning experience with me. Additinally, withut yur help, I wuld nt have been a tp student in English and wuld nt have wn the English Speech Cntest. All in all, wrds fail t express my thankfulness t yu.
I d hpe that yu will have a bright future and that ur friendship will last frever!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【思路点拨】本文是邮件，主题是感谢信，根据写作提示，考生应用英语给Alex写一封邮件，感谢他的帮助。写作内容主要包括三项：1．表达感谢；2．回顾Alex的帮助；3．临别祝愿。这封邮件由三段组成：第一段陈述写信的目的；第二段陈述写信的理由；最后一段为结束语。
【对点模拟练】2
假如你是李华，上周在外教Mr.Jacksn的口语课上使用手机被老师发现，手机被收走。请给外教写一封道歉信，内容应包括以下要点：
1.表示歉意；2.解释上课使用手机的原因；3.提出自己的请求并适当表态。
注意：可适当添加细节使文章连贯；字数100左右；
答案
【参考范文】
Dear Mr. Jacksn,
I’m really srry abut my using the mbile phne in yur lecture last week. Please accept my heart-felt aplgy fr being s rude a student.
I knw any wrd might sund a made-up excuse. But I didn’t use the mbile phne fr n reasn. I was trying t apply t sme American universities last week and that day, I gt an ffer and they needed my further infrmatin immediately. Therefre, I had n ther chice but t try sending them a text message in class and that was exactly what I was ding when yu discvered. I prmise it will never happen again. But I d need my phne back t get in tuch with thers. Will yu be kind enugh t give it back t me?
I sincerely hpe yu can accept my aplgy and understand my situatin.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【写作指导】这是一篇应用文，要求写一封道歉信。写作要求只给出了大体的框架，因此具有很大的开放性。道歉信主要是向收信人表明歉意，请求对方谅解自己的过失。写道歉信时要明确不是找借口为自己辩护，而是承认自己的过错并提出弥补过错的具体建议和方法。此类信件的关键是用词准确，表达真诚。在写作时可以根据提示的要求按照三段式的模式布局谋篇。
首段：重述自己做错的事，表示歉意。
主体段：说明道歉的具体原因，应尽量详细描述做错事的经过。写信时应该注意在申述理由时要照顾读信人的感受，切忌强词夺理。
结尾段：再次表明承认错误的态度，请求收信人的谅解。也可以提出补救的办法。
【真题对点析】3
（2018·天津卷）
假设你是晨光中学的机器人兴趣小组组长李津，你的美国朋友Chris就读于天津某国际学校，他普在机器人技能竞赛中获奖。你打算邀请他加入你的团队，参加即将于7月底在天津举行的世界青少学机器人技能竞赛。请根据以下提示代表兴趣小组给他写一封电子邮件。
（1）比赛的时间、地点；
（2）邀请他的原因；
（3）训练计划将发送其邮箱，请他提出建议。
注意：（1）词数不少于100；
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：
世界青少年机器人技能竞赛 the Wrld Adlescent Rbtics Cmpetitin
Dear Chris,
I have gd news t tell yu. ______________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________
I’m lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Jin
【参考范文1】
Dear Chris,
I have gd news t tell yu. The Wrld Adlescent Rbtics cmpetitin will be held in Tianjin at the end f July s as t prmte the develpment f rbtics.
What I wuld like t stress is that it is lking fr new members at this mment. I wuld like t invite yu t take part in it, since I knw yu've just wn first prize in the Rbtics cmpetitin held in yur institute and have shwn great talent in designing rbtics. Therefre, yu are the mst suitable persn, I suppse.
The training schedule, in additin t regular training, includes jining in a variety f activities, such as participating in sme natinal cmpetitins. I will send its details t yu by e-mail. I wuld appreciate it if yu give us sme advice n hw t make it perfect.
I'm lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Jin
【参考范文2】
Dear Chris,
I have gd news t tell yu. The Wrld Adlescent Rbtics Cmpetitin will be held in Tianjin at the end f July. Hearing that yu nce tk part in a Rbtics Skills Cmpetitin and wn an award, I, n behalf f the Rbtics Hbby Grup, intend t invite yu t jin ur team in the cming cmpetitin. I am sure that yur invlvement will nt nly help us in winning the award but als enhance the friendship between ur tw schls.
With this email I als send yu ur training plan, abut which I wish t get yur advice because yu are mre experienced than us. We sincerely hpe that we can participate in the cmpetitin as team partners.
I’m lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Jin
【解析】试题分析：本篇书面要求写一封电子邮件。写作的时候要注意以下几点：一、动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。内容要点包括：1.代表兴趣小组发出邀请；2.介绍比赛的时间、地点等安排；3. 说明邀请他的原因，包括Chris曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖； 4．告诉他训练计划将发送其邮箱，请他提出建议。二、写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【对点模拟练】3
假定你是李华，是某外语学校的学生会主席。你们学校的啦啦操社团(Cheerleading Club)正在招募(recruit)新成员。请你根据以下要点提示给交换生Lisa写一封电子邮件，邀请她加入。
内容包括：1.拟开展的活动；
2.报名方式和截止日期。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
答案
Dear Lisa,
Have yu heard that the Cheerleading Club f ur schl is recruiting new members? I knw yu are interested in it. I am writing t invite yu t jin it.
The club ffers a variety f activities. Nt nly d the members receive prfessinal training in the gym every Friday, they will als put n perfrmances at the schl sprts meeting. Besides, they will cmpete in the Student Talent Shw in ur city in Nvember. I am sure it will be great. If yu want t jin, please sign up in the schl ffice r send yur applicatin t cheerleadingsciety@163.cm befre next Sunday.
Yurs,
【真题对点析】4
【2019·全国I】
假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要剧版中国画展。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括:
1.写信目的: 2.个人优势: 3.能做的事情。
注意:
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.结束语已为你写好。
答案
【参考范文】
Dear Sir r Madam,
I am Li Hua, a 17-year-ld teenager studying in Lndn. Learning that a vlunteer is needed fr an exhibitin f Chinese traditinal painting , I am writing t apply fr it.
I have sme advantages fr the jb. First f all, having lived in China fr years and learnt English since I was a child , I have a gd cmmand f bth English and Chinese, which is beneficial when intrducing Chinese paintings t freign friends. Besides, because f my familiarity with Chinese painting culture, I can get freigners and the lcals t knw mre abut it. Last but nt least, thrugh my effrts, I believe, I can strengthen the friendship between China and England.
I wuld appreciate it if this wnderful chance wuld be ffered t me. Lking frward t yur early reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，申请信。
【思路点拨】 无论是在学校还是今后读大学再到走上工作岗位，写好一份申请都是你必不可少的一项技能。这种形式的写作，学生需结合自身优势，
考生成文时应注意：1. 要点要齐全：(1)提出写信的目的——申请做这个志愿者；(2)提出个人优势；(3)表达出自己能做的事情；2. 时态：以一般现在时为主；3. 人称：第二人称为主；4. 注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅；5. 适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文档次。
【对点模拟练】4
假定你是李华，英国高中生Peter在中国研学时曾暂住你家。他回国后给你寄来礼物感谢你的招待，并在信中委婉表示对你家三世同堂感到惊讶。请你写一封回信，内容包括：
（1）感谢对方赠送的礼物；
（2）简要介绍中国人三世同堂的现象。
注意：1.词数120左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【范文】Dear Peter,
I'm s delighted t receive yur letter and knw yu are safe back. Thank yu fr sending me the bk, which is really a feast f western culture. I enjy reading it very much.
Since yu seem t be surprised at the fact that in China, three generatins—grandparents, parents and children, ften live tgether, it will be my pleasure t explain this phenmenn t yu. As ur living cnditins imprve, it's unnecessary fr several generatins t live t get her any mre. Hwever, many Chinese still tend t live tgether because they can help and care fr each ther. Besides, by living tgether, all family members can develp a strng sense f belnging, as well as strengthen their emtinal bnds.
Hpe t see yu in China again. Lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生回一封感谢信，并介绍中国人三世同堂的现象。
【详解】
第一步：审题
结构：三段式
时态：一般现在时
第二步：列提纲
第一段：问候并表达感谢
第二段：介绍三世同堂
第三段：祝福并期待下次见面
第三步：列举重点短语和句型
receive yur letter；a feast f western culture；be surprised at ；
a strng sense f belnging；as well as；strengthen their emtinal bnds
第四步：连句成篇
I'm s delighted t receive yur letter and knw yu are safe back.
Thank yu fr sending me the bk, which is really a feast f western culture.
Since yu seem t be surprised at the fact that in China, three generatins—grandparents, parents and children, ften live tgether.
As ur living cnditins imprve, it's unnecessary fr several generatins t live t get her any mre.
Many Chinese still tend t live tgether because they can help and care fr each ther.
All family members can develp a strng sense f belnging, as well as strengthen their emtinal bnds.
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，如hwever, besides等，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】
范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：Thank yu fr sending me the bk, which is really a feast f western culture. 此句为非限制性定语从句；Hwever, many Chinese still tend t live tgether because they can help and care fr each ther.这句话运用了because引导的状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
Part 3强化集训
【真题模测】
Passage1
（2020 • 全国卷2）
上周末，你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文，介绍这次活动，内容包括:
1. 农场情况；2. 采摘过程；3. 个人感受
注意:
1. 词数100左右；2. 题目已为你写好。
题目:My Weekend
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【范文】
My Weekend
Organized by the student unin, a grup f vlunteers went t Hpe Farm t help the farmers pick peaches last weekend. The farm is situated at the ft f a muntain, the sky is blue and the air is fresh. We were attracted by the beautiful scenery. There are different kinds f fruit trees as well as a variety f animals.
On arriving, we saw red ripe peaches hanging n the tree. Using baskets and ladders, We first picked the nes that were mst beautiful in clr, then thse that were ripe and sft. I culdn’t wait t take a bite, and the sweet juice went dwn my thrat.
I was grateful fr this pprtunity t get clse t nature. Nt nly wuld I be able t experience fruit picking, but I culd als feast n the sweetness!
【解析】
【详解】第一步：根据提示可知，上周末，你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文，介绍这次活动。内容包括： 1. 农场情况； 2. 采摘过程； 3. 个人感受。
第二步：根据写作要求确定关键词（组），如：pick peaches, is situated, beautiful scenery, fruit trees ,a variety f animals, Using baskets and ladders, take a bite, be grateful fr, get clse t nature, feast n the sweetness.
第三步：根据提示和关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。本文用一般现在时和一般过去时。
第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如 Organized by the student unin, a grup f vlunteers went t Hpe Farm t help the farmers pick peaches last weekend. 和Using baskets and ladders运用了非谓语动词；We first picked the nes that were mst beautiful in clr, then thse that were ripe and sft. 运用了定语从句；Nt nly wuld I be able t experience fruit picking, but I culd als feast n the sweetness!运用了连词nt nly…but…和倒装句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰，层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
Passage2
(2018·北京卷)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣，计划明年来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件，内容包括：
(1) 表示欢迎；
(2) 推荐他上哪所大学；
(3) 建议他做哪些准备工作。
注意：(1). 词数不少于50；
(2). 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yurs,
Li Hua
【写作指导】
本文为提纲式作文，文章要求写推荐信，为英国朋友介绍北京的大学。首先可以介绍一下写作背景（Jim对中国文化感兴趣，要来中国学习），表达欢迎。然后推荐一所大学，并简要介绍推荐的原因（如大学的特色，可以学到什么等）。再次简单介绍应该做哪方面的准备，如可以提前学习汉语，读点有关中国传统文化的书，了解中国的习俗，让自己更好地适应中国的生活。文章可采用一般现在时，人称可以使用第二人称。
【范文】
Dear Jim,
I’m s glad t hear yur future educatin plan in Beijing in yur last letter. First I wuld like t express my warmest welcme t yu and I am sure yu will have the mst unfrgettable experience during yur cllege in Beijing.
Learning yur keen interest in Chinese culture, I suggest yu apply fr Peking University, ne f the best universities in China. Its Chinese Literature majr is perfect fr yu where yu can be cmpletely saked in Chinese prfund histry and rich culture. As fr preparatin, sme reading in advance in needed like The Stry f the Stne while sme nline curses f spken Chinese can be helpful fr yu t adapt int the Chinese language envirnment.
I sincerely hpe yur dream will cme true and it’s my pleasure t shw yu arund in Beijing when that day cmes. If yu have further questins, please feel free t let me knw.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【亮点说明】
文章中巧妙使用非谓语Learning yur keen interest in Chinese culture, 使句子结构紧凑。使用定语从句Its Chinese Literature majr is perfect fr yu where yu can be cmpletely saked in Chinese prfund histry and rich culture. 使句子表达更完美；巧妙使用连接词while引出来中国前的准备，使句子结构对称。
Passage3
（2017·天津卷）
假设你是李津，与你以前的外籍教师Mrs Green 一直保持联系。近日她来信询问你的近况，请根据以下提示给她回复一封邮件。
1．简要介绍自己的学习和生活；
2．告知你已成为八月底在津举办的第十三届全运会的志愿者，并介绍为此所做的准备(如深入了解天津等)；
3．希望她有机会重访天津。
注意： 1.词数不少于100；
2．可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
3．开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：第十三届全运会 the 13th Natinal Games
Dear Mrs Green，
I'm s glad t hear frm yu. _________________________________________________
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Yurs，
Li Jin
【解析】 首先，内容要点要全，三个要点都要包含：(1)介绍自己的学习和生活；(2)告诉她你作为第十三届全运会志愿者所做的准备；(3)希望她重访天津。
其次，要准确并恰当地使用词汇和各种复合句。注意使用定语从句，非谓语动词等表达。在行文过程中要注意时态的正确运用。
第三，要注意上下文的连贯和语言的得体。注意使用一些表示连接和转折的词。
最后，要注意一下卷面整洁，书写工整。
【答案】
Dear Mrs Green,__
I'm s glad t hear frm yu. In yur last letter, yu asked me abut my study and life. I'm very pleased t tell yu that I have made great prgress in my spken English since yu left. As fr my life, I take exercise regularly and d mre utdr activities, which builds up my bdy and character as well.
I have gd news t tell yu that I have been chsen t be a vlunteer in the cming 13th Natinal Games t be held in Tianjin at the end f August. T be a qualified vlunteer, I made sme preparatins. I interviewed many peple frm all walks f life, which imprved and deepened my understanding f Tianjin.
I hpe yu can revisit Tianjin if yu have a chance. Lking frward t seeing yu again.
Yurs，
Li Jin
【典题模测】
Passage1
假定你是李华，想邀请你的新西兰朋友Kevin参加你校将要举行的“劳动周”相关活动。请给他写 封邮件，内容包括：
1.活动时间；
2. 活动内容（如：校园环境美化、校内垃圾分类等）；
3. 活动意义.
参考词汇：Labur Week劳动周
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【范文】Dear Kevin,
I feel extremely delighted t infrm yu that ur schl will hld sme relevant activities during the upcming Labur Week. I’m writing t invite yu t experience the great activities.
The Labur Week will start n June 10th and last fr five days, when we will hld varius activities. T beautify ur schl, we will plant trees that are definitely gd fr ur physical and mental well-being. Mrever, it’s a wnderful idea t srt garbage in an ec-friendly way, making ur campus cleaner and mre fascinating. There is als a labr knwledge cmpetitin which is s rewarding that we can’t affrd t miss it.
As fr the significance, we can benefit a lt undubtedly. Our awareness f labur can be develped. Besides, we will learn t cherish and respect the fruits f peple’s wrk.
Lking frward t yur favrable reply.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇写作属于应用文，主要是邀请新西兰的朋友Kevin参加学校举行的劳动周活动。
【详解】
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法。总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
写作要求：1. 活动时间；（the time f this activity）
2. 活动内容（如：校园环境美化、校内垃圾分类等）；（the cntent f this activity）
3. 活动意义。（the significance f this activity）
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
infrm; relevant; upcming; varius; beautify; definitely; physical and mental; as fr the significance; undubtedly; cherish
第三步：连词成句
I want t infrm yu that ur schl will hld sme relevant activities during the upcming Labur Week.
I’m writing t invite yu t experience the great activities.
We will plant trees that are definitely gd fr ur physical and mental well-being.
We will hld varius activities t supprt ur Labur Week.
It’s a wnderful idea t srt garbage in an ec-friendly way.
Srting garbage can make ur campus cleaner and mre fascinating.
As fr the significance, we can benefit a lt undubtedly.
Our awareness f labur can be develped.
We will learn t cherish and respect the fruits f peple’s wrk.
在进行造句的时候一定要注意时态和语态上面的问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1. 文章的结构顺序：劳动周具体时间和地点；劳动周的活动内容；劳动周的实际意义。
2.表并列补充关系：What is mre, Besides, Mrever, Furthermre, In additin As well as, nt nly…but (als), including,
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰.
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】
范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。范文开头I feel extremely delighted t infrm yu that ur schl will hld sme relevant activities during the upcming Labur Week. 既使用了一个宾语从句，又开门见山的点出了写作的主题和目的。此外范文中形容词和副词用得特别好，比如extremely和definitely等，都能够表达出作者的情感。 还用到了非谓语结构Mrever, it’s a wnderful idea t srt garbage in an ec-friendly way, making ur campus cleaner and mre fascinating. 文章思路清晰，层次分明，上下句转换自然。为文章增色添彩。
Passage2
假设你是某中学的学生谢飞，你校国际部将选拔一些学生志愿者，参与国际部接待学访团 等外事活动的策划和组织。你欲参选，请根据以下提示，写一篇竞选演讲稿。
* 个人优势介绍（如性格，特长等）；
* 接待学访学生的活动安排（校内，校外）；
* 表达当选的愿望。
注意：
1. 词数不少于 100；
2. 请勿提及真实学校名称；
3. 可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯；
4. 开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：竞选 run fr…; 学访学生 students n the exchange prgram
Gd afternn, my dear friends, My name is Xie Fei.
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Thank yu!
【参考范文】
Gd afternn, my dear friends, My name is Xie Fei. I feel greatly hnred t run fr a vlunteer f the Internatinal Department in ur schl.
First f all, I’d like t give a brief intrductin t myself. With an pen and active persnality, I have great cnfidence in fitting in with peple. Having a gd cmmand f ral English, I can cmmunicate with the exchange students withut any language barriers.
When it cmes t the arrangement f activities fr the students n the exchange prgram, I recmmend that sme typical sprts activities shuld be rganized, frm which the students can better understand and learn frm each ther. A culture shw is als a gd idea, ensuring students t appreciate wrks f art and get clse t a different culture. In additin, at weekends, it’s desirable fr us t g n visits t galleries, museums and special places f interest s that ur hnred guests can expse themselves t the lively city and get meaningful experiences.
I’m really anxius t be accepted as a student vlunteer.
Thank yu!
Passage3
省国际文化交流中心将组织一次各国学生参加的“儒家文化”冬令营（Cnfucian Culture Winter Camp）活动，要求报名者提交英文个人简历。假定你是李华，请根据以下要点提示写一篇个人简历。
1.个人基本信息（姓名、性别、年龄等）；
2.个人优势。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【参考范文】
Dear Sir,
Interested in the Cnfucian Culture Winter Camp, I’m writing t apply fr the activity.
My name is Li Hua, a student frm internatinal high schl. I’m cnvinced that I can meet all the demands because f the fllwing advantages. First f all, I have such a gd nse fr Chinese traditinal culture that I am eager t gather all the infrmatin abut histry and culture when I have pprtunity. In additin, when it cmes t acquiring the cmmunicatin, nt nly can I speak fluent English but I am gd at rganizing all kinds f activities because f the experience as a president in the students unin. If accepted, I will be cautius and diligent s as t live up t yur expectatins.
I wuld appreciate it if yu culd apprve my applicatin and please infrm me at yur earliest cnvenience.
Yurs,
Li Hua
序号
题型
真题
Part 1
解密高考
考点综述 备考建议
Part 2
对点解密
考点精准说1... 真题对点析1... 对点模拟练1...
Part 3
强化集训
真题模测、典题模测