专题22 书面表达---连词成句讲解练习

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“一分”是指分清每个单词的词性与功能。通常情况下，名词、代词或相当于名词的词或短语充当句子的主语或宾语；动词、动词短语作谓语；形容词担任定语或系动词构成表语；副词或介词短语作状语。
确定句子的主语、谓语及宾语成分（也即“主干”）
何 人做 了 何 事何 时何 地主语+谓语+宾语+时间+地点
检查标点符号的使用是否正确；检查主、谓语等成分在人称与数上是否保持一致；检查是否有单词被遗漏或书写是否规范。
1．今天上午7：30，我们在学校门口集中。 at the schl gate, we, tday, at 7:30, met. Tday we met at the schl gate at 7:30.2. 然后8：00到达汽车站； gt t, then, the bus statin, we, at 8:00. Then we gt t the bus statin at 8:00.3. 到那之后，我们开始打扫车站地板，清洁候车室座位。 gt there, after, we, we, sweep the flr, began t, the seats, in the waiting rm. After we gt there, we began t sweep the flr, the seats in the waiting rm.
4．我们帮助乘客提行李。 the passengers, helped, the luggages, we, carry. We helped the passengers carry the luggages.5. 然后我们8：00到达汽车站； gt t, then, the bus statin, we, at 8:00. Then we gt t the bus statin at 8:00.6. 下午3:00我们去敬老院看望老人。 went t, in the afternn, the ld peple, we, at 3:00, visit, in the Old Peple’s Hme. In the afternn, we went t visit the ld peple at 3:00 in the Old Peple’s Hme.
7．我们用零花钱买水果送给老人。 sme fruits, ur, fr, pcket mney, with, we, bught, them. We bught sme fruits fr them with ur pcket mney.8. 然后我们帮助他们洗衣服，搞清洁； helped, then, and , d sme cleaning , them, we, wash clthes. Then we helped them wash clthes and d sme cleaning. 9. 我们给老人唱歌、跳舞。 fr, we, danced, and, sang, them. we sang and danced fr them.
10．一个下午我们和他们玩得很开心。 with, in the afternn, we, had, them, a gd time. We had a gd time in the afternn with them. 11.虽然累，但是能帮助别人，我们都觉得很开心。 tired, but, we, felt , we, happy, because, thers, all, felt, we, culd help. We felt tired but we all felt happy because we culd help thers.
(2012年广西钦州)书面表达（15分）上周星期六，你们班委会组织了一次社会实践活动。请你根据下面所给的内容要点，用英语写一篇短文，描述当天的活动经过。内容要点：1．上午7：30在学校门口集中，8：00到达汽车站；2．打扫车站地板，清洁候车室座位，帮旅客提行李……3．下午3：00到敬老院看望老人。用零花钱买水果送给老人，帮老人洗衣服、扫地，给老人唱歌、跳舞，大家一起度过了一个愉快的下午；4．能帮助别人，我们都觉得很开心。5．参考词汇：车站statin；候车室waiting rm；行李luggage；敬老院the Old Peple’s Hme，打扫sweep（swept，swept）。注意：文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称，否则不予评分。
Tday we met at the schl gate at 7:30. Then we went t the bus statin and gt there at 8:00. After we gt there, we began t sweep the flr, the seats in the waiting rm and helped the passengers, such as carrying the luggages, helping the ld and yung get n the bus and s n. In the afternn, we went t visit the ld peple at 3:00 in the Old Peple’s Hme. We bught sme fruits fr them with ur pcket mney. Then we helped them wash clthes and d sme cleaning. We sang and danced fr them. We had a gd time in the afternn with them. We felt tired but we all felt happy because we culd help thers.
小结：书面表达如此简单
分清成分连词成句连句成文
巩固练习：（2011年广西钦州）书面表达(10分)注意：请在答题卡上作答。 同学们，运动使我们健康、快乐。今年广西第十二届运动会将在我市举行，请你以“Let’s d sprts”为题写一篇短文。 内容提示：1.运动的重要性。 2.你喜欢什么运动，每天你做什么运动？ 3.作为一名中学生，为迎区运会你打算做些什么？ 要求：1文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和所在学校的名称。 2可自由发挥，词数70左右。3短文开头已给出，不计人总词数。提示词：be gd fr, feel relaxed, strng, favurite, the 12th Games f Guangxi, clean, beautiful, friendly
1.提取：be gd fr 对…有好处 扩展：做运动对健康有好处。 成句： Ding sprts is gd fr ur health. 2.提取：feel relaxed 觉得轻松 扩展：运动后我觉得轻松。 成句： After sprts I usually feel relaxed. 3.提取：strng 强壮的 扩展：做运动使我们越来越强壮。 成句： Ding sprts makes us strnger and strnger.
4.提取：favurite 最喜爱的 扩展：我最喜爱的运动是游泳。 成句： My favurite sprt is swimming. 5.提取：the 12th Game f Guangxi 第十二届区运会 扩展：第十二届区运会就要来了。 成句： The 12th Games f Guangxi is cming . 6.提取：clean清洁 beautiful美丽 扩展：我们将搞清洁让我们的城市更美丽。 成句： We will d sme cleaning t make ur city mre beautiful . 7.提取：friendly友好的 扩展：我们应该对每个人友好。 成句： We shuld be friendly t everyne.
Let' s D Sprts I think it is imprtant fr everyne t d sprts. I like sprts because ding sprts is gd fr ur health. Ding sprts makes us strnger and strnger. It is als gd fr ur study. After sprts I usually feel relaxed and happy. My favurite sprt is swimming. I ften g swimming with my friends at the Weekends. I run in the mrning. I play basketball in the afternn .The 12th Games f Guangxi is cming ,I am ging t d sprts every day. We will d sme cleaning t make ur city mre beautiful .We shuld be friendly t everyne.